Treasure Hunt in Another World Ocean

The protagonist is a cunning, lazy, greedy, and ignorant person who has no common sense and hates others.

I've only read about two pages, and I'd like to give my opinion, could the author change the way he describes it... It feels like I read a long string of words in one breath, without pausing, and it feels awkward. I almost couldn't read the story without even seeing the plot. I insisted on reading the first chapter to see if I could continue, but this way of writing was really uncomfortable.

The author's subject matter is pretty good, and it looks pretty good. It's just that the protagonist's sex is so crazy that his family is bankrupt and he has more than 2 million in foreign debt and he still wants to eat whatever he can. Maybe his parents don't know about it, and the protagonist thinks he has a cheat and doesn't care, but the readers are angry.

To be honest, I felt like I was writing this. A fishing boat with a designed maximum speed of 16 knots could reach 65 knots just by changing the power system. I wonder if the author is confused or lacks common sense. Doesn't he know that the hull structure, paddles, etc. Cannot meet this speed requirement? It's like a bicycle or electric donkey that can only ride 20 to 30 kilometers. If you add an engine and reach a speed of 123 kilometers per hour, it will be weird if it doesn't fall apart! !

Don't send extraterrestrial things to the earth for nothing. If you accidentally create an alien species with no natural enemies, you will be dumbfounded. China's grass carp has become a scourge in the United States, and Amazon's piranha has also become a scourge in China. Use your brain. It's okay to catch some fish, but don't introduce species indiscriminately.

Pig's feet can send creatures from other worlds to the earth at will, and they are not worried about bringing viruses and dangerous creatures from other worlds to the earth, leading to the end of the earth.

Miss Zhou and Big Hei are not on the same level at all, and there is no way they can go together 🤔 There is no need to forcefully write

Chapter 130: Tell all your secrets, and you won't be able to read them. It's a secret, especially when the protagonist is still weak and unable to protect himself at all. One person has the resources of a planet, and technology that is dozens of times ahead of the earth. If it is exposed, how can it be good? At the end of the day, countries will restrict personal freedom, eavesdrop, and monitor. This is still the best result, and more people know about it. Once the information is exposed, other countries will ask for sharing, and the protagonist will be controlled by multiple countries, not to mention the country will protect it. The resources of a planet, and the technology that is dozens of times ahead of the earth in various fields, are simply not enough for one country. It must be shared or jointly snatched by the world. This result is the same for any country. Either they become stronger together, and one wants to eat alone? After a few decades and dozens of times ahead, will other countries still survive? You can be tolerated to be stronger than other countries in the world, but you will never tolerate a situation where a country is stronger than all the countries in the world combined. For other countries, it is an absolute fatal threat. There are three situations: the first is to share technology and collectively become stronger, the second is to destroy the protagonist and keep the world as it is, no one can get it, and the third is to jointly plunder by multiple countries in the world.

Looking at the pig's feet that are so greedy for an iPhone makes me want to vomit. Is that thing worth thinking about day and night if it costs thousands of dollars? Do you want to be such a loser? . . And the character, there is no free and easy feeling, only weirdness. . .

I got drunk in the first chapter and wrote the protagonist as greedy, lazy and bitchy. Do you want people to read it?

I think the last cooperative company was simply unbelievable. His wife agreed to cooperate with his friend to set up a company. What kind of company must it be? Besides, it was he who saved that woman's life in the first place, and then they gave him tens of millions of property, and he gave him hundreds of millions in return. Then their fishing company is completely her own, and she can be said to be a pickpocket. Why should he give his friend a third of the shares? If he doesn't give it, it seems like he still owes her. You can definitely open a separate company.

There's something wrong with it. I open the space door randomly and don't care about it.

It's obviously supposed to be a fun article, but I don't know why I feel more and more frustrated as I read it. I feel that the people around the protagonist are the kind of people who can't take advantage of themselves, and the protagonist is particularly generous in sharing.

The more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became, and the more I watched, the more I felt aggrieved. . .

I leave it to the country to find some sort of national secrecy agency. Do you know that spies exist? Hey, with such a high IQ, can you be safer? . . And that company's shares. . Why did you bring that rich girl with you? It makes no sense. The joint-stock system is to avoid risks, but this is a business where he can make sure profits without losing money. I don't understand why he has to give money to others. Maybe I am not mature enough. . Why

The subject matter is good, but the character of the protagonist is not well developed. Why should all the secrets be exposed and he doesn't care about anything at all?

Some book friends are right, the protagonist is a lamb who is under one year old.

This protagonist fails to be portrayed and makes people unlikable

After reading a few chapters I just couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is so careless and loves to play. The gold finger is too big and there is no sense of achievement in reading at all. It's like a bowl of abalone rice with a handful of sand thrown in, and the teeth are bad.

In one sentence, Adou cannot be helped, the protagonist is too useless, the character is too bad, the golden finger is in vain

There is a novel about a pig's trotters getting a world, and then raising cattle and growing vegetables, This novel is about getting a world, and then catching fish, It's so imaginative, I want to have a spaceship, and I will definitely deliver food.

The subject matter is really good, but the writing is terrible. A heartless male protagonist who doesn't even know what to do. A 19-year-old child is always being treated like a 10-year-old child, which is tiring.

Don't look, there are poisons everywhere! ! ! ! ! !

Why is a good book mixed with so much water?

The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility (×) The greater the ability, the greater the power, the greater the responsibility (✓) Equality of rights and responsibilities rather than equivalence of abilities and responsibilities. If you enjoy the power, you must bear responsibility, but if you do not enjoy the power, then the responsibility will only be a moral advocacy, not even a restriction.

The author's writing is so clumsy, with one main text and ten sentences explaining the number of words, the idea is quite good.

If you don't want to give money to others when you start a company, and because you are too embarrassed to help others, you don't need the money from this investment company. You can just go to another world and pick up some random things to start a company.

As for the wounds on your body, your clothes and pants are all used up. No one saw you all the way home, and you were even disturbed and ran away.

The subject matter is great, but the protagonist is just a 250! Don't write with this ability!

Don't take it too seriously, otherwise I always feel like you are all here to attack this book. (To be honest, it's just a novel. Is it really okay for you to be so "serious"? [I always feel like you are all here to attack the author of this book because he has not joined a trade union])