Rotting into a Vengeful God

Seeing that I wanted to blame God for being unfair again, I felt like vomiting. As a pig, you have a golden finger, you are resurrected, and you have a good family, just a bit inhuman, but the basic problems are not big, and there is no one chasing you to slay demons. If you blame God for this, then those ordinary people can just kill the ball. . . .

I feel like it doesn't reflect the difference that the protagonist is a corpse. It can be read as an ordinary martial arts novel.

In ancient times, a rich official usually had a nursing home and a family with children. He bought out girls like that to serve in the inner court. The slaves and slaves were in their hands, life and death, and the officials basically didn't care. In this world of monsters, you still tell me about benevolence and righteousness. The slaves bully the master's kindness and ask for money. I wonder if that slave dare not steal anything. If you join forces and become bandits, poison them first and then kill them all. Is it difficult? In ancient times, refugees would cook anything when they were hungry, Zhang Jiao

To sum up, this book is selling sheep's head and selling dog meat.

It feels uncomfortable to write like this. If you need to kill, kill them. They have traveled through time. There is also Goldfinger. I am afraid that even the most feared person is no longer a human being. That person is still alive and is still a shady person. You can give your life to someone who knows your secret. How can you be so big-hearted? You can trust it. People are following you and they obviously have some agenda. Just kill them. There is nothing new about this copy and that copy.

The starting point is also troublesome. I can't find good novels on the APP. I have to go to the website and use the computer version to find them.

Author, you started to engage in martial arts, but as a result, there have been dozens of chapters without writing about whether the protagonist has developed internal skills. The key point is that at first, you were too imitative. Basically, you wrote how others wrote about martial arts and cheating. Moreover, it seemed that you were interested in developing the muscle dominance style. As a result... You went off topic, and the market response was not good. The matter has come to this. If you don't force it right now, it will continue to collapse, but you have to change it in order to get back together. As for the martial arts, you have already written it, so you can't eliminate it... Personally, it seems that you want to use the protagonist's "yin energy" and "demon elixir" as characteristics to replace the internal strength and use it as a "training method" while using martial arts as a "fighting method". Together... To achieve a balanced effect. As for the new transformations... Personally, I feel that if this book is to be saved, body transformation is the key: this can reflect the specialness of the protagonist. For example, if the rejection reaction is too great, the protagonist's body may collapse and rot. In order to upgrade, the protagonist wanders between decay and rebirth with successful integration, and gradually becomes dehumanized and deified. This can bite the title and avoid being accused of selling dog meat. In addition, there have been comics and animations before, in which the protagonist fights a boss to recover an organ, and finally gradually becomes a complete human being. And your book... Maybe it can work the other way around: the protagonist fights a big monster and fuses an organ, seizes one of the monster's abilities, and combines it with suitable "martial arts" modifications (for example, the spider monster can spray silk from its butt, how does the protagonist spray it? You can't just spray it from below, right? Spider-Man mode? How can you do it? Once it's sprayed out, how can it be used? What means can be used to achieve what effect? ​​This is the direction of "martial arts"). Finally, take the comic (Dororo?) That sells well as an example. It can achieve good value. In addition to the superficial "upgrading" elements of the protagonist fighting monsters, it also contains deeper connotations of human ethics, morality, and philosophy: In the comic, see The father of the protagonist, who was introduced as a villain and killed the protagonist at the beginning, was actually motivated by "protecting the people, ending the troubled times, and seeking peace for the world." For this reason, he did not hesitate to kill his relatives for justice, but in the end it was an innocent person who made the sacrifice, but this innocent person was his new-born son. Is this considered selfless and noble? He seems to be a victim, but the upright protagonist, for his own selfish desire to regain body perception, regards the interests and lives of the people as trivial, and does not hesitate to base his hope of physical recovery on the constant suffering and death of ordinary people. However, by acting like this, he was only getting back what he supposedly should have had. Is this considered selfish and despicable? Who is the devil? Or are they just people with a different perspective? Or... There is no such thing as "people", everyone is "evil"?! These deeper things gave this comic a stronger vitality than ordinary conventional comics, and it became an instant hit. When writing a book, have you ever thought about planning this? For example... What is a "fierce god"? Who is the evil god? A monster-like protagonist? Or, is he actually a character who is magnificent both in appearance and in his heart? Or... The evil god is just a concept, and the protagonist just embodies this concept. In fact, the evil god exists in everyone's heart, and everyone... As long as they have that condition, they will become "the evil god"? These are just personal opinions. I am not qualified to teach authors how to do things.

What's going on? Didn't the protagonist turn into a corpse? He was still entangled with his original relatives, and the martial arts also changed from a sense of evil to an ordinary one with no highlights. As for me, I came here just to see the evil and secretive training and various evil martial arts of the dead protagonist, but now why is it basically the same as an ordinary martial arts novel except for Chapter 52?

It's quite interesting to read the introduction. I thought the protagonist traveled through time and became a different species and then reversed course. But in the end, he still became a human being. Can't he be the right person? Your protagonist's characteristic that attracts others is his rot. After you cure it, will your book be different from other books? There are only eight hundred martial arts books on Qidian. Why should I read your book? It has no core competitiveness.

I'm so fucking convinced. After reading more than 30 chapters, there are so many points where I don't upgrade the two most important and fundamental things, the most important Corpse Raising Technique and Wu Qin Xi, but instead upgrade some bullshit martial arts secrets. Put aside your internal strength and go practice external strength; put aside your cultivation of immortality and go learn martial arts. Don't let go of things that can change your fundamentals and improve your foundation, and just learn some rubbish style of play. It's like giving you a company of weapons and ammunition instead of a complete industrial production system. The idiot is home.