My Sister Can't Be a Cultivator

I took a look, it's pretty good. I've collected it and will update it soon.

You're writing a book again. You're drunk. The last one was so good, why didn't you write it again?

This sister has a bit of an unpleasant personality

I don't quite understand the last point, I'll give it a try

My sister can't be that cute

Update soon, we promised two chapters a day 🤫

Ah, there haven't been any updates in the past few days, are you stupid?

It's a bit confusing. Although it looks very good, I read Chapter 6 and basically said, you listen to me, I don't listen, I don't listen, and I finished the chapter like this.

I really hope everyone will support me, but if you have any questions, please feel free to ask them. I will work hard to develop towards excellence.

The story is pretty good, but the dialogue is too wordy.

7 8 Was read in less than 1 minute 😅 My sister went to stay at a friend's house for one night. The protagonist originally wanted to ask questions and was persuaded in a few words. After he came back, there was nothing.

The writing style still needs to be improved 😅 It's really too wordy.