Mechanical Flesh

Basically, Ant's books belong to the series of good books that are not popular. Let me analyze the reasons first: First of all, Ant is a professional eunuch. How many of the six books are complete? It was okay in the past, but now, if the book is less than 1 million words, readers will subconsciously think it is a eunuch's work. This Ant is a million-word book, and it's a top-notch one. The important thing is that it's poorly finished. The ending is extremely unpalatable, and the subject matter is not good. If you write a virtual world about traveling through an alien plane, the results will not be so bad. The ending is disgusting, just like a ghost movie. The process seems okay, but in the end, there is a line that everything is the fantasy of a mental patient or a vegetative person is dreaming and being hypnotized. What is the difference between this and taking off his pants to fart? It's disgusting! Judging from the process, the content of Ant's million-dollar book is estimated to be only one-third, and there is still much more that can be written later, but Ant just cut it off halfway. You said that if you write an open ending, readers will have opinions, and it probably won't be too heavy! But as for the ending of this ant, as long as those who knew the ending in advance, probably not many would be willing to see it, it was so disgusting! Secondly, this ant eunuch has appeared so many times that readers have no sense of security and dare not read his books. No matter how good your writing is, readers dare not read it. Where do you get the recommendation votes and subscriptions? The eunuch has lost his character! Ant's character is probably almost gone. Please give readers some confidence! I suggest you start over, change your pen name, and write a book worth over a million dollars. No matter what the results are, if it doesn't suck, if you write another book, the results of your second book will be much better than the first one!

Great writing, keep it up😆😆😆

Should the author follow the original Zhutian stream, incarnate a conceptual life form and a mechanical civilization, and gradually sublimate civilization and reach transcendence through continuous analysis of the rules of the world? At the beginning, you can first incarnate as a nanorobot in the Terminator, and then strengthen it to the Transformers and start to transform from one to ten thousand, just like the source of fire that keeps detonating troops and inventing various black technologies, and then gradually transforming into a conceptual life form to prove the truth through machinery Because I don't see much in the technology category, this is the only way I can think of it, I hope you can adopt it

This book is called Mechanical Flesh. As a result, it does not transform itself into a machine in the mechanical direction, nor does it have a mechanical legion. It does not have the ability to control metal like Magneto, and it does not equip itself with tentacles, eyes, big wings or anything like that in the flesh direction. You just keep strengthening your attributes. What's the difference between you and a reckless fighter?

It's not surprising that the protagonist has enemies, because it's impossible for everyone to like you. One enemy is normal, two enemies are normal, three or four are normal, but do you have too many enemies here? The protagonist has no time to rest. No matter what level the protagonist is, there will always be enemies that are higher than him. Then it will always be this routine, crazy matryoshka. As described above, level 4 is so powerful and awesome that you cannot offend easily. When the protagonist reaches this level, immediately put on a higher level one and continue to suppress the protagonist. . . I'm speechless, so what's the difference between his level and the civilians back then?

I'm very baffled. The protagonist's behavior in the past is more acceptable to me. He doesn't like to meddle in other people's affairs and take the lone wolf route. But why does it change when he comes to Fu Qingqing? Fu Qingqing brings out her parents and her mother, and then the protagonist helps in various ways and posts things to others, calling it a debt of gratitude. The A-level disordered attitude is to give away things at any time. How come, the protagonist is so kind-hearted? Good person, this is, how can you survive in this wasteland background? And then there is Goldfinger. Even if you have Goldfinger, you can't compare to a native. Your Goldfinger is purely good-looking, right? It's been a few years and you are still writing about a protagonist who has a fighting ability. With Goldfinger, he is still rising so slowly. He is deliberately downgrading, right? The summary is that there are more and more inexplicable interpersonal relationships, and the protagonist is becoming more and more nosy. It's amazing.

How to say it? The book is still good to read, but the protagonist wants benefits but is stubborn, and is conflicted at every turn, which leads to a lot of rubbish. For example, the protagonist is targeted by the shelter. You just need to find a place to hide for two years. Then it will be enough whether you become stronger or change your vest. The resources in the gathering place are not necessary for the protagonist. Otherwise, you may get more benefits by lying on the experimental table.

