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The Juhu specializes in targeting people who have a favorable impression of relatives and friends around him...

In fact, it is quite rare. After you committed a lot of taboos in online writing, I still managed to read Chapter 34. Let me talk about the advantages first. The first one: The writing is good and has a sense of imagery, which shows that you, the author, are still suitable for Internet writing. Second: The characterization is good, and it can establish people. Character design is the core of web articles and is very important. Let's talk about the shortcomings: There is a huge deviation in the understanding of online writing, which leads to major mistakes in strategy. No matter how good the writing, characterization and other tactical abilities are, it cannot save it. But the good news is that basic skills are the most difficult to practice. Strategic adjustments can involve reopening the book or rewriting part of it. Let's talk about the deviations in detail: The first one: taking over the protagonist. The protagonist of the second copy is Uncle Jiu. After reading it, I feel that the protagonist of this book has evil intentions, is short-sighted, has low strength, forgets his life for small gains, and cherishes his life for big things. As for Uncle Jiu, Uncle Jiu is portrayed like a god of war. He has gone crazy killing people. With the protagonist of this book crazily holding back and not reporting the truth, he kills seven in and seven out. It is too strong. I suggest that after the dungeon is over, Uncle Nine goes out and lets the protagonist be a zombie here. Second: The rhythm is unbalanced. Let's not talk about the second copy being too long. The main purpose is to deliberately suppress the protagonist's strength. If we want to retain readers from the current starting point, the protagonist's strength needs to be truly improved within at least 15 to 20 chapters. It is the kind of qualitative improvement that can change the protagonist's situation. In the second dungeon, the protagonist is debuffed by Uncle Jiu. Not to mention that his strength has not improved, and his character has collapsed. I can see that the author likes Uncle Jiu, but the novel really cannot be written like this. The character of the protagonist is the only guarantee for your long-term writing. Otherwise, no matter how good your writing is, readers will lose their sense of empathy and people will run away. Just look at how many outrageous things Chuan Bao, the number one internet celebrity in the universe, has done to protect his character. Is he stupid? 74 Million votes, nearly 50% support rate, I don't need to say more about how to write it to make it popular. Finally, I will recommend you a way to write an outline. Search "Snowflake Outline is a Tool" on Zhihu and look at the article ranked first. This can effectively cure your bad habit of writing without knowing what the goal is.

Pan Jinlian's description is much more attractive than the original novel🙈

How should I put it? The protagonist can enter the sect at less than thirty, so what do those with hundreds count?

To be honest, your looting restriction looks like a licking dog! ! The difference is that one licks the body and the other licks luck.

I want to know if the author has written novels like Brokeback Mountain before? I don't dare to read anymore, it doesn't feel right!

You are the first person to eunuch in front of me, and the first person to run away after seeing my name. You must leave a message.

It's interesting. It's okay 😁

Will the Lord of the Rings be strengthened? Any demigod can create stars.

It's obviously well written. Why does the author feel cold? Has my reading taste deteriorated? The first few plots were not good, but the latest one was ok. . . . . . . . .

The author only proposed the concept of luck value, but the specific operational relationship between the protagonist's own luck value is too vague. One thing I have never understood is whether the protagonist's luck value will basically not change much in the future. According to the author, the harvested luck will only be used as currency and cannot be added to oneself. Don't say that the luck value will increase as the strength increases. The author also mentioned that qualifications have nothing to do with luck. Luck only represents opportunity, and hard work and cultivation will increase your level. It's normal to come up but go out to hunt for treasures but can't find it. It's like the fat man who doesn't have high luck, but has good qualifications and can practice faster than the protagonist. Or the protagonist has joined the immortal sect and is considered rich and handsome for mortals, but his talent is still ten points. So, the author, do you want the protagonist to endure the low luck to the end, or tell the protagonist what the rules are for improving his luck. And does the protagonist's acquaintance with this fat man match his poor 10 points of wealth? This fat man is rich and generous, and living with him is a complete surprise. The fat man will help the protagonist from time to time, but after seeing so many luck value templates, compared with other people's hundreds and thousands, 10 points is considered a poor guy who will not have a windfall, or maybe the protagonist relies on his own cheats to break through the luck bonus I only met this fat man who I couldn't meet before when I entered the Immortal Sect, but since I can meet him after joining, why is the fortune and luck still 10 points? Or if an accident leads to a series of chain reactions, then what is the use of dividing the protagonist's own luck value, because the protagonist's fate will be completely different from the moment he gets the system If you see it, author, please explain it to us.

Two tickets were given, which was okay. I skipped the Maoshan part to see it.

I have a question. In the first chapter, it is said that there is little information about film and television animations. This should be a lot, and it cannot capture the appearance of Gao Wu. It is the writing in the novel legend that is outrageous. Or is it your definition of the novel legend as being in the martial arts world?

Except for the first dungeon, where it's interesting to transform into Pan Jinlian, the rest of the plot is almost copied from the movie.

I remember that I read novels, and one of them was even included in an urban idol drama, just to make the pig's feet relax.

Why did you say it was over so quickly? I thought I could hold on 😭

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~