Yi Song

Recommendation votes have been given. I came here from the Zhihu answer that grenades are afraid of water. After reading these five chapters, I found them very exciting and worth ordering them all. Beidi Han'er is indeed a good entry point, with both a basic stance and scalability. I hope that the author can continue to adhere to the tolerance shown in Zhihu and write a good book that nationalists will not be disgusted with and anti-nationalists can also accept. As for basic skills such as narrative rhythm and writing skills, I think the author's writing is far better than that of newcomers and new books, and is catching up with the great masters. I would like to make a small comment, Ah Fei's young lady template is a bit stiff, or in other words, just watching the scene where Ah Fei is bickering with the gatekeeper, I feel like two elementary school students... I feel like there could be less dialogue and more action and demeanor In addition, it is okay to refer to other people's opinions occasionally, but you don't have to blindly follow some old-timers (such as a certain toad). I hope that as a transparent reader, I can give the transparent author more self-confidence. Also, I am looking for a book club, and want to be a member of the veteran group...

It's really good, but there are some minor flaws in some places. For example, in the fifth chapter, the protagonist deduces the identity of the two people and infers the identity of the princess based on their beauty and the whip in their hand. It can be justified, but I personally feel that some key evidence is missing. Also, the author seems to want to describe the princess's straightforwardness, but instead focuses on the princess's willfulness, which lacks a bit of cuteness.

Yes, it has the flavor of ancient times. At the beginning, I thought the young man from the Liao Dynasty was a pig's trotters. Fortunately, I endured it and read on. I suggested that the author change it. No one would be familiar with the braids because they were too ugly.