National Role Model

Ah, what a magical author, he writes well! ! ! I haven't encountered a novel with this theme for a long time. It starts with Metamorphosis and slowly unfolds the story surrounding Yan Xu's growth as a young boy. I like the characters written by the author, they are vivid! Interesting! No greasy feeling! There is no big protagonist halo! The young man relied on his own mind and past life experiences to improve his family's predicament step by step. It was so exciting and inspiring to watch. Ahem, I spent three days fishing and two days posting nets, but I no longer have the perseverance. I admire Yan Xu more and more, and the children who are changing themselves also place their hopes on the young man. I want to change for the better. Come on! Me vs me. I also want to be bright and lively! Thank you for your work, love it!

Come on, author, a living person is born under your writing

I read twenty chapters of this novel and gave up. To be precise, I wanted to give up after reading Chapter 19! I really can't bear the thought of a malnourished eight-year-old second-grade primary school student defeating five gangsters with his bare hands. Even Ip Man didn't dare to write that! You must know that boys generally develop later, usually starting to develop rapidly at the age of eleven or twelve. This is why it is often seen that many girls in the first grade of junior high school are taller than boys! You let a underdeveloped child defeat five underdeveloped teenagers with his bare hands. Are you writing a fairy tale? In the first eighteen chapters, I thought I found a book of fairy herbs, but in chapter nineteen, a bottle of poison came, and it was the most poisonous Hedinghong! I consider myself to be pretty good at resisting poison, so I usually just ignore forced conflicts, but this bottle of Crane Crown Red caused me to die from the poison! Forgive me for writing so many words, but a good fairy grass suddenly turned into poison, and I came here to complain. I hope the author can pay attention to such issues and not be deviated from reality! It's a long way to go, see you later

I personally think Wang Lei's death was a failure. Please allow me to speak slowly. First of all, I really like this kind of little pretentious article that is refreshing and has a bit of positive energy in daily life. Second, the author's writing style is very good. It won't be too exaggerated, it's reasonable and orderly, and the causes and consequences are well arranged. He will not waste pen and ink on unnecessary things, nor will he ignore some small details that can tug at the heartstrings. The friendship of several children on a tricycle. The gift of rice balls. The strength and unity of people in the face of difficulties. The dilemmas written by the author here are not only the difficulties faced by human beings in social life, but also people's powerlessness in the face of natural disasters and their determination to unite and face difficulties. Third, it can be seen that the author is deliberately promoting positive energy. The protagonist of school bullying comes forward. During the earthquake, a friend in need is a friend indeed, and the kindness of the rich kids. Good things come to you in the Tang and Yuan lines. Grandpa Wang, the scavenger who has a correct outlook on life, Wang Lei, who lives a better and better life as long as he has the right attitude and never gives up, and so on. Then the poisonous point came. Flash flood pet savior, girl died. Lin's grandson is crooked and needs to be straightened, but there is no follow-up. Dad Wang stood up bravely, and Dad Wang died. Wang Lei changed his ways and made progress day by day. Wang Lei died. Wang Ma is a mistress and breaks up other people's families. It doesn't matter. Grandma Wang is also seriously ill. I just want to ask if the person surnamed Wang is the best author of the film, and everyone in the family will end well. Even if you don't follow up, when the protagonist becomes famous one day in the future and returns to his hometown, he will see a familiar ordinary man dotingly holding an ordinary child with a cat-like face eating ice cream. There is also an ordinary woman beside him with a happy smile and handed over a tissue, followed by a pair of ordinary old people. Sighing, that bad boy now has an ordinary but happy family! Just ask the author if he can't write like this! Isn't it the highlight? ! I don't know if there are any poisonous spots in the back. When I saw where Wang Lei died, I wasn't in the mood to watch. After looking at the catalog, the rest is just the protagonist pretending to move towards the Sunshine Avenue. Emotions have no future except for the protagonist, a poor kid. When the protagonist used Wang Lei's example to give a speech, I thought Wang Lei was a highlight. In the end, Zhou Yuelin reformed, but Wang Lei reformed and died. Although I know the author didn't mean that, the idea is that children from rich families are different from children from poor families. I hadn't noticed it at first, but after Wang Lei died, I thought about it and found that none of the people around the protagonist seemed to have children from poor families. I know the author wants to express that as long as you are good enough and work hard, everyone can fit into that circle. But I don't know whether the author wants to promote positive energy or spread negative energy. Because except for the protagonist, no child from a poor family seems to have succeeded. Even the kid surnamed Liu who was originally the protagonist's roommate didn't seem to have a simple life experience. The same goes for the protagonist's father, who could just throw away a million dollars. Me? ? ? . Once again, I stopped watching it after Wang Lei died. It was too poisonous. After looking at the table of contents at the back, I saw that apart from setting up a martyr foundation (which is also played by wealthy people), the rest is all about the protagonist showing off. So if the author later writes some other poor kid character who becomes famous, I don't know about it. That's it, goodbye.

