My Taoist Companion Is a Reborn Person

Chapter 46 is a bit unbearable. Is the heroine mentally cheating?

This plot of saving my mother almost made me vomit, and the self-destruction of cultivation in front was also a big poisonous point. With these two major blocking points together, I couldn't stop it, and Shen Nong retreated.

I'm convinced. As the plot writer of Chapter 46, you really figured it out. In a normal novel, the first female protagonist is controlled by the villain and attacks the male protagonist. She cheats on her mentally and almost has to pay for her burial with the villain. After her cheating on her mentally, there is no one left. I vomited.

Tui! Damn it, I shouldn't have any expectations for daily detox! ! ! ! Ntr, self-green, nt... Fuck! ! ! ! !

When I saw the comments, I had no intention of reading any more... The male and female protagonists are not pure, so what kind of emotions are they writing about? Is it possible that so many readers are looking for abuse? Looking for someone wearing a green m? Look at my ID, you can do BZ, but don't build a memorial arch!

It's extremely toxic, the female protagonist is a useless person who doesn't understand anything but pretends to be a boss, and the male protagonist is fooled like a fool. In Chapter 46, he died of poison and immediately fell in love with the two of them. Platinum didn't even dare to write this.

Is this a single female protagonist? This is called a female channel

It's best to read more readers' comments. If you post a sweet book and it's full of poisonous points, you'll get into trouble 😅

I thought it was a story about urban joy, but it is actually a story about urban displeasure. First of all, the first poisonous point at the beginning is not to mention anything else. I just don't understand why this kind of encounter is designed. You can accidentally fall off a cliff. I also specially designed a supporting character who looks similar to the protagonist. I thought this was the male protagonist at first. I didn't think much about reading it anymore, but the more I thought about it, the more wrong it became. Why was this secondary character designed? Is it to highlight the heroine's unforgettable feelings for the hero or his mental infidelity. The same goes for the subsequent plot. You don't have the money to rebuild, so you just rely on your body to kick others away. After rebuilding, you beat a few people and still use talismans. Did you set the body to be very weak, but later said that the first fight relied on the physical advantage after foundation building, which is inconsistent. It's only been ten chapters, and there are already a lot of problems. There are still eleven levels of Qi training. Do you still want to reach 3000 levels of Qi training? Let alone forcing the plot of Yang Guo and Little Dragon Girl. It seems that it is just to create a third party, cannon fodder, but don't show up in this way. I feel like vomiting when I look at it.

😍The protagonists in the book are all reflections of the author's life😍

It was poisoned to death. The protagonist was deceived by a woman, but he actually lost the cultivation that he had cultivated for a hundred years.

This is a bit extreme, but there is one thing that authors should pay attention to. If a new author wants to have readers for a long time, he still needs to have several elements. Don't force the book to overwhelm you. Many readers will not buy your book. Unless you are a great author, you will usually abandon the book if you don't like it. Many of your books forcefully add difficulties in order to highlight emotional difficulties. Secondly, don't forcefully add memes. Many readers are experienced readers. Some memes are annoying when they see them, such as the divorced engagement episode and the 30-year-old Hedong episode. This is especially true for you. You dare to add memes like Xiao Longnu's. The third point is more important. Basically, the death of a new writer is a cuckold plot. To be honest, your novel is walking on the edge of a knife. Although it cannot be said to be a complete cuckold plot, there are so many such plots.

Shen Nong died of poisoning. The author stopped writing because his eyes hurt.

Author, you need to understand one thing. This is a web text. What is a web text? It is the same toilet paper as a light novel. If you draw shit-yellow paintings on the toilet paper, how can others use it?

Good guy, this book is quite interesting. Two people develop in a single line. Broaden your horizons and broaden your horizons.

Chapter 46 is a fucking plot, I was confused when I saw it 😅😅😅

Thank you for trying the poison, ntr will die. Green people are better than green people. Mental cheating counts as cheating, right?

I really couldn't stand it anymore and vomited.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is pretty good for the time being~😁

Chapter 46 has already explained everything. The female protagonist is not very safe, and she is a bit arrogant. To the male protagonist, her hair is green, but she doesn't know what it looks like yet.

Are you afraid it's not Steel Marshmallow😜

Dong dong dong?

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