Emperor of Enlightenment in the Era of Covering the Sky

It's a fanfic, but it's very in-depth. It can be seen that the author has a deep self-understanding of the original work, and the writing style is also good. However, the villain is a bit stereotyped, and should be more three-dimensional, instead of always relying on the law of the jungle.

It feels like the protagonist has moisture. As an elixir, his starting point is no worse than that of Qing Emperor Wu Shi, but his actual combat power is extremely poor. Any supporting character can compete with the protagonist twice. Even an ancient prince of his origin can suppress the protagonist. But in fact, any young master from the royal family can be suppressed. He can't beat them all, and the protagonist comes from the restricted area and wants to join a supporting force in order to find a backer. He is really speechless. He can definitely ask for help from the friendly restricted area supreme, or he can ask for a supreme emperor soldier to come out. In short, the protagonist is too weak both in terms of strength and behavior style.

Come on! I have seen the Mortal Body, the Overlord Body, the Holy Body, the Chaos Body, the Holy Body, the Dao Fetus, and the Supreme Bone Double Eyes opening. You are the first to start the elixir. The potential of the elixir can be said to be the first in the universe because you were an Immortal King in your previous life.

The protagonist should go to Lun Hai who cultivates in the Holy Body of Taoist scriptures, and as a tree of enlightenment, he can create secret techniques that are more powerful than the Nine Secrets and the Nine Secrets of the Cruel Man, because the protagonist has 108 leaves and each leaf is a kind of Tao, and as an elixir, he should accept other elixirs as his younger brothers and sisters, teach them to practice, and create a real medicine clan.

Most of the Zhetian fandoms, as long as the protagonist is extraordinary, have high ambitions and low ambitions. Go to various Jedi restricted areas and get various precious medicine kings. After a hundred and ten chapters, your cultivation level has not improved at all, and you are still a little shrimp when you look back. Then I just watch all kinds of big guys fighting, and I yearn for it, thinking that I must be fine. Then continue to grab things 😅

If you want a heroine, you don't want a heroine, or you don't want a heroine. Only an empress can keep up with the protagonist. Taoists are meant to support each other. Others like An Miaoyi are not qualified. These people are just dragging their feet when they are heroines.

About the update 1. The author writes part-time and has little income. As this is his first attempt at writing a novel, he updates purely out of love. 2. Maintain daily updates during normal times, with a reward of 5,000 points or one update for every additional 50 monthly tickets on top of the 50 monthly tickets, with two updates of 5,000 words per day or a single update of 3,000 words. 3. As a complete newcomer, I know that there are still many shortcomings in what I write. This book is also intended to be used as a writing practice to accumulate experience. If there are any toxic or unreasonable points, please feel free to point them out. You can express your opinions in Dot Circle. The author will take time to visit the comment area on weekends. 4. The above are general conditions, and explanations will be made in special circumstances.

The author has classes, papers, and postgraduate entrance exams. Please understand that the update is slow. After all, it is not easy for the author Y(^_^)Y

The elixir of rebirth can only be cultivated in hiding. To come out is to die. Every three-year-old child knows that there is a secret to immortality. Logically this is hell level+ difficulty. How to write this? Emperor, the Immortal Emperor! The restricted area of ​​​​life may be exciting to death.

Come on, there are too few Zhetian colleagues 🙂

Another protagonist of a foreign race who couldn't do anything wrong but became a human nanny... As soon as the secret realm of Dao Palace started, I just laughed. One, you are not the Great Emperor, two, you are not the Immortal Emperor, and three, you are not a human. Writing this way, I feel it is very poisonous.

I don't understand why you want to stick to the human race so much. You might as well write a human protagonist. You want to write a foreign race but are afraid of being in conflict with the human race, so you want to write a good alien race. What are you afraid of? Are you afraid of getting a 404? Come on, do you think every author can be like Master Gu? So popular that it was blocked by the entire network

Author, I just started reading, and I have found two problems so far. At the beginning in the restricted area of ​​the Immortal Mountain, the Mu Shengsheng Supreme told the protagonist about the Fire Domain. Later, when Duan Kong introduced the Fire Domain to the protagonist, the protagonist did not know about the Fire Domain? Second, the protagonist and Duan Kong became friends and talked about everything as soon as they met. Isn't that right? It can be said to be ridiculous

A mere headless horseman dares to confront the Supreme. The original book makes it very clear that there is a huge gap between the Supreme and the Quasi-Emperor Jiuzhongtian. As long as there is no ultimate leap to become an alternative enlightenment, he is an ant. The Supreme can crush his body with just one look.

Next door, Shen Ningdu attained the Holy Eucharist

Enlightenment The greatest ability of the ancient tea tree is enlightenment, which is fast upgrade and trouble.

A random stranger can share a chance with you if you meet someone you can chat with for a few words. Does such a protagonist deserve to be a witness? What is their relationship to you? Does the protagonist live by luck? People who have never experienced life and death have not helped you a lot. What does it have to do with you? You can share the opportunity with them. Is it poisonous?

I stopped watching after seeing that it was being demolished and rebuilt again. Seeing this kind of drama too much makes me a little sick.

Sure enough, the author doesn't praise him, and once he praises him, he returns to his original state.

I would like to ask the author if he would like to finish it. This is a very good humanistic story about "Zhe Tian Meng". The setting is very novel, but the output is really not good. I hereby implore the author to finish "Zhe Tian Meng".