The Real Heiress Farms Among the Stars

Oh my god, the author's Mandarin is probably not standard and has an accent. He said that "making money" appeared many times. At first, I thought that the kid was going to make money. Only when I related the context later did I realize that it was about making money~!!!

The sentences are not fluent, there are too many words, too few words, and typos. It is another article that requires mental supplementation to read. The author does not edit the text at all. There is also a profession called "goddess", which is a very neurotic article.

There are too many typos, which affects reading

When I hear and see, it appears in almost every paragraph. Do you want to make up the word count?

The author needs to control it. It's bad to use too many different kinds of "times" and "get up". I listened to the book through audio and it was really annoying to hear these words appearing repeatedly.

This type of subject matter is really good. However, there are many places where the author's sentences don't make sense. You can't understand it if you listen with audio. There are too many spoken words. The words "at this time" appear frequently.

The writing is good! The content is great! But there are too many typos! There are also many words that are reversed! Then the expression ability is too weak! I was reading and deciphering words on my own! The article is not reviewed after it is written! It's such a good idea, it's a pity

I hate the text where the golden finger is too big, I don't like it!

I've only read Chapter 9, haha ​​😅 There are too many typos, it's like a machine getting stuck and not flowing smoothly. So many people say. The author was unmoved. 😅 Call the author here, call the author, please reply if you see it.

The name appears so many times that Zhao Shuishui can be replaced by the word "sister". The protagonist can use her. It sounds too tedious and tiring.