Running a Pastry Shop in Battle Through the Heavens

The male protagonist's back

The writing is pretty good, but sometimes the inconsistent things that have already happened are forgotten in the next chapter. For example, the Mi Sandao was sold and so many people bought it, but only a little was bought. Xiao Xun'er's Advanced Fighter Level 3 was advanced twice. Xiao Yuan bought the mung bean cake once to detoxify it, and asked again. I hope the author can work harder and improve his writing style. There are also typos.

Is there any security guarantee in the store? I won't be beaten to death by a random passerby.

Overall, I feel good, but the writing is a bit immature, and there are some places where the sense of substitution is not enough, but it will get better if the author writes more.

Come on, come on, the sports lottery is very good, don't collapse, as long as the protagonist develops a store, there is no need to change the map icon, otherwise it will become a book about changing the map, upgrading and fighting monsters, I hope the author can adopt it 🙂

As the heroine, I only want Yun Yun and the Queen, and you can do whatever you want with the rest 🤭

To be honest, I think the original work written by Xiao Xun'er is a bit disgusting, just because an LSP with a soul of several decades touched her naked when she was a child and then kept licking Xiao Yan, wishing to bring down the whole world to him. It seemed fine before but I really don't like it now.

Single heroine? If so, forget it 😐

This is a novel that makes me not want to read it even after reading the name. Wow.

It's so good. The progress of the mission is slow, and the protagonist's realm is improving even more slowly. I estimate that this book will have to be longer than the original work. I don't care, it's at least 10,000,000 words long.