My Pet Is so Reliable

The author's writing is quite good. There are really not many people writing traditional virtual online game novels nowadays. I hope the author can keep writing, but I don't particularly hope that the author will completely follow the old routine of traditional virtual online game novels. What is that old routine? The protagonist plays a game and does not die more than 10 times from the first chapter to the end of the last chapter! Even more immortality! Is this reasonable? ? ? When I'm playing a champion game, I can sometimes die more than ten times in one round. I recently read the book Halo Paladin. The protagonist can kill the group more than ten times in the next dungeon. Is this normal, right? Of course the protagonist of this novel is also a game master. So I'm just talking and giving my opinions. After all, the book is a virtual online game and not the game we play now. Finally, I wish you all a Happy New Year

The article is quite retro, and the routine is also quite retro. I'm just confused. It's so important in the early stage. If you have to fight, just let others come to you. How can you just accept the old customers who cheated you? Is this a studio opened for my sister to make money? It's a waste of time to cut off a new path in the early stage?

How do you feel that the introduction has the flavor of 2008 and the Renaissance?

The pace in the early stages is a bit slow... And there is a feeling that you can't take it back after you start writing. The pace of the first few chapters should be faster, the dialogues more concise, and the important characters should be introduced. Go straight to the topic and quickly introduce the story topics (contradictions, conflicts) to catch the readers' attention. This is a good start for online articles (after all, most online readers, including me, are not very patient)

The setting is not rigorous, and it gives me the feeling that an ordinary butterfly is stronger than a priest, and an ordinary vulture is stronger than a mage. An ordinary novice player playing as a summoner is definitely better than playing a mage or priest. At level 10, he can recruit three pets, and he can summon them instantly when the pet dies. And I have been emphasizing that summoners are too garbage and weak. Anyway, I don't see where they are weak.

Collection support! Come on together!

Good morning, Runde came to visit me and thanked my friends for their support. Let's work together to create a better future.

Well written, thank you for your support!

Everything that passes by you becomes soft❤️

Author, I would like to ask where are the pets in your introduction? When does the protagonist take off? Now I feel like a slightly more powerful passerby. But the writing is still good.