Northeastern Fairy

It is very amazing, the overall style is clear, the early stage is not delayed at all, the rhythm is well grasped, and people can get into the mood quickly. Although there are only three short chapters, people already understand the story to be told, the historical background, the customs, and the details! Very unlike someone trying the waters for the first time! I believe there will be higher achievements in the future! Come on! Come on! Come on! ! !

First of all, the overall evaluation is that although the writing is not gorgeous and some parts need to be polished, it is still a good supernatural novel. The pace is lively, the language, environment, and plot are grounded. It makes me want to read more than 70% of the books in the review area. The description of key parts is simple but in place. Of course there are problems. To put it simply, it is not amazing enough. Especially the first few stories are too similar to the years when I was Mr. Yin Yang. Your writing is not as good as others, so it will be specially deducted (those who have not read that book may be better). In addition, the opposite of the fast pace is that the plot twists and foreshadowing are not too strong. It feels to me that everything is just to advance the plot, and the taste is not good. Especially the foreshadowing. I think that the scary thing in horror and suspense novels is not the ghost that scares them. The most heart-wrenching and essential thing is the foreshadowing before the ghost comes out. The unknown is what is truly scary. Finally, what about the mutual evaluation we agreed on?

Already collected, please remind each other and support each other when you have time 😜

Haha, after seeing the introduction and Little Fox Dual Cultivation, I am not sleepy anymore. You are welcome to comment on my works. I will read yours first.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~ If you don't update, my investment will fail.

When will it be updated? Well written!

We are in the same boat, let me cheer you up

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Happy New Year! All the best! Thoughts are flowing! Write with spirit!

Your book can no longer be voted for, I don't know why?