The System of Global High Martial Arts Sent Me the Wrong Message

It's a martial arts system that's being sold like a sheep's head. I've only done a few works of Kung Fu until now. The protagonist's IQ is worrying, and he was forced to lose his intelligence. Even some of the characters in the original work were ruined.

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I have been polishing at the fifth level for so long and am ready to break through to the fifth level.

I have read seventy chapters and just read the table of contents. Let me share my opinion. I think the author has put the cart before the horse a bit. First of all, this is fan fiction. What is so cool about fan fiction? Yu Shuang should all agree, right? For regrets, for compensation, for injustice, because I like it, I am willing! To flip the table! ! ! This is the first Second, I have written almost 300 chapters now and have not yet reached the peak. You must know that there are still about ten levels later, and I can only torture the younger generation such as Fang Ping Tietou. The so-called higher-level layout and digging pits are not written at all. This is one point. Third, the story of the global high-level martial arts world is concentrated in just three years, which is very unfriendly for writing fan fiction, so you have to start a new main line and don't follow the original work. I think the layout of such a powerful Golden Finger is too small. You can write one Write about the skills, training and tactics of all the worlds, golden finger space and time flow speed, trump cards, etc. When it comes to trump cards, I found that the protagonist has no trump cards. If those old yinbi suddenly find the protagonist interesting and want to capture you to study and study, how can you resist? You have to be protected, even though we as readers know from our perspective that the protagonist can make a comeback! (Generally speaking, what I wrote is criticism, and I'm sorry if I don't express my feelings. This is my family's opinion. Please forgive me if it offends me. Come on!)

When I saw Chapter 8, I didn't understand. Is it necessary to write such a useless story about the grandson of the protagonist, Dean Jingwu? After the college entrance examination at the beginning, the character design is just a waste, and the mentality is also useless. When meeting Fu Changding, he will be all kinds of coward and have no bottom. After all, this is what he does after a famous family? The characters in "Eagle High Martial Arts" are all kinds of ruthless and hard-working characters, but Zhao Xuemei can't beat Fu Changding with just one bone tempering.

Fang Ping was absolutely confused when he saw the pig's trotters. They were all martial arts secrets he had heard, and Gao Wuli called them tactics.

To be honest, I haven't read many chapters. I feel that the protagonist portrayed by the author is so awkward. He has been reborn through time travel and lived in two lives? Why do I feel that the protagonist is no different from a primary school student, and his behavior and communication are similar to those of our real-life children in fifth or sixth grade at most. As an adult, my head hurts from watching this.

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Well, just change the protagonist and change it a little bit. You can do it. It's awesome. I really admire your shame for writing this as a fan.

It feels like the male protagonist follows the protagonist's path, changing the soup without changing the medicine. In this way, there is not much difference between the fanfic and the original work. Also, the fanfic starts with the plot and then follows the protagonist's path, leaving the protagonist with no way to go. Eighty percent of the fanfics are like this. Such fanfics are a bit boring because we have seen the growth history of the protagonist in the original work, and then in the fanfic, the male protagonist takes the protagonist's path and then watches it. Wouldn't it be boring? It is best to do it before the plot begins. When growing up through time travel, it is best not to take too long, and then stand at a certain height at the beginning of the plot and change according to your own ideas. This is more pleasing to the eye. There are many fan content that is even more miserable than the original work. People who read fan fiction hope that the content will be more humorous and funny. The result is that the content becomes more and more miserable. How to read it like this, the male protagonist in this book always feels like a manipulated chess piece, being played with by others.

It's a bit poisonous for the protagonist to take the road of human emperors. There is a system and the future is promising. Why must he completely tie himself to the chariot of the human race? As a human race, it is okay to fight for the human race, but there is no need to completely sacrifice oneself for others and make selfless sacrifices, right? You must know that the Human Emperor's Way is truly a path of both prosperity and loss. No matter how strong the protagonist is when he embarks on this path, he will have an obvious and fatal weakness. To a certain extent, the protagonist's cultivation is not his own. Since the protagonist is so righteous, why not dedicate the system to the country?

