Zhuge Fan Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

The writing is relatively innovative, I hope it won't collapse later, and it's also a bit too short.

A sidekick threatens the landlord's family that the protagonist has just met, telling him to go into the wild and be hunted down, and the protagonist agrees? Is your plot design too weak? The protagonist is not a powerless orphan. Comparing him with the protagonist Luo Feng he is an imbecile. Luo Feng's family is threatened, but he still knows how to find friends and find solutions. You're going to die for a stranger, and you're going to do it? Do you really believe that the villain in the role will not threaten you next time?

I remember that direct revenge against the warrior's family was not allowed. At that time, Li Yao was just using his neighbors and other things to carry out spiritual revenge. Someone like you who buys a murderer should be discovered and killed immediately, right?

If you like poison and it's healthier, check it out! As for being poisoned. I apologize, my writing is limited, and the plot and character descriptions are still a novice within a novice. There are often plots where characters' IQs are not online (which means everyone is very smart), which makes me a little embarrassed. . . . . . . . . . In a word, in a word, in one sentence. If you like it, watch it, if you don't like it, don't watch it. If you are trolling someone, just open a post in the book circle and complain, so that everyone can take a look and participate. As a novice author, I will try my best to correct and improve. Of course, please don't use any curse words. We are all civilized society and civilized people, and we must have good qualities.

Crazy threatening family members in Devouring Starry Sky

Whether the author can ensure the quality of updates is not guaranteed. .

Why do I feel like the more I write, the more bloody it gets?

After reading many chapters in the early stage, I kept saying that my attribute values ​​​​didn't need bloodline potions? What are you waiting for? It's too poisonous.

This wave of forced break-up of the engagement is too embarrassing, and the conversation between the two after the break-up is also very awkward. I hope the author can change the writing style, otherwise it will be too embarrassing and it will be easy to discourage the newbie who is resistant to addiction.

What kind of heroine does Swallowing Starry Sky want? . . It's still about breaking off the engagement, the heroine of the original work is just a decoration

It's hard to guarantee the update time, but it will be February 2nd. Go home for the New Year. Do your best to update more when the time comes. As for the guarantee, I can't guarantee it. After I promised to make more updates last time, I immediately hit the deadline. This face is swollen. I now try to update once or twice a day. Don't blame me for the interruption. As for the plot and writing, there are still some gaps. Maybe because I am anxious to read it to everyone. No more time to think about, check. Full of poison.

I won't say whether the writing is good or not, but what does it mean to break off an engagement? Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi? Eat poop! !

If something is wrong, please point it out. I'll correct it!

The author's updates seem unstable. There has been no update for two days. I originally wanted to watch it, but now I am not in the mood.

Why do you always feed poison at just the right time? Why don't you have a better reason for giving up the opportunity to become your teacher in order to participate in the Genius Battle?

Who can write such a sadistic article, from the beginning to the end, not to mention your original words, but you write like this as a fan?

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