Is this positive energy or negative energy? Rich children get better and better after reforming, while poor children die immediately after reforming. The rapist's father had to be whitewashed because he was good-looking At first I thought it was a fairy tale, but now when I look back and realize what the protagonist did, is it the official opening of "The Metamorphosis"? Everything is for the rich

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Test the poison. Let me tell you after reading dozens of chapters. 1. The main line is unclear. You should just go about your daily routine and become popular in variety shows, and then follow the main line and become a national role model. As a result, I went astray as I wrote. Inexplicable disasters and inexplicable times of school bullying. 2. The protagonist's life experience. Does the author know why there are so many Qidian orphanages? Because it's difficult to write about one's life experience, or I can't write well and just skip it. I have to write about what's special about my life experience, and it's written in such an incorrect way. However, there are still people in the comment section who have correct views and are convinced. The protagonist's mother was raped and then married the protagonist's father without calling the police because she was handsome. If you kill your parents to the point where you can't stand it, it will be so bloody. But the author insists on clearing his name. He is a scumbag who is a rapist, then ignores his family, lets his son starve to death, and allows the protagonist's soul to travel through. How else does he need to clear his name? He also spends a lot of time describing the appearance of the protagonist's father. Really top level understanding.

To be honest, the author is just an ordinary person. Reading some comments really affects the mood of coding. Sometimes you comment before you finish reading. Maybe you feel happy at the time, but the author really makes you doubt your life after reading it. The characters will always make sense when written, but just because the plot hasn't gotten there yet, it doesn't mean that the author is giving you a low word count. The author is really just an ordinary person who has to go bald every day just to code words and think about plots! ! It's impossible to take care of every aspect of every place, so the author accepts and corrects some small bugs, but you can't say that a certain plot is nt, right? ? ? As for the three views of thinking, individuals are different, so the author will not comment. Therefore, the author sometimes does not express opinions just because he does not want to spoil the story... He does not want to spoil the story! Alas, I have been holding it back for so long, so this is the end of the explanation. You won't bother to read any more. The author will not post a post to explain it to you later. After all, the author is afraid of spoilers if he says too much... I just ask you to be merciful, okay? ? ? ? Ps: In terms of updates, it will be released on the 1st, and it should be updated twice a day by then. The conditions for additional updates will also be announced at that time🐙

Chapter 189, Nobel Prize in Mathematics, I am embarrassed to see whether it can be changed. There is no Nobel Prize in mathematics.

He expressed that he does not accept the whitewashing of the protagonist's father. The more whitewashing he gets, the more disgusting he becomes. It's better to let him die early and be reincarnated. I support him very much.

The writing is good and the concept is good. There are just a lot of problems with the writing. The basic skills were not done well. For example, when I wrote that when the protagonist transferred to the Department of Mathematics, he actually wanted to win the Nobel Prize, it was an instant drama. There is no Nobel Prize in mathematics. The highest achievement is the Fitz Medal. The author saw it. Just go back and change it. To avoid being scolded, in the chapter three years later

