My Name Is Luo Fu

The author's writing is passable and the plot is acceptable. Although there are no very intense scenes yet, it is still full of ups and downs. As for the characters, the dialogue at the beginning always feels very childish, but when they are a little more mature, they are better later on, and the details in a few places are pretty good. I don't have too many suggestions. Come on, the plot should be faster.

In the future plot, Rolf will definitely meet all kinds of people, some good and some bad. Now Bai Xiong wants to brainstorm ideas. If you have characters you want to write into the novel, please leave your valuable comments~ Maybe the characters you created will appear in the next chapter~

This is not a book review, so just read it. When I first wrote "My Name is Luo Fu", it was just because I made up a story for my classmate as a joke. After reading it, he said, "It's good. You can post it online." I thought about it and decided that it was not a bad idea, so I chose to publish it and continued to write it. Sometimes when I write, I bring my own emotions into it. Rather than bringing it in, I think it's more about the plot in my mind that affects me. I don't want to talk too much nonsense, and I don't point out how great the future of "My Name is Luo Fu" can be. I just want to continue writing and make everyone smile. At the same time, it can be regarded as perfecting the small world in my heart. I hope all readers will continue to pay attention to "My Name is Luo Fu". White Bear will continue to work hard to present better stories to you. Thank you all readers for sharing your feelings~

You must persist! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Okay, I'll add the bookshelf after reading the first two chapters.

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I'll give you a vote after I come to refuel, and I'll give you a card by the way ✌️

After reading the whole book, I like it very much, but I am not Ma Bijing. I like Luo Fu's character. He feels comfortable swearing at people, and his feelings are single-minded. Haha, I look forward to the follow-up story of getting together with my sister. The most glaring problem is the duplication of names. For example: Luofu... Luofu... Luofu... It is the beginning of the basic name of each paragraph. Come on White Bear, I am very optimistic about you, little Buddhist bear