Wanderers in Time and Space Among the Heavens

In the past, fan fiction and even unlimited fiction have been changed beyond recognition. As long as it is self-consistent and logical, there is nothing wrong with it. But now, every possible reason is used to find reasons to return the plot to the "formal" plot of the original work. Coupled with all kinds of ruthless routines and the culture of guilt-free plagiarism, it is obvious that creation is dead!

Another one for going home. The poor immortal emperor was beaten to death just because he wanted to go home.

I've tried it, I suggest you don't read it, it's a waste of time, the author's writing is not good, and he doesn't write carefully, the plot is inconsistent, the details are very perfunctory, there is no conflict and excitement, it is very bland, like a running account, boring and long, reading this novel is like eating a moldy dish

The writing is okay, but some basic common sense is lacking and I can't stand it! The servants were not imprisoned during the rebellion, and no bows were used in the official ambush. Why don't you just write about the arrest of the gods, and just write about the rivers and lakes? It's uncomfortable to watch the thieves.

Tianlong is okay. Uncle Jiu's world is too poisonous, it's Tingting, it's conspiracy. As the chapter comment said, there are so many worlds without beauties? It seems that everyone who comes to Uncle Jiu's world must add the scene about Ren Tingting liking pig's feet? It's 2021. As for the conspiracy, these are the author's own thoughts and I won't complain about them.

I saw Ding Chunqiu rising there. The world behind took a look. Good to get together and good to go

As a time-travel novel, the time in each world is too long. As a modern person, I traveled to the modern world and didn't find some technological products to take with me. Author, you are abnormal!

Is it so careless for the government to raid the house of a rebel, just to confiscate a few things and then leave?

I was so embarrassed when I saw this prince's mansion, and the prince had no name from beginning to end. As the real culprit behind the murder of his master, he was actually an unknown hero. I didn't know his name from beginning to end. Is this a good photo?

There are endless poisonous spots. Of course,,,, I couldn't hold on any longer and ran away

The plot about Yun Zhonghe goes from trying to kill him at the beginning to the end when the protagonist catches him and just throws him into a cell without doing anything and then waits to be rescued. What do you think, author? Isn't it embarrassing? Are you interested in writing a book?

I followed the original plot, but it was no longer a cool story. Talking about returning to the earth, but no actual actions. It's not mainly about improving strength, but it's about experiencing the original plot.

Why does everyone who writes Jin Yong's novels have to worship Wu Yazi as their teacher?

There are no vernacular books, no martial arts theory, no fighting descriptions, the plot is passed in one stroke, no ideological realm of the protagonist, and each world has unique knowledge. If you don't learn these basics, you can't understand even if you have martial arts, just like Mei Chaofeng. Knowledge is power.

I felt like a second world. The main character is a bit silly. Whose words. The protagonist believes it. On the contrary, when Uncle Jiu said at the beginning that he wanted to become a master and take on a disciple, he doubted the protagonist. Then later when the protagonist meets Liu Bowen's soul, he does whatever he is called and doesn't think about it at all. The same is true in Maoshan. Are all Maoshan good people? What others say is what the protagonist does.

The plot and writing need to be polished. The chapters of Tianlong are almost like a running account.

Guide DU every day, if you are sincere and don't bully me~

Why do I feel that the introduction is very plain and I have no desire after reading the introduction?

The writing style is not as bad as the comments, mainly because it is too plain😄😄

I've only read Chapter 19 and I can't stand it anymore. Without the original work, you wouldn't know how to write it.

I would like to ask for your opinions, because I have indeed seen many book friends find bugs or poisonous points in some plots of this book. I also thought about it again and again, and felt that some of the plots were indeed handled poorly. So I want to adjust and modify some of the plot while changing the direction of the plot later. So I want to ask you what plots make you feel uncomfortable. For example, the Yanziwu house raid, and some plots about Ren Tingting and the protagonist. Please feel free to give feedback. I will read every message carefully. I think if I write a book, I have to be more serious and responsible to the readers. I also hope that everyone will leave a positive message. I will make modifications while taking into account updates. But there is one last thing to say, don't talk about some dirty words, and give your opinions in a practical way!

Dear author, I am a person who prefers to fatten up books and then kill them. It is not that I have not subscribed. Please continue to work hard and add more updates. I will come back regularly to read, 😁😁😁

Hey

There's a Chaos Dao Jijue coming, why don't you go to heaven?

It's too poisonous, don't watch it... A plot that looks like a running account

It must have been cut, it's been half a month

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Furu-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

Did you forget about rhubarb?