Evolution Starts with the Elf

The first few chapters are very similar to Beast Control, but it becomes different from the later chapters.

The second book I support from Qidian. I have ordered all of them. It is a very good book. Why are there so few people who appreciate it?

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My beasts are all mythical. . . The beginning is really similar

This evolutionary material is full of original feeling, it's amazing... Haha

I met too many women, and everything else was fine. It was much better than other novels where you compete in a random competition for dozens of chapters, something happens in the middle, you break through later, and then you win the competition, and the advancement is faster than others. It's comfortable to watch. Come on, the treatment of women in the article is better and better, whether it is the star, Gao Zhi, Han Fei, the one who arranged the formation, the teacher Lin at the beginning, even the two natal monsters are women, ugh~ There are too many women, and the protagonist will not think about love or anything because of the pressure of the abyss. The article expresses it when walking with a star, but it is like this, there is so much ambiguity, it is completely unnecessary, and it will arouse readers' disgust. The ambiguity is endless without talking about it. I hope the author will consider how to deal with these emotional lines! ! !

Xiao Baiwen, this is how you feel about me

My beasts in the front are all very similar to mythical ones. I hope I can have my own ideas and go my own way in the future.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist, and if there is, there won't be too many early stage appearances.

It's an assembly line book. I've read a similar book before, but I forgot the name. You can sign two of the same ones at the first level. You can find one by yourself, and then the college arranges to go into the secret realm to find another one. Then it goes to other schools to find resources in the same way. It's all the same. And sometimes the dialogue in this book feels special. The embarrassment, maybe it was better in the first one or two chapters, but when I went to the secret realm, it started to get too much. I couldn't figure out whether it was in ancient times or modern times, and there was something wrong with the name. Every time I saw Ling'er, I would think of Zhao Ling'er (I don't know about others). I thought that it might be better to call me Xiao Ling.

Is the plagiarism so obvious? They are exactly the same. Even the last names of the male and female protagonists are not changed. The elves in the contract are also the same. Can you change it a little? For someone like me who has watched "My Beasts Are Mythical", it looks very embarrassing.

Who read the title of the book and read it as "Evolution Begins from Small Sperms"?

The first ten chapters are dry, and I feel like I am just passing through the plot, and the book is in a wasteland.

Come on, I hope I can keep writing!

It looks pretty good, but there are some bugs. The demon warrior can only contract one demon beast? (Not counting contract termination) So you can still make money by doing the monster business? After all, there are few demon warriors, and you can only contract one, so you must choose the right one. So if you can only contract one, wouldn't it be better to choose the one with higher potential? Why do so many contracts only have silver?

I saw the pure water elf come in.

Bad review. . . Short and weak! I was charged for interrupting updates for such a long time, and I didn't continue writing! Five-star negative review

This author's book is not the kind of book where the number of monster pets increases as the protagonist becomes stronger, right? If that were the case, the book would jump easily

This book won't have a sudden ending or break, right?

See the latest chapter. I hope it won't be written in such a cliched way. Don't offend the younger ones, the older ones are all in this family. And the protagonist himself has a backer. Don't be so disgusting. Otherwise, he really deserves to be thrown into the street!

Is the author here? I would like to ask if there is a book club?

Elf - Tree of Life - Ancient Tree - Tree of Eternity, then start producing Elf

I don't know who will write this book or my beast master first... I feel like I changed a few names in the first few chapters. . . So weird

The Pokémon in the city are so weird

The introduction looks pretty good. Has the author given up? What a pity.

? This is not a pet book... It's selling dog meat instead of a sheep's head.

Can't it be updated anymore?😭

Author, will the protagonists of this book only have two natal monsters? There are only two male protagonists in the beast-control novel, which is not enough.