Live Broadcast of Building an SSS-Class Spaceship

The writing style needs to be improved. The writing is a little bit different. The protagonist may have a mentality of a small citizen, but the words in the live broadcast, the attitude given by the country, and the stupidity towards foreign countries are really a little bit different. I hope the author can improve.

It feels a bit ridiculous. If every planet in the solar system really had civilization, the earth would be finished long ago.

The main character is too small and a bit of a noob.

I just read the book. Can the protagonist clearly distinguish between those who belong to my race and those who are not my race? His heart must be different? Everyone on the earth except our own country is an enemy, and we must either restrict or eliminate it. Otherwise, wouldn't it be funny if the black forest in the universe is not unified? Countries are different, races are different, beliefs are different, ideologies are different, and all kinds of contradictions are destined to have various ideas. Everyone wants more of this resource on the earth, and they all have small calculations and want to reserve something. In the end, it is inevitable that they only want benefits and do not want to pay. When you encounter an enemy and you want to attack other countries, it is like secretly defecting to other countries. Isn't it funny?

It's purely a personal understanding, don't spray if you don't like it Level: Novice Suggestion: Put your head at home and write this article Funny, it actually takes a day for an SSS spacecraft to go from the earth to the moon? Forcibly lower IQ

Why is science fiction written as fantasy? Bloodline Kung Fu? Want to know about nanorobots? What about the Eighteen Swords? Isn't it romantic to have a mecha with a ship-killing sword? The biggest poisonous point is writing fantasy novels under the guise of science fiction. And the layout is too small. The first few chapters have the air of a third-rate novel (what needs rockets, what engraving, and the air of a money-grubbing citizen). You can exchange rewards and points for it, but it is a failure. Selling lunar soil, live wire, Uranus, Neptune, etc., If you don't get money now, will it be faster? It can be seen that the author has no corresponding knowledge and uses unconstrained fantasy to fill the plot.

The creativity is good but the writing is not good. The protagonist and the national structure are too small.

It feels like the country's IQ is not good enough. You've flown into the universe and I'm using money to trade with you. I don't even think about the fact that the money you use to buy things there is useless and you're still an orphan. I feel like the protagonist is patriotic and helping the country.

In fact, it's okay. As long as the author changes the introduction to leading China to the universe, it will be much better. But to be honest, can't you change the routine? You can just ignore anyone. After a few days, there will be publicity, no money, and no help from the country.

It's a pity that when Chapter 57 was at its most exciting, I started giving away girls. The protagonist's IQ was not online, so I couldn't insist on putting it on the shelves.

Isn't it too retarded for you to write about the country? The protagonist can run around, but the country doesn't want to establish good relations with the country and still wants to deceive the protagonist? Do you really think the country is a fool?

I can't complain, since you, the author, have already become an immortal. Why are you still engaged in technology? Now that you have started cultivating immortality, you should practice well. Don't you feel good about becoming stronger? You have so many points to exchange for an awesome skill and practice it for tens of thousands of years at once, but are you afraid that you can't beat others? Are you still afraid of being beaten to death? With one move, the air is blown away in seconds, and you have to randomly replace a lot of transitional technology testing weapons. , I can hardly stand it anymore.

It feels like it's lacking a lot. Let's not talk about the relationship with the country. After all, none of us know. It doesn't matter if it's written a little bit like a small-towne kind of thing. But there is a lot of lack of logic, and there is no explanation for some things. I don't have much to say, but the author should do his best.

The style is low. Why don't you exchange for black technology, such as automatic mining? There are so many resources in space, you can't just rely on the system to exchange things.

It's a bit mindless, but if you have a lot of knowledge, I suggest you don't read it, and don't use your brain to read it. You can be sure that the author is either a high school liberal arts student or a college liberal arts student, and he basically doesn't read scientific manuscripts and writes purely based on his own understanding.

I have given up on books, leaving this pit to others.

Am I the only one who thinks it's disgusting that the protagonist stepped on Armstrong's footprints in Chapter 8 😅

So this is a short article that has nothing to do with the title of the book. Apart from the live broadcast, it is considered a space exploration type so far.

Because a pig's foot appeared, all kinds of aliens followed. So destroying the protagonist = destroying the aliens.

No brainer, I posted it on Moments. Don't be afraid of the country asking your family to be its guests

I am a big fan of this book and the author. After reading the book, I became motivated to write. I also tried to write a novel. I hope that interested book friends can share it with me!