Across the World of Heroes

I need to improve my writing skills. Just typos are annoying.

If you want to write Lin Pingzhi as a villain, just let him follow the old path. If you write it like this, I'm afraid it will be embarrassing. Lin Pingzhi has no grudges or grudges with the protagonist, and he looks down on him when he comes up. This is not the character of Lin Pingzhi in Swordsman.

Shen Lan hates hurting people with poison, and she only has less than 10 years to live. She doesn't want to owe anything to anyone and have any entanglement with anyone. She and the protagonist belong to the halo and have been trained to become seven-color poison, so she has no idea of ​​​​training Ah Zi. If she doesn't kill her, it's the end. Or do you want the protagonist to be the Virgin? The most disgusting things now are the Holy Mother and the licking dog, and the basic results will not be good. Over the years I have been reading, there have been very few books about killing Ah Zi. I don't know why I can kill other people easily, but I can't kill Ah Zi. Ah Zi's bad behavior is even worse than that of the Qingcheng faction, or does the protagonist want to be a licking dog? It is best for fan works not to change the characters of the original characters. Otherwise, you should be original. Don't be like the current IP dramas, which are selling dogs over others. The original Xiao Feng is not as powerful as Shen Lan, and Azi has not become better. Some character changes must be logical or self-justifying. Ah Zi is an incorrigible type. Knowing the character of Ah Zi in the original book, most people would either stay away or kill her. How can you save her? She will kill you many times! It's a mosquito, it can't bite you, but it always bites you and you don't want to get rid of it? That's a bit much to say, but the author still has ideas for what he wrote. To balance the combat settings, the integration of more than a dozen works requires careful consideration. However, it must not appear that the strength level in the original work has been established, and then the author randomly changed it. For example, Fei Bin and Ding Mian are completely opposite. Fei Bin is obviously not as strong as Ding Mian, and Ding Mian should be at the 7th level. Also, the protagonist and Songshan are already mortal enemies. The protagonist is from Huashan. He can't be like Linghu Chong and ignore his own sect. He doesn't kill Ding Mian when he has such a good opportunity? This is not about being arrogant, there are only a few villains, and there is nothing to write about after killing them. There are plenty of powerful forces and masters in the world, and I hope the protagonist will kill decisively. As for whether there is no heroine, one or more, or a harem, it doesn't matter. After all, there are people who like it, and it is not possible for everyone to be satisfied. The writing is logical and not idiotic. Shen Lan's writing is very good so far. Although it is a bit based on knights, it is better than many writings. The recommendation vote is given to you

For the sake of the Legend of Knights, please support me.

The pace is a bit fast, and the plot is not delicate and novel enough. Come on, author!

There are a lot of martial arts secrets in Legend of Knights, but it's basically not difficult to get them as long as you remember the locations.

Young man Gay Nie makes some arrangements

The protagonist is too passive. Knowing that he is seriously ill in the plot, he doesn't seek out the magic power in the original work? You don't look like someone who knows the plot at all, and you still fall out of the way. Seniors help you. This is the gold-type protagonist's routine. . . Travelers usually first find magical skills they can obtain, and then find other martial arts as their strength becomes stronger, and then go out to wander around.

She practiced Zhang Wuji's Nine Yang Magic Skill, took the Poison Scripture and Medicine Scripture he had hidden, and then found an excuse to steal the Great Shift of the World. Sure enough, she's a bitch.

The book is quite good, but why don't many people comment on it?

Chong Chong Chong

The author will update slowly. I will come back when I am fattened up.

The author has a bug. Lin Pingzhi is the same person as the old man who warded off evil spirits in Xia Qian. But now Lin Pingzhi is still a young man. What you are writing is now in the plot of Xia Qian. How does the old man ward off evil spirits appear?

Ever since I went down the mountain to search for medicine, the plot has been messed up. The Five Mountains dungeon has not ended yet, and I have opened a new map, and my combat power has collapsed. . .

Did the author play the prequel to Legend of Knights? This game tells the story of Dongfang Weiming's first three or four years as a disciple. (In the prequel, Thorn appears to be 16 years old when he appears. In Knight Rider, he can participate in the Youth Conference, and the age limit for the conference is 20 years old)

Are people stupid? How come the book is finished when it's so good?

Comprehensive martial arts is too difficult, writing about the heavens is easier.

I have the SS (Gentleman) version of Legend of Knights, so... Does anyone want it?

There are too many characters, and not many things can happen to one person in his lifetime.

A hammer in one place and a stick in the other is worse than a running account

Put some games in there, rubbish

I knew it would be like this. I could have easily obtained the magical book, but I still had to write a plot about becoming a disciple at Mount Huashan.

What I want to say is that while Lin Pingzhi was crying for his parents, these people were happily apprenticed here. What the author wrote was really magical.