I Became a Two-Dimensional Character

First of all, the writing style of the book itself is quite good. Two big problems. First, can you understand the specific background and then "learn from it"? Many characters and settings make it obvious at a glance that you have never looked at the original background (of course, if you deliberately changed it, pretend I didn't say it). For example, in Genshin Impact, poets and singers are separated. Bards play the piano and tell stories, while singers sing and become idols. The two coexist in the Genshin Impact worldview. Similarly, the three-star weapons in the background of Genshin Impact are not a piece of junk, but the glorious work of a top-notch blacksmith. These two items alone make the entire plot of Genshin Impact in the early stages of the game awkward and terrifying. Secondly, this is very fatal and the style of painting is fragmented. This is actually very clear if you explain it. You have two main painting styles in the whole plot. One is biased towards nonsensical and funny daily life, and the other is biased towards serious national war. When these two styles are put together, they conflict. The most serious ones in the early stage are "Fire Cloud Evil God" and "Genshin Bead". "Fire Cloud Evil God", this kind of old man character who has just appeared is beaten to death by the villain Superman in front of the protagonist. The protagonist can still beat Superman directly. Does this kind of plot really have no perception of how serious the destructiveness of "nonsensical and funny daily life" is? There really cannot be a positive character who dies tragically, and it absolutely cannot die tragically because of the protagonist's fault. This will make the protagonist look like an inhuman waste when he is "nonsensical and casual". "Genshin Beads", this is a serious background of incompatibility and hatred. Even if you write about a few villains, it is more reasonable for the male protagonist to keep it secret. But until I abandoned the book, there was no villain or traitor. Everyone communicated peacefully and fairly, and was unanimous in dealing with the outside world. Everyone else freely shared resources with you, and never tried to steal your beads. In this context, the male protagonist's crazy secrecy in the early stage of keeping the Genshin Impact beads only for himself and his gay friends seemed stingy and terrible. If you separate the plot separately, there will be no problem one by one, but as long as you combine the original setting + the surrounding context, the male protagonist's character instantly drops to a "selfish, stingy, useless, inhumane, brainless", and he can survive purely by relying on the "intelligence" of the other characters. But in fact it is obviously not the case. I feel like it would be a much better book if the inexplicable teammate's tragic + death were removed and the nonsensical funny casual male protagonist who was invincible (or undead + undefeated + undefeated) from the beginning was implemented. Actually, I didn't want to complain, because there is no solution to the problems in this book. I was inspired when I saw the author mentioned that he shouldn't write about battles. Can you actually sense that the problem lies in the battle plot? Then you are still acting like this. . . However, the above still only represents my personal subjective opinion, without reference or value, just idle complaints. That's it, no more comments, that's all.

I clicked in without reading the introduction. After reading a few chapters, I found that it felt super familiar. Then I exited and looked at the author. When I saw the introduction, it turned out to be the author of Dream Evolution.

From the time you followed Extreme Fear to Cultivation Girl Group, I have to say that it took eight years anyway. I have just officially started reading this book now, and people in other circles of mine are promoting this book - well, it's because there is a round chef there. Looking at it, I knew it was him as soon as I saw the battle description. This book is in pretty good shape. It's rare to be reincarnated, so work hard. As long as you don't stop reading this book, I will follow the old rules and recommend all three books every day. Write well!

Get out of the way, I'll post a picture

To tell the truth, this book is good at writing and plot. Let's not talk about the setting. I'm going to vomit. The character is crazy, and many details are wrong. For example, Nayako is a character in "Sneak, Nayako", and the Cthulhu Mythos is just his prototype. You can believe it, and the Abandoned Emperor fish fry, holy shit, it makes people stupid.

I casually gave some rewards and unknowingly opened a trumpet account. When you were autistic again, I wrote two million words. You have to start over again, and you have accumulated fans in vain. Writing a book requires a state of mind. With your state of mind, I don't think you need to read comments. It would be much better to wait until 500 fan points are turned on before you can speak after it is put on the shelves. Work hard, this industry requires continuous learning, even the great masters who work behind closed doors have fallen.

Genshin Impact

Dear readers, I would like to remind you that the protagonist of this book is a transformation with a heel, so don't be poisoned.

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Anyone who has watched the movie knows that Dr. Manhattan will eventually lose his humanity. Without his two girlfriends, he would have abandoned humanity long ago. It feels like he will eventually transcend the shackles of the country. In fact, those top "people" cannot be regarded as human beings. After all, how can a human mind carry such a huge power? It will eventually approach the "Tao", which is the character of mind represented by the power it controls.

