Sir, Your Vest Fell Off Again

Could this Bai Zhi be the one who received his box lunch within ten minutes of his appearance in Da Qin Fu?

I first read the introduction and thought it was an interesting book, and then added it to my bookshelf. I just started reading it yesterday, and after reading more than ninety chapters, I have to say that the author is really good at it! I wrote 20 chapters for a breakthrough, but the plot progressed unnecessarily slowly. Reviews from book friends said it was all watery. Doesn't the author know how to change it? Wouldn't it advance the plot faster? It's okay to read a few chapters of Shui Shui, but who can read Tiantian Shui? The most satisfying thing for me is driving with idioms. It's okay once in a while, but you have them in every chapter! It's really boring after watching it too much, and it's not interesting at all! I hope the author can read the comments from our readers! ! ! ! ! 😡😡😡

The background is good, very watery, not rigorous, and the whole novel is very unserious, without the seriousness of ordinary historical novels. It feels like an urban novel from the History Channel, but overall it is tepid and worth reading 😁.

How to say it? The author's writing style is not refined enough, that is, it is more wordy. Although it can be described in detail, when describing the fighting scene, it also lacks room for the reader's imagination, which makes it difficult to resonate with the readers. For example, "the crowd of swords trembled before the crowd arrived" and "all the swords trembled before the crowd arrived" are different. The former leaves more room for the reader's imagination and is more resonant.

Madam, your vest fell off again

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, why don't they change it soon?

It's so vicious. First of all, it doesn't kill women. It forgives all bad things. There are also some who are obviously capable but pretend to be fooled by others. And as long as it's a female, they all like the male protagonist. There are no tricks and a lot of cleverness. In the end, it looks embarrassing. It's like a clown. Without the halo of pig's feet, it's really useless.

The character setting of the male protagonist is really different. It doesn't look like someone who can use a vest to raise one (several) factions. Basically, no information can be obtained. Several factions have reached a certain scale. As a result, he doesn't know what happened to the protagonist and can't get any information. What is this faction? , And was fooled around by a shemale. The conflict between heaven and man was too far-fetched. He said that he wanted to keep a low profile while wearing a vest, but he has never done anything low-key. Even Teacher Ying Zheng could agree casually, and his father knew that he was hiding his strength. The male protagonist has such ideological consciousness and is still practicing Confucianism. How can he just recite a few poems? ? That's not the male protagonist's thoughts at all. How can he get power from his thoughts, and write a thousand-word essay, and it's outrageous if he can't write it. This has become getting power from words. If he writes it, it will be his. This is too natural. The male protagonist's character is not suitable for his talent at all. He is not even as good as Long Aotian's cool and domineering character. It is a cool article in itself, but the result is not pleasant at all.

Just hold on, if it really doesn't work, just write a little bit every day and put it up, don't force yourself. You can practice writing first. Not everyone can write very fast or very well as soon as they start. The world in everyone's mind is different, and the protagonist's situation and personality in their mind are also different. For every writer, writing is actually showing the world in his mind to others. In this case, the author's writing style is very important, so if you practice your writing well at the beginning and stick to it later, more people will read the book and experience your world. So keep at it. It's normal for new people to write new books, so don't be discouraged. Although I prefer the imagination of the previous book, your book is also good. Just pay attention to the rhythm and control of the subsequent world, and try not to spread the story too big, as it is easy to lose control. Finally, I would like to emphasize that I am female 😄 and I just like to read books about male videos, hehe😬

Damn it, can the author write more? It's too slow and even the hand is broken 😡

Which school of Confucianism does the protagonist belong to? There were eight schools of Confucianism during the Warring States Period. Not to mention that they were all the same, the internal fighting among Confucianists was second only to the conflict between Confucianism and Mohism. Even if you copy the setting, you still have to complete the logic for me according to the setting of the times. Confucianism is not unified, and even if these scholars are all Confucianists, is it possible that Taoist soldiers, Mo Yin and Yang, do not need to study?

