Douluo's Gambit Becomes an Oscar

The timeline is messy, how did you meet Hu Liena? ? ? Aren't you already in Wuhun Hall at this time?

I'm going to vomit. 8 Out of 10 Douluo novels feature dual martial arts and full souls. Didn't you think about it when you were preparing to write about this subject?

Welfare is coming!

If he really traveled through time and became Oscar and joined the Spirit Hall, Tang San would definitely die, civilians would have a chance to come forward, and evil spirit masters would not rise.

You can write more female protagonists. Not counting anything else, the number of words is definitely too much. Think about how many female protagonists there are in Douluo, and think about how beautiful they are! Wouldn't it be better to give her happiness if you give her the good-looking sister Bibi Dongduo, the violent sister Liu Erlong, and the gentle and virtuous Tang Yuehua.           Qian Renxue, Shui Bing'er, Xue Wu, Huo Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Bo Saixi, Dugu Yan, Hu Liena, the dream is still there, anyway, there are so many more. I'm imagining some stories with some original words. It's no problem. If you want to write, think of another one, travel to other worlds, time stops in this world, tie it up, enter the next world, continue writing, the author's writing style If it's good, add some hot-blooded battle stories, and handle the heroine's emotional crisis, and everything will be OK Come on, author, come on, congratulate the author... I can't remember this one My brain is short-circuited, and I can't seem to remember the others No need to criticize me I am from the harem

The author is great, I must accept Zhuqing and Erlong! I feel like Dai Mubai and Yu Xiaogang are not good enough for them in the original work! ! ! ! The book is very good and I will support it

I didn't expect that the invulnerable body I developed in the previous book would be broken instantly.

What kind of NT thing is this? Can you clarify the setting of Douluo? If you want magic reform, please explain it clearly, okay? Are you really an NT who writes like this?

Just one day after meeting Xiao Wu, Xiao Wu told the truth about his soul beast. . . . .

Will Flanders spend hundreds or thousands of gold soul coins on clothes? Be funny! He didn't even want to stay in a hotel with a few copper soul coins. Such a buckling person! Shrek has been in business for many years! Calculate Qin Ming's age! How come Oscar hasn't been founded yet at 4 years old? If the author wants to write a fanfic, he should do some homework and stop making such vulgar jokes.

It came out without even finishing a chapter. I can fry tomatoes and scrambled eggs for you, and then tell you that they melt in your mouth. I'm speechless.

The supporting character is in his 20s and would be interesting to a one-year-old girl. One-year-old girls have long legs... It's hard to describe in one sentence 🤔 It's not easy to find a good book.

This novel is hard to describe in one sentence.

Death from poison😓

In all the novels I have read about becoming Oscar, almost all of them have two souls. I want to ask if you are afraid of forgetting Oscar's sixth soul skill. As long as it is an attack skill, it is almost always very strong. I am thinking that if you hunt for soul skills such as evolution, you will go sideways. The ability to control attributes is also very strong.

Don't criticize me, I'm just passing by

It's really embarrassing to watch. You wrote Xiao Wu, a hundred thousand year old soul beast, like an idiot. He is a hundred thousand year old soul beast after all, and he has lived for tens of thousands of years no matter how bad he is. After his transformation, you wrote him how embarrassing it is. If nothing else, you should respect the original character of Xiao Wu, otherwise you might as well write an original character

The heroine should still be Zhu Zhuqing. Otherwise, Tianshui College is also good. Xiao Wu doesn't want to dismantle it, Rongrong doesn't have to.

Are there Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong as the heroines?

Is this the end? What the hell? I thought it was just the beginning, but it turned out to be the end. . . . . .

The beginning of the writing is good, but why is it so messy and irrational at the end? You write it like this with a beginning, but no tail.

It's so confusing and I can't understand it. I pulled it out and my head hurts.

The author is pregnant with Oscar's baby😰😰😰

After reading six or seven chapters, I suffered from embarrassment five or six times, and the author wrote it without having read Douluo Dalu, and I was speechless.

Asking a four-year-old to wash dishes for a day is too much

After reading the catalog, Xiao Wu is pregnant with the protagonist's baby? ? Is it developing so fast?