I Can't Be Stable in the World of Full-Time Mage

This fanfic about a full-time mage is one of the best in my opinion. The portrayal of Shen Ming in it is what I remember most deeply. The writing style and imagination are good and not clichéd. And through the character Shen Ming, we emerge into a larger world of a full-time mage. Each character's image and emotions have unique characteristics. Among them, Shen Ming is the most like an ordinary person, but he has no choice but to slowly become stronger because of the things around him. This is what I like about this novel. This book also has some poisonous points, but not many are acceptable. It is still a very good book, highly recommended!

I always feel that this world is sick. When a city is in danger of being destroyed, no strong person comes forward. Yet, do you still have the confidence to be obsessed with it?

I feel like I can't burn it, but it looks pretty good.

I don't know why, the writing is pretty good but I just can't stand it... Is it because of the plot arrangement and the "coercion" element? Maybe it's my own fault, I feel that the plot is a bit mindless... In fact, fan fiction doesn't necessarily have to be mindless to pretend to be a slap in the face. The next door "Slaying the Dragon Without Money" is pretty good (nothing else). There are very few full-time fans, and even fewer can read it through writing, so why not write the plot more seriously? Work with the protagonist to change all the missed, regretful, and angry things. Let Instructor Zhankong survive, let Bo City die less, catch Sarang in advance, so that she will not be so unforgivable... So is it just me who is nitpicking? However, it is indeed difficult to meet a fan of "Full Time" who is not a novice in writing. I really don't want to see plots such as "Forcing Mu Bai to call daddy" or "Tang Yue calling the protagonist a little guy" (a high school teacher calls his student a little guy?!) This is not a purely pretentious and funny article...    You can criticize, just be more rational.

This protagonist does not feel that he is the protagonist just because of time travel. He also knows that the sky is high and the sky is high, and he is not stupid enough to think that the world needs to be changed for him.

To be honest, after reading it for so long, I suddenly felt that the main character was quite pathetic. Knowing everything, he didn't dare to change He was submissive and didn't dare to take it even if it was beneficial. He was afraid that it would disrupt something and make Mo Fan's little loach unable to grow Because he knew too much, he didn't dare to go out and take risks. Chance, I always feel that the world revolves around Mo Fan, but this is indeed the case In fact, every time I see the protagonist giving up something out of consideration for Mo Fan, complex emotions will always arise in my heart, and the more I try, the more pathetic I feel, so the protagonist needs an opportunity, or a person, that can make him feel that he can do it. Although the curtain has just opened, and after the exchange, I will go abroad or Qin Emperor's Mausoleum or somewhere to get the book, but I still feel that the protagonist's power is a little less, a little too depressed, it's really pitiful, really

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What's the point of having a single female protagonist? There's a guy next door who keeps a harem, but he's not the kind of guy who takes in everyone he meets. It seems like the original novel doesn't have a single female protagonist either.

I read the comments recently and found that some readers seemed to dislike what I wrote about the character Tang Yue. I didn't intend to blacken Tang Yue or write her in a disgusting way, I just wanted to express that Tang Yue is an idealistic and decent person. After the disaster in Bo City later, after Tang Yue has an in-depth understanding of the protagonist, her scenes will become normal.

The heroine is also Mo Fan. This novel is unusual. It's a harem story, and it's gay... Amazing, amazing 😰😰😰

I really don't understand, is there something wrong with this person? People with good talents are considered to be members of the Black Vatican??? What, those who practice quickly and have good talents are all members of the Black Vatican? Then why not say that those who have cultivated to the peak of the ultra-order and the level of forbidden spells are from the Black Vatican???

Already invested, I invested 500 points to test the waters. Come on💪

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To be honest, the full-time mage human race is really curious. Other people's human race will resist and defend against the invasion of alien beasts. At least there is not so much internal fighting. The full-time mage is curious. There are so many people fighting among themselves that the other side will almost wipe out your clan.

Wow, is that disgusting? The system still needs to deduct coercion points, and that crazy thunder has to absorb the energy of Xingzi, and the attack is not very high, but it still needs to be suppressed. Can this be mixed up?

The beginning is awkward. Mo Fan's father originally wanted him to drive. Wouldn't you write it so that the protagonist's grades are up to standard? And Mo Fan's father would help him go through the back door. Are you dreaming?

I was blocked at the beginning, and I am not in the mood to read anymore. I'm really sorry. I originally saw this kind of subject matter and thought it was good to be steady, but at the beginning, I was given a plot of crushing Mu Bai and calling him daddy. I really couldn't stand it anymore. No matter how good it is later, I lose my feeling 😅

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a novel that did not actively reveal its strength, but only passively revealed its strength. I didn't expect that it was not the same as the introduction. In the school test, it just pretended to reveal its strength. Is this stable? I just read it because of the introduction. I'm really disappointed. The content has nothing to do with stability.

Has Tang Yue turned black? Forget about being electrocuted, I opened my mouth just for the sake of justice, it's a bit poisonous

Although it is for free, I have to say that your new chapters have poisoned me. I can run into the Black Church in any bar, and I happen to meet the protagonist getting drunk. This plot is very poisonous to me. Originally, the protagonist thinks that he has not fully integrated into this world, how could he run away smoothly? Going out to a relatively unfamiliar place to get drunk, plus he can be said to be in a high-danger period due to the powerful magic stone incident. As a result, the protagonist, who was so stubborn in the early stage, was forcibly reduced by you without any sense of crisis. It is simply like telling others that I am not prepared and everyone should come and kill me!

It's so disgusting. Even if Mo Fanniang is transformed into a person, there will be no one left, mainly because she still accepts her. . . That's disgusting. In reality, your brother had sex reassignment surgery and became a woman. Would you also marry your brother and bring him a monkey? ? ? So disgusting

The God-defying Heroine Mo Fan

I came from the Himalayas and listened to Blood Rage. I felt like I had a lot of history. The male protagonist was tortured by women in the early stage, was tortured by the villain to the point of death, and was plotted by the friends. I couldn't stand it anymore and I just jumped behind. As a result, the ending is still being messed up. The protagonist is not subjective at all. He is comparable to a giant baby. Forget about the giant baby, he also gave various Manchu tortures. I thought the baby would be worse than dead all the way, right? The comment that he is weaker than Lu Mingfei is true. Lu Mingfei also knows how to explode in the end. I rarely read a book that makes me feel uncomfortable and nauseous.

This protagonist is more cowardly than the dragon Lu Mingfei...

If you like to watch the harem, then just accept Mo Fan and Monkey. Anyway, just mindless harem is fine. Those people like to watch it.

The biggest problem of the author is that the male protagonist has no strong mentality at all. He feels that he is still a baby with no power until the end. Compared with many protagonists, there is no strong mentality at all. He feels that he only wants to escape and give up, just like a pessimistic escapist. No one likes this kind of person, and the ending reflects this. The useless male protagonist

Tang Yue is 🐶 and so is the protagonist 🐶

The little brother from Shuhuang came to see me try it out

How does this show that Mo Fan is the heroine?

Can the author write a fanfic in which the protagonist travels to a world of full-time mage and becomes a teacher? I really want to read it, but so far I haven't seen any author write a high-quality book with a high word count.