Under the Gable

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Let's start with the writing style. The overall narrative is smooth, the story is smoothly connected, and the sense of substitution is strong. However, some parts are not handled very well, such as who said what in those few places. I personally recommend summarizing the things and not simply skipping them. This is very inconsistent, very abrupt, and destroys the already good atmosphere. The description and rendering of the environment are very good, creating the atmosphere and strengthening the feelings. I personally like it. In addition, the portrait description of the characters is lacking, the image of the characters is not very strong, and the details and psychological description can be strengthened. In terms of plot, the plot in the first few chapters is a bit slow, but considering the content of the following chapters, I personally think that the slowness of these chapters is reasonable. After all, if the characters are not simply explained, and you can't tell who is who, it will seriously affect reading. There are no obvious loopholes in the plot. It is reasonable and logical, has suspense, twists and turns, and is attractive enough to attract readers to continue reading. There is also foreshadowing, but it is a bit less than other novels, but it does not affect the overall integrity of the novel.        ，，，，21 In terms of character creation, I personally feel that the best character in the current chapter of the novel is Zhen Huairen, who is obsessed with love. This villain is not brainless, evil without reason, nor pure evil. I personally feel that such a character is real and full-bodied, and other characters are still not enough. The characters in the novel have their own stories, but unfortunately these stories are mainly used to enrich the plot and have limited effect on enriching the characters. I hope that more efforts can be made in this aspect. My thoughts are a bit lacking. I don't know if I didn't see it or not. I didn't see my own thoughts and opinions. If I didn't see it, I suggest you express your thoughts and opinions more directly. After all, online articles are not suitable for in-depth study and careful reading like traditional novels. If you don't write them directly, it is the same as nothing. If not, I suggest you integrate your own thoughts and opinions into the novel. A thoughtful novel is truly your own. In my personal opinion, I feel that the big book does have a bit of traditional literature. Overall, it is a very attractive novel and worth reading. It seems that the book is a novel that favors group portraits. The common problem of this kind of novels is the weak sense of substitution. This is good. However, it is a pity that the advantages of character creation in novels with group portraits and partial group portraits have not been fully utilized. It is recommended that DaDa work on the characters. A masterpiece cannot be without several impressive characters. (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

1. The title of the book is unexpectedly literary. It can be said that it is very unlike an online novel. If you don't look at the classification, you can't tell that it is a suspense-style novel. It is really like reality. "Anne of Green Gables" and "Under the Gables"~~~Hahaha (●°u°●)​" 2. It is recommended to change the introduction. The introduction is originally a brief introduction to the book, but this article really has no effect, and it is also very discouraging. Highlights, highlights are not written like this. 3. When it comes to urban genres, either keep it to the end, or be more cautious. The protagonist's identity is easy to be patronized by 404. 4. The writing style is very good and the words are very tasteful. But it is too traditional and slow to gain popularity. It is estimated that there is still a long way to go. Come on

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