Little Taoist Priest Who Travels Through All Realms

Listening to the book party, after listening to 4 chapters, my mind was filled with Uncle Jiu, Caiyuan, Awei, and I paused every time I said it, and I almost collapsed.

The sentences are not fluent, don't write in the first person

This introduction, are there any connection between cultivating Taoism and Douluo?

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Brother, there is a problem with your road section, and there is still decomposition. And your entire interpretation is a bit tiring to read. Those who are familiar with it can use software or study systematically by themselves. The final paragraph of the composition🤭

The plot is too fast-paced and the characters are not detailed enough. I hope the author can read Zhutianliu novels written by other authors.

The writing style needs to be improved, the handling of dialogue in paragraphs is poor, but the story is okay. I just don't like walking around Maoshan to drive corpses and practice them. Moreover, Under One Person is not at the same level as Jiu Shu World, and the emphasis is also different, but the techniques are actually the same. 😅 Since you are of the same lineage, you cannot directly exchange the skills from the Heavenly Master or others. I'm just suggesting. 🤔

This 😥, in the words of a Chinese teacher, means there is no description of environment, description of characters, or description of personality. I hope your writing skills will improve.

The so-called Chinese Valentine's Day is a festival where lovers are as numerous as dogs everywhere, and one pair is a pair (~~