
Doomsday: Billions of Zombies
末日之亿万僵尸
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- Ongoing
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- 450k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The author is great, learn more from him Look at how energetic he is
As the first book written by the author, the author's writing is very good, not too toxic, clear and logical, and has no major flaws. It's better than some doomsday texts. Your article is mainly based on billions of zombies. You can use the system to enhance its content, but don't listen to too many readers and make random changes to the doomsday pot. Your novelty is billions of zombies. If you deviate from it, it will be the same old game of evolution and hegemony, which will be boring. Try to write according to your own ideas, and take the essence of the reader's point of view and discard the dross. Then write less about things you are not good at, such as emotional heroines. Many authors fail at writing emotional lines.
I've read about sixty chapters, and overall it's good, but I have some issues here. For now, I haven't seen the protagonist's military colonel status reflected. The protagonist's way of speaking, style and doing things are not the style of the army at all. If I were asked to join this kind of base, I would probably doubt whether it is a private armed base or a military base. The protagonist will definitely become bigger in the future, but not yet, so he will not leave the military system for a period of time. In my opinion, some of the things the protagonist said are things that a Chinese soldier would never say, and the protagonist's style of doing things is less like a soldier's style and more like a dictator. Also, I didn't see any plot where the protagonist, the colonel, communicates with the country. Since the identity is here, there must be a country. This kind of plot is not for survivors, but for readers to fill in holes. Also, the number of soldiers under the protagonist is increasing day by day. Someone among the survivors will definitely notice it. There should be an explanation for this, just a perfunctory explanation. Also, the words and deeds of soldiers are not like our soldiers, especially "words". Again, what are the benefits of being a soldier? For our military, that means being trusted by the people. Our country's army is the people's army, and we have a tradition called "the army loves the people, and the people support the army." However, in the author, I did not see any reflection of this tradition. This is the "dictator" problem I mentioned earlier. The protagonist has not yet left the military system, but he seems to be doing things independently from the country. The protagonist cannot and cannot do this. (This is explained below) Also, the protagonist and the soldiers under the protagonist have a poor attitude towards the survivors and cannot reflect the "military love for the people". Also, there are a lot of survivors who disobey the army. There can be fools, but not too many. This is one of the reasons why "the people support the army" cannot be reflected. Also, in my opinion, most of the survivors in the author's book have awe or even fear of the military. This is mainly due to the author's too little description of the survivors, and the words of some survivors in the book, which made me feel this way. This is one of the reasons why "the people support the army" cannot be reflected. Also, if the country where the protagonist lives in the author's setting does not have the tradition of "the military loves the people and the people support the military", the survivors should have a better attitude. Internal affairs are not only dependent on officials but also on the people. What if the survivors cause trouble one day? Repression? That might make the survivors determined to leave the base. Also, violations of the rules must be punished, especially in special periods. They may not be as severe as in peacetime, but they must be punished to scare the monkeys. Also, regarding the above explanation, why is it impossible for the protagonist to do this: the identity of the protagonist, the colonel, was obtained by modifying the information. Although it is in the end of the world, I think our country can still barely control it. Therefore, the country will definitely count the people after the end of the world, but now there is an additional protagonist with the identity of a colonel on the list. What does the author think the country will do? Unless the system completely modifies the protagonist's information and changes the memory of some state agency personnel, the country will definitely discover the problem; In my opinion, after the country discovers the problem, it will send people to observe the protagonist when it can free up its hands to determine whether the protagonist can be trusted. Think about it, what would the country think and do if it knew the protagonist's behavior? Unless the protagonist exposes or partially exposes the system and expresses his willingness to cooperate with the state, the state will not tolerate the protagonist's continued existence. This is the reason why I think it is impossible for the protagonist to do things in a "dictator style" at the moment. Above. I wish the author better and better as he writes!
