Become a Boss from Super God

So who is the protagonist? Morning light or Zhao Jun

This guy is a little obsessed! 😡😡😡 In the last chapter of Cruel Heart, I felt that the protagonist was Zhao Jun, but at the beginning it was the angel Dawn, and in the middle there was the angel Breeze, which made my head look big 😡

In fact, Angel Morning Light and the others are the same person, which is similar to the relationship between clones and reincarnations. Also, I couldn't find the typo.

It's very confusing, and I don't know why the more I watch it, the more upset I feel, so I quit now.

I found that we may have different opinions on the anime "The Heroes of the Company", so I will tell you my opinions on "The Heroes of the Company" now. First, the matter of Kesha going offline is actually very strange. When the Angel Titan Soldier was fighting Morgana, Morgana would be absolutely cool if she moved it again. However, she insisted on saying that this control was not easy to use, and then changed it to Silver Wings. This was obviously giving Karl another chance to calculate her time. When she was on the Emerald Star, Not surprised at all, facing death calmly, and then He Xi, Kesha did not show any surprise or anger when she went offline. Even Kesha's sacred atoms were not impossible for her to assemble. Karl has a big clock, and I also have a space-based computing group and a treasure trove of sacred knowledge. It is not impossible to assemble Kesha.

The Thorton on Earth was built by Carl tens of thousands of years ago. He also built a large insect bridge on Pluto. Then the Super Seminary built a fighting Buddha Sun Wukong here. Dukao and other Descendants of Deno who wandered in the universe were also there. Under the guidance of the space principal Kieran, they came to the earth, and then the plot began. Dukao's army of soldiers gathered together urgently when the Taotie invaded. Not to mention that they allowed Liu Chuang to become a gangster. Ajie still recruited someone. It was a trick and abduction. If it was really for the sake of the earth, he would just send a notice and send someone to pick it up. He was completely tarnishing the country's image by doing this, and then the super technology research and development materials for the training of the Xiongbing Company were all tightly held. Then Taotie's attack on the earth is like playing house. Even if there are so many warships without weapons such as turbulence, it is enough to plow the earth with the flagship main gun. However, the restriction of this and that is purely to give experience to the heroic company. What the Super Seminary and Carl want is a fully grown galactic power. To help them explore the void, Taotie's attack on the earth was just a large-scale stage play. The only two people who were kept in the dark were Morgana and the earth. As for clearing Morgana's name, there was actually no need to clear her name. The universe was originally about the jungle, and the only great god who cared about the feelings of mortals was Kesha. There is only one really powerful person in the whole drama, Kesha. She is the ceiling of combat power in the super god universe. Her fall may be because she was tired and wanted to take a rest, or she was planning. After her fall, all kinds of monsters and monsters appeared, such as Hua Hua. Ye, she must have wanted to kill Hua Ye at the beginning, but for the sake of the overall situation, she had to choose to exile him. But now it is justifiable for him to jump out of Kesha and kill him. Kesha probably wanted to stand up and kill them all at the last moment.

It's too confusing, Chen Guang, Zhao Jun, these are unnecessary whether they are clones or incarnations. Morning Light didn't even mention it in the past 30,000 years. Will it just pop up in the future? Force it up to Yuan? Then Chen Guang is a time traveler, and he also understands the issue of his own life and death. The author does not describe Chen Guang's heart at all, and Zhao Jun is now a fool, waiting for his awakening. Then let's talk about Gou. The morning light will become stronger and his life will be extended. These will not happen and he will directly become Zhao Jun. The only useless foreshadowing is that of He Xi. To be honest, the book collapsed before you even wrote that.

To be honest, you might as well delete the identity of Chen Guang. What is the title of your book? After you wrote about Zhao Jun, readers basically thought that you were selling sheep over dogs. Chenguang is the main one. You used angels or humans as the main ones. If you write about both, you really can't control it.

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I don't understand. I can't even tell the difference between pig's feet.

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Then there is the Super Theological Seminary. Kieran's big clock Karl was simply stolen, and no one has come to trouble him. Who believes this? Then there are the three major god-making projects. The Super Theological Seminary built these three projects completely to use them as weapons to resist the ultimate fear. The real great gods did not start their careers in scientific research, and they have been doing it for tens of thousands of years, so Ge ​​Xiaolun and the others can only be used as weapons. We focus on the power of the Galaxy. When the Angels and the Super Seminary jointly launched the Galaxy Power project, the most critical anti-void technology came from the Super Seminary. Kesha added some improved male angel genes to it. It should be expected that when the Galaxy Power grows in the future, it will join the angels and give birth to male angels with an angel, so that the angel family can continue to multiply without accepting Hua Ye's gang.

Since you, a newbie, have chosen a fanfic, you should refer to other fanfics and look at more super god fanfics. There are quite a few time-traveling angels. You think your design is very good, but I want to say it is really boring. . I am a time traveler, why should I live like Zhao Jun? Forced? Have to? Or the design of Mingguang?

It was baffling to read, and the previous chapter could not be connected to the next one. I suggest you write it in more detail, or cut it out and start a new one.

Finish the book normally, this big guy talks about martial ethics! ! ! The profit after completing the capital is good.

To be honest, I didn't think about anything like an outline for this book. What I wrote was what would he do if a person really traveled through time, and what would the people in the original novel do. I just wrote it out like this.