My Martial Arts Panel

A suggestion: I'm not sure how you want to develop the next storyline, but for now, I feel that the protagonist is not clear enough. For example, the protagonist always likes to talk about his invincible courage and the arrogance of a warrior, etc. But judging from the recent chapters, the protagonist actually bows to the powerful for the sake of his relatives. If you think the dandy is to blame, then just let the ghosts come to kill him, and then you agree to save his life but still have to do something in some small way, why bother? And even if the protagonist saves his life, there is still a question whether his father will keep his promise. After all, harboring rebellion is not a trivial matter in any dynasty or place. What if his father breaks his promise and gets fat? Will he continue to kill people? Is this considered a side issue? I can see that you mentioned in the article that if you ignore it, it will harm society, it should be to add rationality to the protagonist's behavior. But when facing the enemy, the protagonist insists on saying that if criminals want to be judged alive, the ghosts cannot do it themselves. But isn't the existence of this female ghost the result of human judgment? When faced with a relatively intense and sharp conflict, you can avoid it. For example, I don't care what grievances you have, but as long as it harms society, I will do it. Or, I only care about how much money I can give to the cheater by killing an evil cult. But when you add transactions, fairness, justice, etc., The contradiction becomes more complex and acute. This can easily lead to the collapse of the protagonist's personality. It's not that contradictions can't be complicated and sharp. On the contrary, sharp and complex contradictions can highlight the character's personality, but they should be used with caution.

Why do you keep describing how you treat your parents? You haven't traveled through time since you were a child. In the first chapter, you mentioned a time travel for 15 days. As an adult, the protagonist's views have long been finalized. Suddenly he recognizes a pair of parents, like a baby, which looks very awkward. Of course, there is nothing wrong with being fond of parents from another world, but after all, the main character is extremely eccentric and always describes his inner filial piety to his parents, which is a bit weird.

It's really uncomfortable to look at😣, I feel so purple

It is recommended to add more updates. It seems to be well written so far.

If you have watched Baili Qingfeng and then look at this protagonist, you will think that this person is really stupid and does not look like a martial arts practitioner.

He has accomplished so much merit and saved so many dignitaries, yet he is not promoted and receives no bonus. This is an unclear reward and punishment! Who is still doing this? If you practice martial arts, your brain will go crazy?

When I read the chapter "An Incredible Idea", I felt a little speechless. The girl next to the protagonist's cousin directly asked the protagonist's cousin to hand over the protagonist to Zhang Tao to kill him? I feel that the organization that can say such things should be destroyed directly. Just say to your face that your family will be handed over to another person to deal with, but will your hands and feet be cut off? Then the cousin didn't get too angry and said nonchalantly: Don't say such things in front of me next time. What's going on here? Then the protagonist didn't have any more attacks after hearing this, and was thinking about whether he should give this cousin a life? I just want to ask what is this writing about? Will the protagonist join this organization later?

I bet if this book reaches 1.5 Million words a year, I will give it to a Golden Alliance

It feels good to support me

It was an ordinary fight between brothers with no grudges. The protagonist directly kicked the brother and seriously injured him. This was something a young man who had just traveled through time for a few months did.

Writing pig's feet is too retarded. Nothing like being born again

The front line is decisive in killing people, and when you encounter human traffickers, you become a bitch.

The writing of the novel is okay, and the structure is okay, but the protagonist has no experience in dealing with things, and he gets into murder when his brain gets hot, and the way of dealing with it is a bit complicated. You can understand it yourself (killed his senior brother and gave his wife 2,000 yuan), and the rebellious IQ is online, but the way of doing things is not online. He doesn't kill even once, and he doesn't be vigilant. There are so many people protecting so many guns and he can't kill a single person. The author is definitely betrayed by Zhang Jin The movie you acted in was a fool, but you can still punch quickly within 10 steps. Since you have said that warriors have become lonely, and now is the age of guns, I think you are killing people like watermelons. Do those who hold guns have fire sticks in their hands? Also, the protagonist does not move from his uncle's house on duty, and does not tell his parents. You are sure the author knows everything. The author is definitely not more than 22 years old. He writes wherever he feels comfortable and has no experience in dealing with society. Don't use your brain when reading🙄🙄🙄

It looks pretty good at first. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has an online IQ, is steadily cheating in martial arts, and has strong combat effectiveness. The question is, the supporting character who appeared in more than 80 chapters, the cousin of the protagonist, started a revolution? It is still the kind of revolution, sacrifice, betrayal, tragedy and heroism under the early white terror. I felt no pleasure watching it and felt uncomfortable. It feels like watching a Spring Festival Gala sketch that starts with a comedy and ends with a sensational one. I plan to continue reading a few more chapters, but I have no choice but to give up.

The protagonist is purely a super virgin bitch who can do anything for any loyalty.

It feels like the protagonist can also carry a gun. Remote attack

A gang leader was killed, the gang prepared to conduct a thorough investigation, and then the protagonist said goodbye to his parents and ran away? The protagonist's era should be roughly similar to the Republic of China. How many people are there in a rural town? Isn't it easy to check the population flow? Aren't you afraid that your parents will be arrested directly? There are also extra points. I really can't stand saving them. If there is a temporary danger, I will add more points 🔨 After adding points, don't I need to use them to get used to it? Especially after the sudden increase in strength, are you planning to skip the adaptation process?

Forcibly lowering the protagonist's IQ and rubbing the reader's IQ on the ground 🤫

This kind of extreme book has to be unscrupulous. It is originally a refreshing article, so it has to be written with self-centeredness. When Pig's Foot wants to kill a person, he will kill it even if thousands of people plead for mercy. When he wants to save someone, he will never show mercy even if he has to kill tens of millions of people to save one person.

Do you know why many people don't think it's popular to get out of the big chicken tyrant style? Go away, you are all pretending back then, you are all pretending behind your back, who are you showing this to?

The protagonist is a bit of a virgin, so it seems that I still like to read some solipsistic novels.

Suddenly I remembered this book, and it was connected and cut at the end?

This book is very wonderfully written and full of content! The protagonist Hatano Yui fights Trump in the field, full of passion