The Almighty System of the Great Qin State Master

I feel like your golden elixir is not even as good as practicing Qi.

The author in my mind (this picture is for entertainment only, please do not take it seriously).

It is suggested that the author can write about Xu Fu and let him go to sea for the Qin Dynasty, and attack those countries and create the four great inventions at the same time.

Overall it's okay, but the main character's strength is too low. I hope it can be improved. Keep improving!

Why is the current cultivation flow getting weaker and weaker? It is obvious that in the previous cultivation stage, mortals were invincible, with a lifespan of 120, in the bigu stage, they swallowed the spiritual energy of the world, and did not recognize the fireworks of the world, with a lifespan of 150, in the foundation stage, they took the heads of people thousands of miles away, with a sword that sent cold light into Kyushu, with a lifespan of 300, and split a canyon hundreds of miles long with a full blow, and in the golden elixir stage, the physical body is blocked by a nuclear bomb, and the spirit Self-generated Qi, life span 800, Nascent Soul stage Dan shattered into a baby, teleportation magical power, life span 1500-2000, the distraction stage is the stage when one's own soul is combined with the Nascent Soul, which is no different from the Yuanying stage. The lifespan of the integration stage is infinite, you can use the sun and the moon to cross the universe, you can take your body at will when you die, and you are invincible in the universe below the Tribulation stage. It is the Mahayana period, but it cannot survive and decompose into scattered immortals. After passing through the ascension tribulation in the Mahayana period, its own spiritual energy transforms into immortal energy, and the body transforms into the immortal body. The scattered immortals undergo tribulations every 500 years, and survive another 500 years and then undergo another tribulation, a total of 13 tribulations. The Mahayana stage is very powerful and has no magical powers. Killing a Mahayana stage is like swatting a fly.) Earth Immortal (generally this level is achieved by ascending to the Mahayana stage) Celestial Immortal (with a little privilege, usually as a small soldier) Jiutian Xuanxian, Daluo Celestial Immortal, Jinxian (immortal king) Daluo Jinxian (immortal emperor) deity, deity, deity, deity, deity, deity, deity king, deity (deity), etc.

Author, have you read the novel Da Qin's System Lies to Me in Xianxia?

Why do you feel that your golden elixir is not as good as that of Ip Man in the movie? Others can hit 10, but if you only deal with one person, you will be weak. If you don't want the protagonist to be as strong, you might as well not write about cultivating immortals.

The first ten chapters of "The System of Da Qin Deceived Me in the World of Xianxia" are very similar to the first ten chapters of this book. The writing techniques and writing styles are different, but the rest are probably 90% the same. Especially the contents of Chapters 2 to 5, it's okay if you haven't read that book. I am following up on the main one, and I feel the same at a glance. It's not meant to be an advertisement. After all, everyone is short of books, so it's good to have a book to read. 😁😁

I feel insulted when I practice fighting skills.

Author, according to the classification of realms, those who practice Taoism and immortality are actually cultivators, evolving to a higher level of life. The threshold of each realm is a change in quality and quantity. Even the most rubbish golden elixir, it would take thousands of people to fill it with Qi training, let alone ordinary people, your golden elixir is too watery, and there is not enough quantity to produce a qualitative change. How to break through the realm? On paper? Why don't you just arrange a qi training for the protagonist? It's really poisonous. Don't say that the bucket is short of water. The question is, was that bucket born with you? It's not just that the volume reaches a certain level to support it!

The protagonist is also an immortal cultivator after all, so he puts his status so low? ? Withdrawn

Suppressing the protagonist's strength is a failure, and it is also the biggest poisonous point. 😐

Introduce how you feel about reading it in that book.

It's time to get off work, happy⸂⸂⸜(രᴗര๑)⸝⸃⸃

Your golden elixir is not as good as a waste elixir.

After reading a few chapters, the subject matter is quite good. It's not like You Benxian Qin, where everyone ascended in just a few dozen chapters. However, the writing style is indeed immature and has the feel of a colloquial essay. The dialogue should be alternate lines and not written in the same paragraph.

Since your spiritual energy is so low, how did you get the golden elixir? Is it just the size of a hair or is it agglomeration of stones😏😏

How can a serious book club not have idiom solitaire? I'll go first: The unparalleled national scholar.

If you haven't written the realm well, even if you write about the golden elixir of national martial arts, it will be more realistic than the golden elixir of cultivating immortality.

If I can break through the golden elixir stage, will I be unable to fill up my spiritual energy? Breaking through the realm is the most difficult. If the author doesn't want the pig's trotters to be too invincible in the early stage, he shouldn't write about the golden elixir stage. The pig's trotters are still in the Qi refining stage. In the golden elixir stage, he has to fight for his life to achieve innateness. It's awkward to watch. Seeing this will dissuade 99% of the readers.

There's nothing wrong with the author's thinking, but it's a pity that it's too lackluster. You can fly, and you can't pretend to be aloof. Human nature is like this. The more aloof and aloof you are, the more others respect you. The more you push yourself, no matter how great your skills are, you will be looked down upon. You can use them every minute.

I don't know why I want to write about the revival of the spiritual energy of the cultivation sect. When I saw this, I knew it was over. I wrote it very well before, but it's a pity.

The protagonist's strength is too low, and the golden elixir stage is not as powerful as other people's martial arts. In the seventy-year-old chapter where there was a flood, the protagonist actually found a father for himself and wanted to provide for the old man who was a victim of the disaster. What did the author think? So weird.

I think this article is well written by the author. The writing style is a bit rusty, but the plot never drags on. This is very commendable. When I saw the one about gunpowder that produced gunpowder, I felt that the production of gunpowder during the Qin Dynasty was a bit too epochal. Sometimes too many leaps in the development of the country will create some imbalances.

Isn't it good for historical literature to follow the flow of future technology? I want to get into the Immortal Cultivation Stream, I'm speechless. It can obviously be solved with super science and technology, but it is just a fairy tale. 😁😜

This introduction reminds me of the Qin Dynasty's eating of prime ministers, the beginning of the Qin Dynasty's offering of medicine, and Qin Shihuang's good son-in-law.

Even if the golden elixir is weak, you won't be afraid of the heat!

You write that this strength is at the peak of Qi refining at best, and sometimes it is even worse than Qi refining.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The plot interweaving in the early stage is too stiff, I suggest readers practice their writing more.