Sealed Snow Seal

Hello everyone, I am Xue Yin. If you like me, you can give me a like 😌

Hello everyone, I am Xiaoyu! I hope you all like my work! Wish everyone good luck in the Year of the Ox! Snow Seal is so awesome!

I like Xueyin to be cheerful and optimistic, brave and strong, and not pretentious! May the boy with the snow mark remain the same!

Come on Snow Mark🌹🌹🌹

I like your work, I like it very much, I feel very uncomfortable if I don't read it every day 😍

Not sleepy, get up and read novels😁

It's such a good book, but I didn't get a seat on the sofa. I feel bad😣😣😣😣

My new book is here😊

I'm a little curious as to why you follow me 😂😂, but let's talk about the issue of the article in detail. I personally mix a lot of male videos, so I really don't know much about some female videos. Some opinions are more subjective, so don't comment if you don't like them. There is a problem in the first three chapters, that is, every sentence begins with the character's name. How to put this point? It is a problem that novices will make. It's too boring to read like this, just a boring conversation. But fortunately, you still made the necessary modifications in each paragraph, which makes the quality of the article much better. Learn how to control sentences, for example: Seeing her trembling with laughter, XX (male) couldn't help but blush a little. "What's so funny about this." The handsome face was filled with red clouds at this moment, coupled with the slightly coquettish words. It made her a little confused for some reason. Suppressing her slightly presumptuous smile, XX (female) coughed lightly and said: ".........(What I said)" The above is just what I wrote randomly. Please don't care about the rationality. Try to reasonably adjust the position of a character's name in the sentence, and use personal pronouns to write reasonably, which will make the article relatively streamlined. I don't think there are any other issues. If I really want to nitpick, some paragraphs are still a bit long. They can be adjusted appropriately. After writing, I will take a look at it as soon as I send it out and look for minor issues such as typography and typos. Seeing as you have written a lot, the above issues may have been corrected later on, so just treat them as my personal nonsense and don't go into too much detail. Finally, I wish you can persist.

The new cover is so dark😃