The writing is good, although there are many problems, but I can still read it. The zombies mutate too fast, and they are also smart. Apart from the army and the protagonist who cheats, other survivors in the city are all cool. You set a limit for the crystal cores you can swallow every day. Don't let someone else take a turn and overtake the protagonist later, and you will be poisoned to death. If you want to upgrade to a higher level, you need a higher-level crystal core. Earlier, you set up the system to melt low-level crystal nuclei into high-level crystal nuclei. Therefore, zombies at level 7 are not as good as dogs at level 8 walking all over the ground. Don't make the survivors too strong. After all, there is no system fusion and the ability to upgrade the cores. If you are more advanced, you won't have so many high-end cores and cannot be upgraded. Just work for the protagonist. You can conquer other worlds in the future. Isn't it surprising that the system has the ability to travel through other worlds? The system must keep pace with the times. If you don't have the ability to travel through planes, you would be embarrassed to say that you are an advanced system. After all, it's good to fight in different worlds with the violent soldiers, but there is absolutely no way to control the combat power by just writing about the earth. It is easy to appear that level 7 and level 8 are not as good as dogs as I mentioned above I personally suggest that writing the earth to level 5 can be done. After all, if you set level 2 zombies, they can dodge bullets. For example, defensive zombies may not be able to resist bullets. Higher-level ones will be saved for new maps, so that the combat power will not be destroyed.
Vote about the heroine
Regarding the issue of the heroine, after reading novels for so many years, I feel that it is too heavy-handed to handle! Originally, I planned to write without a female protagonist, because the author himself has no experience in love, so I was afraid of being embarrassed when I wrote it! So I plan to launch a poll to see what everyone thinks: 1. No female protagonist 2. Single female protagonist 3. Multiple female protagonists 4. The protagonist is gay ... However, this vote is mainly about taking a look, and the final decision lies with the author^_^
Come on, I like billions of zombies very much
Take my arrow!
You can tell that this is my first time writing a book, and other than the immature writing style, everything else is quite good. The protagonist's character is also pretty good. I am also playing Billion Zombies. If you don't play it, you may not be able to find this book. Since the author chose such a subject, it is destined to be a niche. What's more, apocalyptic literature itself is a niche, plus there are hundreds of millions of zombies... Hold on. B station has a stand-alone Prince 666 up, which makes hundreds of millions of zombie videos. The technology is very strong, and the videos are all cropped and non-paused. There are many customized pictures, and the length of seven or eight minutes does not look tiring. There is also a full uncut version of several hours of video to learn techniques. Amway wave.
What should I say, after reading the two chapters about the capital, in my personal opinion, the country will not compete with zombies in metropolises such as the capital and the Magic City, because they cannot compete with zombies. In my opinion, in this kind of zombie apocalypse that can evolve, the country will shrink its defense lines in the early stage and strive to stabilize the northwest and Tibet regions. These areas are sparsely populated and have few zombies. Their terrain and climate are a big trouble for zombies. Moreover, Tibet only has to worry about domestic zombies. Because of the Himalayas, foreign zombies cannot enter at all. Simply put, it is easy to defend and difficult to attack. Our country is very courageous. Places such as the capital and the magical capital will definitely be abandoned, and the army will march to the northwest and Tibet as soon as possible. Survivors will be saved if they can, so as to ensure that the northwest and Tibet areas have sufficient populations. Don't worry about food, the country will never be short of food, not to mention that after the country settles down, it will definitely farm. Don't ask me how to farm, our powerful authors will definitely understand. Back to the topic, withdrawing troops to the northwest and Tibet does not mean that the country has given up on the central, northern, southern, and eastern regions. The country will still leave some people in these areas, and most of these people will be personnel of the state secret agency, with high strength. The few who remain will be various top scientists, in order to study zombies, analyze zombies, understand their principles, and finally kill them. (In the form of an antidote) Also, there must be troops that cannot be withdrawn, or that are trapped on the way to the northwest and Tibet. According to my opinion, these troops... Have little hope. Also, I read that in many doomsday novels, the country only dispatches land and air forces, and the navy is completely the same as air. In fact, this is impossible. In the zombie apocalypse, the navy will definitely suffer heavy losses in the early stages, but it will not be to the extent that it cannot launch a single warship. Moreover, if the country's situation improves, people will definitely be sent to take back the navy. This will be of great help in recovering coastal and island areas in the future. It is now 2021, and the navy has long been able to fight on land. Also, I have reason to believe that the country's communications will not be interrupted, at least the communications