After reading about twenty chapters, I would like to remind the author that school bullying is a civil case and is only subject to public security penalties, while robbery is a criminal case and will always be sentenced, even if it is only a dollar, and there are many types of robbery. If the victim sees a knife, even if the robber does not threaten with a knife, the penalty will be increased. So when writing about school bullying, don't add a robbery. If you are caught, you will be jailed for several years. Even if you get a bloody head or a knife in a fight, in most cases it is just a civil dispute, which can be mediated and is allowed to be handled privately. But if the robbery case is reported, there is no room for negotiation and we will kill you. The same as drug trafficking, evidence collection, prosecution and sentencing (don't give any reasons or excuses, this is the scope limited by the law, writing a book is not to take advantage of loopholes) So after saying so much, the plot of bullying and robbery is completely useless. Using the simplest logic, if the crime scene was photographed and publicized nationwide, does this count as a slap in the face of the local government? A criminal suspect has committed a predetermined crime. The evidence is conclusive, but the consequences are not dealt with. Can you be merciful to the law? On a small scale, this will only cause discredit to the local government and lead to differentiated treatment of stability maintenance work, but on a larger scale, it will shake the legal system of a country, and it will even be used to attack and smear by international politics. So it is not surprising that you are asked not to write in this way, and to harmonize in that way. It is entirely because the author is not sensitive enough and thinks that small plots are insignificant. However, these plots actually affect some readers of your works all the time.

C. With the character of a little genius, I only read junior high school knowledge in elementary school, and then I finished elementary school step by step without skipping a grade.

The main character's hometown is all tool people, none of them stand out. Today I watched almost half of it for free. Lin Yu, Lin Zhou, Wang Lei, and Tang Yuan are all tool people. Wang Lei doesn't have many roles. He was given a martyr role as soon as he was reformed. They are all poor and die after reforming. They have to drag their lives to death.

I have watched a program with a similar beginning to this one. I am also an orphan, raising a younger sister, from a poor household, and was also informed by the village chief to participate in the program, Metamorphosis, which is also a school, so I quit after reading two chapters

Great. I'm curious about Xiaoxu's future career line. I really hope that Xiaoxu will take the scientific research route. These young scientific researchers who are calm and talented are the hope of the country and the true national role models! !

The author's article is very well written, and his views are correct. It just wants to clear up that my father cannot accept it. Maybe I can't pass the test in my heart. No matter what his father has to hide, the protagonist's original life was starved to death. An 8-year-old child starved to death. How can I'm afraid that his father is an undercover agent and I can't accept it. It's too sad. Whether it's an uncle or a father, I don't know how they would feel if they knew that their child was dead or starved to death. I hope they know that their conscience will be condemned for the rest of their lives.

I vomited when I saw the description of the protagonist's father and the earthquake part. It started off okay, but became more and more toxic.

The writing is very good, very warm and great, but can you delete the scene where Ye Chuyi is the father of the protagonist? What Cao Sheng stuff? I feel disgusted when I see him. He is unfilial to his father and doesn't care about his son. The son starved to death for his sake. Don't ask me about any difficulties or follow-up plot. Just be patient. He is a disgusting character.

What the hell? You accidentally became a national role model. It's disgusting

The protagonist's father is really poisonous and can't eat anymore. Maybe he wanted to set the stage for something to happen later! The problem is that it feels a bit too long. From the second grade of elementary school to the first grade of high school, the foreshadowing is too long, and it is too disgusting and tiring. It's like someone told you to eat a shit and chew it slowly. After you finish eating, you may become immortal.

Why did you cut it? I raised it to death. Your three views are upright and there is nothing poisonous about it. Why did you cut it?

Well written. Two recommendation tickets will be sent to you every day.

😰😰 There is something wrong with this book... Is it sent to the wrong frequency... I read it with a strong sense of ecstasy... Can anyone tell me, so I can decide whether to continue reading...

Just save it and it'll be over? It's too fast, right?

Enter with caution, thinking it's a city, but in Chapter 48, you are suspected of becoming an urban cultivator

It's a very good book, with a good subject matter and well-drawn characters. Some of the plots are not very good, and there are some literary youth. The flaws do not hide the flaws. Overall, it is still a very good book. However, I personally feel that it is not suitable for catching up on updates. It is suitable for reading continuously when there are many chapters.

Personally, I think the character names are too Mary Sue. Except for Wang Lei's name, which is more normal, the others are getting more and more uncomfortable.

I started reading this book from the very beginning. It has been a long time since I read the book. I think this book is worth waiting for the author to update. It suddenly ended and I am a little bit in a bad mood. The author is about to start a new book. This is also good news. No one is perfect. I hope readers don't like to read it and don't affect our readers who love to read it.

I don't understand. Why is the introduction so awkward and unclear?