If anyone finds the author's new vest or new book, give me a kick 😓😓😓

The author has not learned his lesson! It is obviously best suited to write an infinite flow like dream evolution, but I want to write a comprehensive comic about the two-dimensional invasion of reality, and also add characters from film and television games. The result is a confusing plot, a decline in logic, and finally a hodgepodge. The author's writing peak was the evolution of his dream, but since then he has been constantly trying to kill himself, changing themes, innovating, and then failing. Eunuch, he changed his account and practiced again. No matter how popular he is, he has almost done it for himself! What a pity! What a shame! Not pitiful!

The author is really irritating. At the beginning, there was Flower Killing on the Other Side, and then there were Snowflakes of Winter, Reimu, Pokémon, and Meng Men. I know only five of them. Tell me, you and Celestial Silkworm Potato are both in the same period. Who is like you? After all, he is also the founder of Advent style, but he ended up messing up like this!

I am also an old reader of yours. I have read several of your books when they first came out. The dream of evolution was so popular back then, but now most of the books that have come to reality on various platforms are written according to your routine. If you didn't change your pen name and kept writing, you would have become a master long ago. I really don't deserve it for you.

Mengmeng wants to fly. Mengmeng... Wants to... Fly...

Author, you are also the same person as Tiancan Tudou Guitu, how did it become like this? But Fan Shaochuan's pen name has long become a great god, Guitu now still has the aura of ace evolution, and a large number of old readers are reading the book,,,,,,,,,,, you

Didn't Mengmeng say she would reply today?

It doesn't matter if you don't need the power system of Madoka to hang on to Madoka, what kind of system is this all the time? -_-||, And the plot is too complicated and I lost interest after reading more than 20 chapters. PS: I don't know about the most important person. Anyway, I don't really like someone who is neither a man nor a woman. If I want to change, just go for it and stir up the base. It's better than stepping on both sides.

I think it would be better for the protagonist to become a woman directly. The transvestite is actually much more disgusting than turning directly into a woman. The transvestite culture was passed down from the Japanese pirates. What were the young Japanese pirates called? Chengping abandoned the house because the United States has a plan called "Demasculation of East Asia." The first experiment on the Japanese pirate island made young people become effeminate. Without the masculinity of men, the effeminate and weak character will not resist American rule. The United States has been very successful in dealing with Japanese pirates. It has spread over the past few years, and the culture of transvestites has also begun to become popular in China. Don't tell me that there were cross-dressing actors in China before. They were just cross-dressing and were for work. Who would go out and show off on the street when they have nothing to do in broad daylight?

Women's clothing, please update

It evolved from a dream. I remember the novels I read in elementary school. At that time, I found one in the Baidu Encyclopedia of Infinite Flow Novels that seemed relatively relaxed and suited my taste, so I read on. It's not easy to find it now.

Hongjun and the Tribunal of Life Divided versions Hongjun cannot defeat the Tribunal of Life in most versions (Marvel's original version, not the fan version) Yuan Shen vs. Dr. Manhattan Not sure, it's divided into whether Manhattan stacks up or not Boxes, stack the boxes to hit Yuan Shen, otherwise you will be hit by Yuan Shen Prehistoric Saint vs. Marvel's Five Gods Different versions, if the original five gods are themselves (not a single projection), eternity plus infinity represents all time and space , in short, most versions of the prehistoric saints cannot defeat the five gods, except for a few versions One Punch Man vs Superman Not to mention, Superman will win, Saitama explodes the star, Superman comics shatter the multiverse with one punch, Saitama Hit it with the head The Abandoned Emperor vs. Sargeras I heard that Sargeras has multiverse-level performance, so Sargeras The Demon King Sauron vs. The Sage of Six Paths If the movie version performs, the Sage of Six Paths should win

You! Now someone is writing a book about dream evolution, so hurry up and read it! A hot-blooded harem is fine, but don't be too effeminate. The protagonists in the next few movies are all sissies, without any of Wang Ling's passion and dominance, you! Don't change your number!

I hope the author's book will not be unfinished, otherwise I will copy the outline of this book and write another book. 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶Add a few more for fear of being hammered to death🐶🐶🐶

Shikamu aid😜

From Extreme Fear, to the pursuit of dream evolution, to the arrival of fantasy into reality, and finally the inner and outer world, as long as you like one of them, you will most likely like several others. Author, since you have established a tetralogy of human resistance to gods, why don't you continue writing. Alas, Extreme Fear has been published four times. I accidentally saw Extreme Fear on the bookshelf today and wanted to check it out. The author has not updated it, but...

After all this time, have you really given up? I quite like the previous advent novels. The first fantasy novel came to reality, which is quite to my liking. This one actually feels good to me as well. If there is a next book by the author, please leave me a title. You have really changed too many vests.

Well, I just checked the data of this book, and it has only increased by about 700 collections since it was recommended on the Internet, with an average of more than 100 a day. . It looks a little sad

Even my ten-year-old book friends didn't tell me. I sent messages to the three groups telling others that you had written a new book?

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