I Catch Monsters in Dazhou

How should I put it? The beginning of this book is really not good. Although it will dissuade many readers (of course, I have no readers at all 😜), if it is changed, it will affect a lot, so I do not plan to change it. So in the following plot, I will pay attention to foreshadowing, try not to make the plot awkward, and try to advance the plot with the characters' personalities. For newbies writing books, this is always an excuse. But I will continue to learn lessons, improve my shortcomings, and try to improve my writing skills. I won't say anything if I want to work hard. In short, just concentrate on writing a book!

Fairy Sister

Second-rate youth

The internal investment in this book has passed, and the website shortcoming has come, so feel free to invest! ! !

Gan!

Good brother, don't panic, I think the writing is pretty good and quite satisfactory. It would be nice if there was only Su as the heroine. Don't worry, I will pursue your book, 😁😁

The traditional school of cultivating immortals, pretending to fight monsters, upgrade and change map flow. The first few dozen chapters are not very well written, but the later chapters are just barely there. I can barely see it, but I haven't seen any big poisonous spots so far. Update is stable. He is a diligent master. 🙂

Congratulations on finishing this book, a recommendation ticket.

There is too little foreshadowing, the events are not realistic enough, and the sense of expectation is insufficient. Chapter 1 - The character design of the protagonist in the first few paragraphs is somewhat interesting, but it is just a joke. The character design has nothing to do with the intelligent character after the incident. It seems like the funny character standing in front is of no use. This brings us to the problem, without paving the way. The protagonist has a funny character and a wise character, but what will be used soon is the wise character. So we need to set the stage first to show the protagonist's wisdom, so that the protagonist's sudden whim to solve the problem will not be so blunt later. Secondly, the man in black appears too suddenly, and the conversation between the protagonist and the waiter only shows that the loss of the blood eagle has caused a big disaster. And your article has been writing about how these two people want to remedy the situation, and the readers are also following your train of thought. How should the protagonist make amends at this time? The sudden point comes when the man in black suddenly appears and suddenly announces that the two protagonists have been arrested. This plot cannot be changed, so it needs to be foreshadowed. For example, if the waiter said that if we didn't find the Blood Eagle right away, the two of us would be captured by the police, and we would end up miserable, this would also lower our expectations, and the appearance of the man in black would not be sudden. And because there is no foreshadowing, your world and events appear unreal.

It's too poisonous. If you have a better mind, you won't be panicking every day. Let's reopen it.

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Dear book friends who have been poisoned by the previous chapters, I would like to say sorry 😭 I am not strong enough and my writing is very bad, so I can't bear to watch it. However, I still hope that some book friends can read more. I will write the following chapters and plots carefully, try to lay the groundwork and be as mature as possible🙂 Thank you

Well! After reading the introduction, I have no motivation to continue reading! This kind of plot of sending a fairy is really not my cup of tea! ! ! Of course, I can't stand it even if I send it to my grandfather. Simply put, this routine is too old and I have no motivation to click on it to read it, not to mention how good your writing is!

It's okay, just compared to the previous writing method, at least it can be read.

Good brother, is this a single-female story? I feel like it's written in a direction that says otherwise.

Already doing business to cheer up 😄

My life-saving thunder armor is given to one person. Go fight the ones on the fifth or seventh floor yourself. Even if you have a killer weapon, you wouldn't give the protection armor to someone! Wouldn't it be better to have an extra layer to save your life?

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