I Hold a Knife

I personally feel that the plot of "After Yue" is really terrible. A person who practices iron cloth shirt type and is beaten to upgrade his skills, and a person who suddenly dares to stand up for other people's family affairs. The transformation after being captured is too sudden and not well prepared. The relationship with Yue also advances. Brother, after people slaughtered so many of your colleagues in front of you, you started to have an affair in a few days? This conflicts with the character established for the protagonist in the previous chapter.

The prairie princess is also a stunning beauty with extraordinary talent. She is destined to have a date with the protagonist at first glance. Then you didn't have any foreshadowing, and just asked Yue to take the protagonist back and start the ambiguity. Looking at what happened after the protagonist was caught, it felt like Zhao Min met Zhang Wuji, it was still the kind of flash marriage, without any emotional entanglement or change in the middle.

The part about Yue is too poisonous. You could have written that he couldn't run away and could only wait for Yue to recover before taking him to run away, instead of an emotional scene. It's like someone killed your friend, but after he raised you like a dog for a few days, you really became Cheng Lu's dog. And if you continue to write this plot, I feel that you can fight for the grassland. After all, it is Yue's hometown. It's so poisonous to think about.

If anyone reads it and sees any bad points, please leave a comment to correct me and give me a direction for improvement. The score of this book is terrible, and the author himself has no shame in asking for votes, but I still want to improve, so if you have any questions, feel free to ask them. Otherwise, if you press F5, you will lose a few collections, which is really unbearable... Thank you...

What is the use of this heroine? A huge failure, most people must have been poisoned by this!

You think no one is watching, I have been secretly observing

Mu Hanyan's episode was better written than Yue's episode

After reading more than 30 chapters 😅 I want to say a few words 🙄 Put the cart before the horse, use a good system to kill monsters without writing 🤫 and just rip off useless things 🤫

Thank you for your support, this book has its first apprentice, applause👏

There is a female protagonist, not bad, save it first

The writing is not bad, I would say it is strong... Good review! I feel like my investment is stable this time. Big cheers for the author!

Come on, I highly recommend it. I update it once a day, which is too little.

Wait for a recommendation, it will be much better if you have a recommendation.

Take a trip here😁😁

The book was okay, but the plot wasn't exciting enough, it was too bland.

Um, let's just escort him. He ran to the grassland all of a sudden and ran away. There was also a scene of mutual love 😓

The upgrade flow is written crookedly and doesn't look good. I don't know what the author thought.

The main character is a waste filler.

Author, how many words did you sign later?