Dragon Clan: Days of Future Past

Good guy, the style is imitated by Dragon Clan, but unfortunately the protagonist has not changed much. It is like a Dragon Clan novel with a different vest, but it is still not as good as the Dragon Clan fan next door.

In fact, it can be seen that the author's writing style is very good in this book, but the content selection is still a bit poor, which means that the author Wen Qing is suffering from a disease. After reading the entire thirty chapters, there is not much advancement of the plot, dialogue and character creation, and there are too many idle moans. This is not to say There is no need for literary youth, but the proportion of the content is not up to standard. It is only right to express the character through dialogue and plot, instead of exaggerating the atmosphere and psychological description of the protagonist in a large space. This will make you feel that this is a review of a book, not a fan world. Just like the book "If you have no money, you can only slay the dragon", his whole book has a very good narrative, without excessive atmosphere and psychological description of the protagonist and other characters, and directly introduces their characters and positioning through the story and plot. This makes the fanfic he wrote more like a world, rather than the reading experience of a literary youth. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is not very likable (even after thirty chapters, the character of the protagonist has not been fully expressed. This is the result of you mostly exaggerating the atmosphere and ignoring the plot and dialogue, and not letting the readers feel what you want to express). Your positioning is wrong. Generally, people who read Dragon Clan fandom prefer the protagonist to be cold and decisive in killing. After all, the perspective of the original work is Lu Mingfei, which makes readers naturally hostile to the protagonist of this kind of character. . . I believe that those who write Dragon Clan fanfics write with the intention of redeeming regrets, but if you bring your own sad emotions after reading Dragon Clan into the book, it will definitely not be a good fanfic, and it will be just a review at most. In short, you have only written thirty chapters. You can still revise and make progress. Come on!

It's rare. I watched Dragons in high school in 2014, and now it's 21 years. This year, there are two Dragons fanfics that are as good as the old ones. The hidden bosses finally couldn't wait to update, and took care of it themselves.

It's such a pity. It does have the feeling of dragon clan, but without Lu Mingfei's dragon clan, it is equivalent to no Naruto's Hokage and no Luffy's pirate. Not a dragon, not a Hokage, not a pirate, I don't want to

How can there be no idiom solitaire! I come first: move forward indomitably

Don't even guess, the heroine is an aunt

I like to read cool articles, but I prefer to read cool ones with IQs.

All the novels that I have been coveting for a year can be recommended. Is it almost cool? 😅

So, does the protagonist have cognitive impairment? When I first met Zero, I couldn't remember what he said. I remember she asked Renata to know that it was the little devil who rescued her from Black Swan Port, but if she didn't remember that sentence... It would be outrageous And in the later part, Norma didn't take a picture of the protagonist. The protagonist actually thought that there was really a surveillance blind spot instead of Fingel who helped him? ! Come on, brother, Long Yili Shutoku Mai relied on [Mingzhao + Bone Shrinking] to hide in the [gap between the Hall of Valor and Norton Hall] to avoid Norma's surveillance. Is there a surveillance blind spot in the dignified Kassel Academy? I don't quite understand these things. The protagonist is a person who likes dragons very much and doesn't see many people around him. How can he take it for granted? The writing is quite good, but the plot is a bit outrageous. After the school was invaded by Ning Qiu Longhua and the white-clothed monster fought, he was not arrested and tried by the school board. People like Chu Zihang in Long Erli were almost put on trial... Brother! This is a dragon! This is a controllable dragon transformation! ! This is a higher level of dragon transformation than Deadpool's! ! ! What's more important is that it's still controllable! ! ! ! ! Not to mention the school board, how can the Gattuso family sit there? ! It's been several days, but has there been any reaction from the school board? Anyway... I feel that the plot setting is a bit flawed Don't say I prostituted for nothing, I just gave a monthly ticket +100 reward today

Personally, I suggest that the author do 4k a day and try to save the manuscript as much as possible. This will ensure regular updates every day and at the same time ensure that you can get the starting subsidy after the VIP chapter, which is 1500 per month, which is a lot.

Although it's not good to say this, I feel that if the original protagonist has removed the dragon clan, is it still called the dragon clan? You might as well just be original.

Hey, another one enters the palace to meet the saint 😟

You are already Zero. You are not a green character. Zero can be regarded as Lu Mingze's. Everything about Zero belongs to Lu Mingze. What is the difference between choosing Zero as the heroine and Lu Mingze?

How did Dragon Clan fans sign the contract?

Are there any 2.4 Ones? Are you in a bad mood after being on the shelf for two days?₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