between the navy, land and air force. Everyone understands the horror of our country. Also, if the country has a large-scale killer weapon, the large-scale killer weapon does not only refer to nuclear weapons. All kinds of secret weapons are usually not used. It is not that they are not available. In fact, to deal with zombies, just one napalm bomb is enough for them to drink a bottle. What kind of killer weapon is napalm bomb? Moreover, do we need to be humane when dealing with zombies? By then, I'm afraid all kinds of inhumane weapons will be used to deal with zombies. (whispering bb: I guess the country has already had a plan to deal with the zombie apocalypse. I'm afraid the country has made countless plans to deal with various doomsdays) (Reality) Many novels seriously underestimate the strength of the country. If no accident occurs and things go according to the country's plan, then zombies will not be able to win at all. Things that are not even considered alive without intelligence or only partially possess intelligence cannot defeat humans. After such analysis, the so-called zombie apocalypse is actually not that scary. Unless the country collapses from the beginning, the zombies cannot win, and it will be difficult to rebuild after the disaster. So, my suggestion is that the protagonist should not be small-minded. What's the point of rebuilding civilization? The country itself can almost do it. I would rather use the zombie virus to soar into the sky and directly enter the interstellar era. (If you want, I will assume that the zombie virus is released by extraterrestrial civilization) This way the pattern is opened up. From a small home star civilization to an interstellar civilization, there is too much to write about, and it will be more exciting. Of course, these are just my personal opinions, and if they are different from the author's outline, the author's outline shall prevail. Above.
Some ideas
I have been reading a little bit now and saw the chapter "Human Nature". I have some thoughts about the previous plot of workers and white-collar workers asking for help from the protagonist's army. Since the protagonist has a military identity, when facing people asking for help, according to his military identity, even if he is thinking about how he can save others until he is not safe, he has to put two things in his mind. When the gun helps people kill two zombies, it should at least be stated to the public, for example, we have to prioritize other tasks, and ask the people to find safe bunkers to wait for rescue or something... If the protagonist's mentality has not changed and cannot assume the identity of the army, at least a little description of psychological activities can be added, so that it will not be too abrupt and blunt. For example, I wrote this: When the protagonist's team broke out towards the target point, a group of survivors asked for rescue. Because the protagonist was in an unknown situation and his own safety was in danger, he shouted to the survivors to find shelter on their own and wait for rescue. Of course, this is just my opinion, welcome to discuss I don't know if the author will see it, and I don't know if the previous plot can be changed, but I still hope that this book can be written well! There are many books about the zombie apocalypse, but very few can be written well, not to mention that many of them are disappointing... So, authors, come on! May this book be a god!
Soldier
Billions of Zombies has a background story 😰 If you play the plot, he has a small newspaper in the lower right corner. There is a plot that says that the urban population has increased sharply, and 99% of people have gone to the city. There is no one in the countryside, and no one is farming, so there is famine and chaos. Then there are riots and wars. Then there is a scientist who researched whether something was eaten or forgotten, and the riot was quelled. Later, it was discovered that there were side effects, and then he turned into a zombie. I guessed this when I first played the game. Scientists use corpses as raw materials to make food, and the side effects are actually prions. Personally, I feel that it seems to be several years or more before the battle begins. The emperor big brother summons you. Then, each level in the battle also has a metaphor. From west to east, there are more and more zombies, including the airport, weapons field, etc., And there is ice and snow in the north. I forgot what I said after the game 🤫 I will look for the archive for you someday when I have time. I haven't started reading the work yet,  ̄  ̄)σ recommends a single heroine. In fact, it's better to have a supporting role like a woman or a child. I feel that the work will be a little more dynamic, and a woman can also add a bit of fun. I like films without a heroine. I feel that it is easy to get bored.
Cute girl soldiers compete in competition.
After working hard for a few hours, it turned into a sea of zombies in an instant
I was wondering if I could demolish a section of the road while ensuring that the Dameng Bridge does not collapse, and build a suspension bridge on the demolished road, so that the rear base would be impregnable. The suspension bridge is usually lowered and raised when zombies come. Isn't this more stable?
Some people say it is naive. There are many naive people, but that is not the reality. No one in Europe or America wears a mask due to COVID-19, burning 5g. Let alone the end of the world, there are naive people in reality. I think the characters in the novel are less naive than real people
Soldier
The author writes very well. This is the first time I read this type of subject matter. I feel that the writing is very good. I hope the update will be more powerful 😍😍🌹🌹