Chaos of Supernatural Powers

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I'm here, sign in. By the way, let's talk about some issues. First of all, the subject matter is good, quite novel and attractive, and the writing style is also very good. However, I feel that the entry point in the early stage is not good enough and it failed to catch the readers' attention immediately. For newcomers, the first three chapters must have strong conflicts. Also, the characters in your book appear too abruptly, making it difficult for readers to get involved. I suggest you read more of the popular books on the list and learn from their beginnings. Of course, you can ignore the platinum books by great masters for the time being, and only choose some popular books by newcomers. After all, masters have a reader base, so it doesn't matter if you choose to slow down. However, when newcomers lack writing power, try to get to the topic quickly at the beginning to create a bigger conflict. The above is just my personal opinion, please forgive me for not saying it well.

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