Conquering the World of Demons

I can't stand it when I read Chapter 9. A man who is both skilled in martial arts and martial arts is not only the person with the highest martial arts value in the village, but also the patrol and security captain. Some mortal natives in the village ganged up to come to force him to marry him, but he cowardly gave in. You are the captain and not him. Our parents, everyone was in danger in that dangerous environment, and people died every day. Not to mention that after joining the patrol team, the salary increased, which of course increased the risk. In short, everyone was living by the waistband. Does the captain want to ensure that every team member is safe throughout his life? What nonsense, God can't guarantee it, and I already knew that it was the foreign vice-captain who was behind it, and he did it again and again, and yet he only threatened me with a few words. I'm so fucking sick. It's understandable that you are like this. You traveled from the earth. The people who come over don't know how to nip the threat in the bud. They are really idiots who have stayed in a peaceful environment for a long time. With this kind of mentality, no matter how big a cheat you are, you will still be an adou who can't help you. If you still want to cultivate and rise as an immortal in this weird and harsh environment, just daydream.

Bug I only saw Chapter 3 and there were a lot of bugs 1. The village is too big. It takes half an hour to run back to the village, and in a strange world, there is no lighting on the roadside Is there no land next to the village or something? When you go out so far, are you afraid that you will be too close to the village and cannot catch up? 2. Chapter 1 also introduced that the evil rain is so irregular anytime and anywhere. Ordinary people will get sick or die if it sticks to it. However, there is no shelter from the rain. Even if the aboriginal people cannot invent it, doesn't the protagonist know about time travel? Umbrellas, raincoats, even if there is no weirdness in building a house on the roadside, it is better than dying in the rain. There are still some small bugs that I won't go into one by one. The creativity is there, but the details and writing are not enough

There are too few of this kind of weird cultivating immortals. I just like the weirder ones. I have read the author's old books before and they are pretty good. Come on, try this one!

There is no market for Madonna novels. The biggest drawback of time-travel novels is actually the protagonist's will and attitude in the face of the earth's information explosion. Even if he is kind and indecisive, he will slowly change his attitude if he is tricked once. Those with strong inner ability will change immediately. There are so many people on the earth, China has more than 1 billion people, and good people are only a minority. In this world, there are only a few good people. Ordinary people are the most exposed to natural disasters and human sophistication. Ordinary people can change their ideas at any time due to external reasons. When reading novels, everyone puts themselves as the protagonists. If you write something so unnatural for normal people, the readers will feel it is outrageous. For example, if someone scolds you and troubles you behind the scenes, he will still be the same if you give him a warning. Fuck you, what's your mentality, especially the world you wrote about where human life is like grass and there is no legal restraint. So you don't just kill people directly. You have to see what the other party has done. If you don't teach a lesson or threaten your own life, just kill him. This is a normal person. If what you write doesn't resonate with the public, it won't be the same. In the eyes of most readers, people are now limited by laws and morals in peacetime. Human nature has been really evil in the face of disasters from ancient times to the present. I hope the author will look at the way of writing, and do not require dark literature to be a murderer. There is a bottom line in being a human being, not looking for trouble to harm others, and will not tolerate being bullied and framed by others. The Holy Virgin is really unacceptable

The problem was discovered in the first chapter. The plot starts with the evil rain coming. Since it has rained dozens of times in half a year, we should deal with it in a familiar way and not panic. But when we see everyone looking panicked, is it necessary to panic for such a common thing? Maybe the author wanted to create a scary atmosphere, but is it necessary? Fear comes from the unknown. Can things that are often seen still cause people to panic?

Everything else is easy to say, but I suggest changing the title of the book. Isn't this why it's called Sideways? I'm stupid, the best you can do is try to become a side sweep.

The writing is good, but there are many poisonous points. First of all, there are only a few Zhuangzi in a thousand miles, how can they support a city? If you don't have enough food, you kill people. There are only a few people in total, so you still kill them?

Never mind. Looking at your division of martial arts, I can't stand it. It's level one to level nine again, and there's no quality at all. With this kind of division, I can't even see the world's top martial artists.

I feel like my recent writing is better than before. The front part is a little immature, but the back part is getting smoother and smoother! The protagonist is becoming more and more mature!

Come on, just write according to your original intention, write the story you want to write, and don't be influenced by others, because novels are not RMB, and it is impossible for everyone to like it. As long as it can be liked by a small number of people, it is already amazing!