When humans were the absolute rulers of the world, they fought among themselves because of interests. But when other races threaten the continuation of the human race, they still fight among themselves. This setting is NT.

He spent hundreds of bullets, anesthesia and other props, and finally obtained two extraordinary creature corpses worth a total of two thousand. This kind of harvest was enough to afford a month of luxury and even buy evolution potions. Then he turned around and said a bullet costs ten yuan? ? ?

No wonder no one is watching. You can't even kill anyone. The first time you kill someone, you become a polluter. Then you kill a woman and you become a polluter again 😒 and leave.

To upgrade this machine, you actually need to rely on talent. I think this is a big evil. Just replace the machine with parts, but it still depends on talent. What do you think?

Author, you update this day, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

Why did the protagonist choose frost energy? Iron and blood, fire and steel, a body of steel must be paired with fire-like abilities!

The people killed by the protagonist are all inexplicably resurrected to take revenge. One or two are nothing, from the first one-eyed man to Xu Xiaosuan in the back. . . . If you write this way, the author is destined that this book will not be popular.

I was poisoned in the first few chapters. I thought, is iron so worthless in the apocalypse? It's okay if the iron chain is connected to a solid iron block, but it's better to just bury it in the ground with stones. Okay, I guess it's worthless in the last days. Then a more vicious one appeared. After the villain killed one wolf, another one came. The villain's mini-boss has skill bonuses and it seems that the bonuses are not low in Chapter 3. After all, he can hit the protagonist's head accurately, but he didn't know how to hit his eyes. He actually took out a dagger to fight hand-to-hand. I was paralyzed. As mentioned before, the physical bonus is not high. He can kill wolves that cannot be killed by the ak with two daggers. He is really awesome. Just three chapters made me stupid, there is no logic at all, okay? Can the author please think about it first when writing? The logic of this opening battle is insane.

The novel is very good, the writing is flawless, and the skills are profound, but there are too many coincidences. I don't understand the spirit of Taoism, and I don't know how to borrow strength. I always stand on the side of the weak and then try to turn the tide. Among the humans in the wasteland whose abilities are generally biased, the protagonist's abilities are so comprehensive and thoroughly exposed. But the plot, what the characters wrote in their hearts, is also in line with reality. Approximate events, awakening abilities, revenge, unique abilities are targeted, used, revenge, abilities are fully targeted, the enemy is stronger. I haven't read it since. It's the same sentence. The protagonist doesn't have a strong sense of substitution. There's nothing wrong with the writing and plot. It's just frustrating. As the saying goes, join if you can't beat it. We are all human beings, not monsters. If you are a coward, there is no grievance. Why do you have to wait until the death of the protagonist? Just be an experimental subject. People have to ensure your safety. Skill points are hidden. It's not easy to do it with a big boss.

To be honest, there are reasons why this book is not popular. 1. Problems with the update. 2. Problems with the author. 3. Problems with the routines in the book. 4. Problems with plot advancement. 5. Problems with the protagonist's strength. 6. Problems with the infinite matryoshka dolls.

You said that if you are about to die, uploading your consciousness can make people understand. What does he want to do when he is in his prime? Also, if you want to upgrade your machine, you should change the material, right? What kind of talent is needed? What nonsense

Why hasn't it been updated yet? ? ? ? ?

A eunuch novel is actually marked as completed. What a trap

Chapter 18 has so many poisonous points and so many unreasonable points. The protagonist must be a fool.

It's not a smooth read. The author's protagonist has such a bad character, like a little loser.

By the way, I would like to recommend a similar lord article "Cyber ​​Lord: Becoming a God in the Wasteland at the Beginning". The wasteland is cruel, the protagonist is sinister, and the farming adventure battles are great. You can transform your warriors into human bodies at will, fight everywhere, and then improve the tribe's technology

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

It looks good before level 5, but I don't like the back.

I don't know why I haven't written a novel that has the chance to become a god. The subject matter is good, the writing is good, and Golden Finger is good.