Tomb Robbers Check in from the Sand Sea

How to put it, I feel like the author wrote it simply for his own pleasure. He knew who was behind the Wang family or the villain. The protagonist risked his life to save it. Why do you want to make it so ambiguous when you say that he just wanted to save people? The six people who said the protagonist was the Virgin clearly didn't make a move when they died. Is this the Virgin bitch? This is obviously a simple lsp. And the one at the back said that there was a foreshadowing before and then he fell in love with Yi Lanfeng, and also said that I loved her very much. Did I read it wrong? It was only about ten chapters and it was all nonsense, and then suddenly I fell in love with her very much? Has the author written a female channel before? I saw Chapter 78 of Tomb Raiders and the love line was a mess. The reason why I say this is because the first copy was released and all T M was developed like a love line fan Of course this is my personal feeling. It is normal for this post to be deleted or scolded by trolls, because I cannot guarantee that everyone is a human being.

The author doesn't know how to segment, the protagonist is like a virgin

Some words to the author: 1. From the beginning, Wuxie was too intellectual, so I hope it will be enough. 2. The protagonist is too out of touch. A person in his thirties in his previous life suddenly becomes very funny? Hope it can be adjusted. 3. The protagonist's IQ is a bit low, so your sympathy is so overwhelming? Who said a few nice words to you and you thought you couldn't live up to them? . If you can change these points, no matter how bad your writing is, you will definitely get better grades than you do now. If the author is amusing himself, just pretend I didn't say it.

The protagonist does nothing serious and is scolded by the system all day long.

After reading fourteen chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer and Zhang Zhang persuaded me to quit.

The author's writing style is amazing. It's obviously a suspenseful adventure story, but it's forced to be a funny story. It's obviously a battle of wits and courage among the lybs, but it gives the impression that they are a group of mentally retarded people nagging at each other.

I think, when they were at the tomb in Shahai, President Zhang said to the male protagonist, "You look really similar," it should mean that you look like the Buddha. I personally feel that some people may ask why, because Zhang Rishan's tone was a bit respectful.

The self-talking system plus the intellectual protagonist... I spent half a chapter chatting with the system about the content of one chapter, and it was all useless nonsense... Extremely poisonous!

Author, I actually hope that there is no female protagonist in this book, because some people who write about tomb robbing have stories like yours, such as cool stories, why do you suddenly fall in love? The male protagonist is just preoccupied with falling in love and not pursuing a career or anything else.

Is there anyone who can write a book about Li Cu and I being classmates? Using this as a starting point, we can join the New Iron Triangle so that you can develop your own plot and enjoy various adventures. The old Audio-Technica occasionally makes a guest appearance. I believe many people would like to watch it. After all, the daily part of the Sha Hai TV series is also very interesting.

I saw an urban romance drama in a tomb robbing suspense book

I know some of you have objections to me. I admit that the plot in the middle was not very well written. I saw someone saying something bad about the protagonist, Our Lady of Mercy, etc. But what is a protagonist who has no emotion or humanity? A killing machine? The author can't write such a plot!

Luo Yun, is Yin Nanfeng planning to open a harem? It always feels awkward to have a harem in The Stealing Pen

What the hell? What is the logic of Chapter 1? I feel that the preface does not match the postscript. The author should think about it and change the first chapter.

What is the Feng Shui book rewarded by the system at the beginning for? From the beginning, you can see the protagonist pretending to be in the desert, but after it is over, he has never used it.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, but there aren't many flaws, just a few too many.

Typos, punctuation, sentence breaks. At first it looked okay, but later it felt like an urban idol drama. Take another look. I hope the author will read it himself after finishing it! ! !

,,, If you want to read fanfics, please give me some magic modifications. If you have magic modifications, why not create them?

I hope you can see what you are doing The author, I would like to make a suggestion, it is best to have a scene of listening to thunder later, and you can follow some of your own ideas later. Construct a tomb robbing link, such as some short stories you heard when you were a child, and then you construct a tomb robbing plot, such as a rural tomb or something. In short, these are my opinions. I hope it can help the author.

Ouch~Ouch!

I feel like the author should be in elementary school, right? What kind of thing is it written? The preface does not match the postscript!

Because the author's daily time is limited, there are two updates per day and three updates on weekends! Explanation on 11.23 ~ The third or fourth update will be tomorrow and the second update will be today!

The author couldn't stand the setting after reading three chapters. The thirty-year-old setting makes me think I'm fourteen or fifteen years old.

The number of chapters is wrong from that chapter, and readers may read it wrong at the starting point, but there is nothing wrong with the following content. The author apologizes and will revise everything in two days.

How disgusting. I can't stand it anymore. What is this? Why do you like to sweat so much? The emotional scenes are also inexplicable. Is the author's education a graduate of a kindergarten class?

It's still acceptable in the early stage. But over 50 chapters in, the book collapsed when Li Feng and Li Feng entered the secret passage at the same time. Whether it is fantasy or reality, both are written in a confusing way. Also, this tomb is a three-star difficulty, so there are only so many props flying around. It's poisonous anyway!

I wipe it? ? ? This is the end of the book

I also plan to subscribe to watch it together.

Read the latest chapter, the author's new book, Tomb Robbery from the Sand Sea to the Extreme Sea and Listening to Thunder, at 🍅

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.