I think too much. After all, the original work is just right. If your writing skills are better than his, you won't be able to copy him 🤫

I can't stand watching it recently. I always feel that the protagonist has so many resources and treasures, but the author cannot write an invincible character. I always feel that the protagonist is useless and the role of those resources and treasures cannot be highlighted at all. I feel like I can't beat Fang Ping at the same level, but the protagonist's golden finger is many times more powerful than Fang Ping, which is a bit exaggerated. 😓😓

But I've read about ten chapters and I feel that the author's writing style is average and the writing is very close to a novice novel. Then there is this system. In fact, it should be explained clearly in the early stage, such as what system failure and what problems. This is slightly better, because martial arts and martial arts are divided into low martial arts, medium martial arts and high martial arts. It is easy for people to misunderstand if it is not clearly written. Then there is a bit of wisdom, such as the chapters in the ring. Although it is not embarrassing, it highlights the stupidity of the protagonist. You must know that immaturity and stupidity have two different meanings. Finally, here are my own views on the Global Gaowu system. I have not watched Global Gaowu, but I know a little bit about it. I personally feel that the training system of Global Gaowu is not very good, and there is also the peak. In fact, I feel that at most it is just becoming an immortal, and the first six levels of it are all in body tempering, which means it is not open. When you first start cultivating immortals, in terms of refining essence and transforming qi, the first six levels are spent refining essence. On the 789th level, you start to transform qi, and then you skip the stage of practicing qi and transforming into gods and start refining gods and returning to the void directly. Moreover, the training system of high-level martial arts in the world does not produce internal force, magic power or divine power, which feels very awkward. After all, low-level martial arts are supported by internal energy and true qi.         ，，， The above are all my personal opinions, thank you.

Author, you are really awesome. You obviously have so many martial arts skills, but you can't beat Fang Ping. That fighting space was eaten by dogs. You use the fighting space every day for actual combat. In the end, you can't even beat Fang Ping and forcibly subdue him. Speechless. I thought I found a good book and could read it, but I paid by mistake after all.

I don't know why those who write fan fiction have to follow the main storyline. Why can't you adjust the timeline to before the main storyline starts? In the later stage of writing like this, you become a chess player. Wouldn't it be good to treat the protagonist as a chess piece? Do we have to follow the same timeline as the protagonist?

I can't read this book after reading the free chapters. I guess the upgrade speed must be as fast as the original work. It can be said that the system setting is very awesome and the strength is very humble. It is Meteor Tears and Emperor Huang Tian. The upgrade speed is about the same as Fang Ping. Then you can just adjust the system level to the same level as Fang Ping. It is not cool and not pretentious enough. The author is afraid that the upgrade level exceeds Fang Ping and will be criticized by fans of high martial arts around the world, right?

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There is a big difference between being brainless and I am Fu Changding

Do you have to follow Fang Ping's rhythm? If you don't follow his rhythm, you won't be able to write?

Suddenly I thought of something. The three years in the original work were shortened because Fang Ping kept causing trouble. It was not just three years. Although they are all in the big world, it seems that you can delay it in various ways to buy time. Three years and ten years, or even three years and a hundred years are almost the same in the eyes of immortals.

It's good to read, and I feel like it's the most enjoyable read in Gaowu fanfics. The others all start with Mowu, and you have to lick the protagonist more or less, and take advantage of the protagonist's strength. This is whether it's Huang's guidance, or the protagonist's understanding of his own invincibility, and writing something different. I don't have much money, but I subscribed to part of it because I can't bear to have it in vain for the second time. I'll give you the monthly pass and recommendation.

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I gave up halfway through the pursuit, so I can only continue to support it with new books. Big cheers for the author!

There are still half a month and three years to go, and it has been dragging on for a long time, but now it is finally finished.

Brother, I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and have written a Gaowu fan novel. You can read it if you have time. It is still a seedling. Please give me your opinions. If you like it, you can invest in it and recommend it.

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Can you write about the catastrophe of all races in the next book?

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