Low EQ: JB is so poisonous, so JB water is poisonous, you are the devil👴 High EQ: This book is really unflattering, I will keep it for ten years

The book is a good book, and the writing is top-notch, but it is not suitable for people who are impatient. After reading more than 100 chapters, I don't feel that it is any fun. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and there are many girls, but it is not fun. The plot seems to be advanced, but I feel that there is no real sense. It is a bit tiring to read.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt very strange. After all, the background is the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. Did the Confucian scholars in it think too highly of Confucianism? After all, it was an era when a hundred schools of thought contended, each with its own merits. After reading the first few chapters, I felt that Confucianism was the dominant one. Can anyone explain it to me?

😅 Qidian has read a few books about this kind of vest, and why do all of them put the rookie vest on the surface? After more than ten years, the routine of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is still enduring.

It is recommended outside that the protagonist's father is Bai Qi, not his father? Even if you push it, it will be wrong.

Bai Zhang had the potential to become a god, and he pretended to be just right, which was a lot of fun. After a hundred chapters, it started to go down the western slope, and B stopped pretending, and started to play intrigues, grievances, and hatred. Alas, it was so wonderful to learn from the sage system of Confucianism and Taoism that I stopped writing it later. I was drunk too. Isn't it nice to pave the way with poems and pretend to slap him in the face? The shop is so big and the waistcoat is almost exposed before it even starts. . I really don't know what the author was thinking.

Bai Zhi

The author hopes to add some details to me First of all, the author explained that this is a fiction. Since it is a fiction, there is no need to rely on history at all, just with the help of names. First of all, let's talk about historical Confucianism. Confucianism is divided into many types of Confucianism. Confucius is just the sage of Confucianism. During the Warring States Period, Confucianism was just a modest school, and the kings of various countries did not like it. Because countries need to make progress, and Confucianism is too ignorant of the people. It only talks about benevolence and righteousness, and benevolence and righteousness can become hypocrisy. The more famous academic schools of urban governance at that time were Legalism, Confucianism, Mohism, etc., And these schools were compatible with other academics. After the unification of the Han Dynasty, the people of various countries were more enterprising and difficult to control. Therefore, the Han Dynasty respected Confucianism and integrated some of the essence of other academics into Confucianism. Therefore, Confucianism after the Han Dynasty is no longer Confucius' Confucianism. Later dynasties were divided into many types of Confucianism. But we always like to attribute all academic achievements to Confucianism. For example, Confucianism governs people's thoughts, military strategists and political strategists fight for the country, Legalism becomes the law of the country, farmers, Mohists, etc. Create life for people. But we always give Confucianism the credit for the contributions of other academics. For example, Confucian generals are not first Confucians and then generals, but first military strategists and strategists and then Confucianists. Confucianism can be done without, but other academics cannot be done without.

Confucian scholar? Think about what went wrong.

Ink, let's treat this copy as the main writer. I have forgotten the original one, a copy has been out of date for so long. It would be nice to die anywhere, just change roles

The plot drags and is a bit long-winded, and the protagonist's pretentiousness is a bit awkward.

Two tickets, please add more

The writing is indeed good, but the plot is a bit bland. Chapter 60 has not yet unfolded the plot. To put it simply, it just lacks a little bit of fun.

Good luck, good luck, the author has something, don't be disturbed by other comments, just write like this. Don't be disappointed like me. There is only one small problem in the end. Use less punctuation marks. . . Use it more...! It will get better, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's completely cool🤫🤫🤫

No wonder it's so popular because I don't even know the basic dynasty history. I was so embarrassed watching it

This book is very beautiful and the writing is great! Just maintain this level. Absolutely a god! Come on!

Keep up the two updates a day, keep up the good work. This time it started well. I hope you can get good results from this book

Come on, I'm already hungry for the first-order tickets. You'll know by looking at my book pursuit this morning!