Why Is the Northern Song So Powerful?

If you don't know how to write about love, then don't write about it. When the time comes, just introduce me to your brother-in-law or your superior to an official lady! You see, you made a complete mess in order to forcefully write a heroine. When the siege of the city is precarious, you still have a eldest lady come out. After the city is broken, the army does not seal the sword. You think it's a big deal! People in the city are panicking. Who has the heart to think about whether to get married or not? There is also a big-headed soldier in the protagonist, who comes out of the camp at will. In order to enforce military discipline and prevent others from surrendering and the army doing random things, the camp is usually closed. Do you think you are a general? Unless you are on a mission, how dare you let the soldiers out of the camp! You even went to town to buy books. Your bookstore was open during the war! It's not a grain store! Do you think surrendering is the end? Taking stock of warehouses and stuff like that! People are panicking unless the army controls the opening of grain stores and the like! And just after the city was broken, your eldest daughter just took her maid out to go shopping casually? The streets are full of soldiers and generals, who will kidnap, destroy, and kill you? Why didn't the ancient soldiers enter the city? In strict military discipline, we must also take precautions before they happen!

In order to prevent anyone from misunderstanding that I cannot write a long book, I will just write it down. This book has 100,000 words written, but the initiative to apply for a contract failed. I forgot that I wrote a total of more than 100,000 words. Anyway, I made two major revisions. In the second round, everything was deleted and rewritten, and the book was even banned. After the lockdown was lifted, I wrote about 30,000 words. I lost my energy and motivation, and finally I had to finish it.

Tiezi, why did you stop updating?

One picture is not enough. Come and buy more than 10,000 per day.

Drop~New Year's Eve card! New year, new atmosphere, come on!

Collect it first and take a look. Come on, author!

Boss, write more protagonists and do some big things Don't always write other things

It feels so good to delete it. The book has been blocked and is waiting to be unblocked.

I have read several new books in the past few days, but I haven't found what I want to read. But your book still has merit. At least your words and sentences pass the test. Your question is about story design. Since the Song Dynasty is said to be powerful, the writing should be more decisive. Zhezi: 007, sudden death. Chapter 1, time travel, environment, and a brother. In the second chapter, there is a taller wounded soldier who can be a helper. In the third chapter, he transforms and looks for opportunities to make meritorious deeds. Want to prepare gunpowder or something. Chapter 4: What problems occurred on site? The preparations in Chapter 3 can be used just in time. . . Chapter 5, meritorious service. Chapter 6, the emperor is coming, transition. As for what I want to save my life, the history of the Song Dynasty and the succession of the throne are not only irrelevant to the current plot, but also contradictory to your theme. Why write about them? The more I think about it, the angrier I get.

You have to change history, otherwise the donkey cart will drift, Wansheng Formation Diagram, the Da Ting Dynasty has begun 🙂