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I read the first chapter of AbandonedBook
When will the new book be released
Completed the first chapter, the pitfall for two people to meet!
The prototype of the heroine Zhuang Rui
The prototype of the heroine Zhuang Dafei Representative works: "I Don't Want to Be Friends with You", "Hedgehog Girl"
Why is there no one? The first one hahahaha
No need to ask, you will know it when you see Tony in the first chapter
This book has a good idea and the plot is okay, but the paragraphs are too dense. Just like a junior high school composition, one chapter is divided into three or five large paragraphs. It looks too compact and leaves too little time for thinking, so it makes me feel very confused. Also, apart from the protagonists, there are too few portrayals of other people, making it difficult for people to make connections. This way, there is no impression at all and they are just passers-by, A, B, C and D. My writing style seems to be okay. I just want to learn some advice from a master about my writing habits.
My imagination is really weird haha 🤭 Who is the prototype of the heroine Hu Rui🙄