Hong Kong TV Series: I Want to Be a Tycoon

Without cultivation, if you write about Qi Practitioner, you won't have the desire to continue reading.

It's too mixed up and the main plot is unattractive.

The author is great, can you add two more heroines? One is Lan Jieying and the other is Ye Quanzhen. I just hope she can have a good outcome in the world of the novel. Don't be so sad

Fuck, I really remembered it. This book is about the main character selling skewers. The cost of the meat alone is only 1.5 Yuan, not counting the charcoal fire expenses. The final price is 2 yuan. Mark it.

It's very well written, come on, don't miss girls, don't give girls away, don't poison, the results will be very good after it is put on the shelves.

I was deceived. There are so many female protagonists in the role, but none of them are played. They are all ambiguous. I have to make up the number of words, and I have written a thousand chapters. In the middle, I have met more than ten or twenty women, and all of them are ambiguous. The protagonist eunuch is still the author eunuch.

This book is the best I have ever read among Hong Kong dramas. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has an online IQ, and has a very handsome personality. He has a strong sense of being a handsome boy. I would like to give you some suggestions. I hope the author can add photos of each character (especially the female character) in the Easter egg chapter. For the time being, I will give you 8 votes a day, so don't be a eunuch. The author has three books and is dead, which is a bit scary.

As a Cantonese, we don't talk about whether it's okay or not (I was so embarrassed that I got cancer). . If you are not proficient in Cantonese, it is actually not recommended to write in Cantonese. Otherwise, readers from non-Cantonese speaking areas will not be able to understand it, and those who understand Cantonese will find it embarrassing😓

No! Brother Jun is so disrespectful! The three heroines all have more hearts than him!

This is very good, the IQ is online, not so brainless, and the force value is also very good. Write quickly!

I would like to ask the author if he still remembers the title of the book? Is the focus of this book Hong Kong variety shows or tycoons? For Hong Kong TV shows, I suggest you change the name. Those who click here just to read Tycoon's articles will make you autistic. If you are a tycoon, I suggest you be more attentive and don't be too lazy. Just for the sake of the plot, you just skimp on the word count. Look at how many chapters of the magazine you prepared earlier. And why don't you use your skills and expertise to make money? Wouldn't this be easier to achieve? The secret to true success is to do something that you can do and be successful at. I don't know what you think about going to work for Salty Magazine? It's better to open a beauty shop than this. How many chapters were wasted in the early stage just to find the editor-in-chief? And the protagonist should have the qualities to succeed, otherwise how can he become a tycoon? Can a person who doesn't pay attention to time be successful? How much time did it take to go to school? Obviously self-study only takes a few days. Isn't it good that you can study by yourself and then pass the exam and continue studying to become a big star in a certain industry? Does a high school degree really help the protagonist that much? Or is it just for drama? I hope the author will think about it carefully and not just for the sake of trolling. I hope to see a masterpiece.

Read novels, not movies. The written words are usually read silently in Mandarin. Just write well in Mandarin. I am from Cantonese, but I don't want to read Cantonese words in novels. Reading in Mandarin is extremely awkward. Many Hong Kong variety shows are in Mandarin mixed with Cantonese. I can't read it at all, just write the plot well.

I want to see a tycoon rise! Fighting against the Hong Kong governor and foreign capital, the war of capital is so interesting, why not write about it? Secretly promoting the return of Hong Kong, this process must be tortuous and exciting! Now the protagonist is neither Young and Dangerous nor a policeman. However, there is too much space on Young and Dangerous and the Police, and there are even two chapters without the protagonist. The article is not written around the protagonist, and it is a rigid copy of the film and television plot, relying on other people's plots to drive your plot 🤔. Let's talk about another bad point: 1. Is it useful for the protagonist to enter middle school? Goldfinger is so powerful? It is a complete waste of time to go to school again (what to study? There is a golden finger that can know it at a glance)! The protagonist wastes seven years of his time for the so-called diploma. Only the poor would think of using their time, while the big guys are all about krypton gold!

Does Huo Wenyao know that there are some things in you that are exactly the same as that one? Just put on a vest

The author must have read this book all night after seeing the popularity of Hong Kong TV series. He saw that other books were either Young and Dangerous or The Police. In order to show the difference in this book, he spent half an hour thinking about positioning the protagonist as a businessman. Therefore, I didn't have time to write an outline, so the plot didn't have a main line, the supporting characters' IQs were horribly low, and the business plot only lasted a few chapters and was unbearable to look at! !

You want to be a tycoon all day long in school, participating in various police incidents as a citizen, but not doing anything to make money. If you like to be a policeman, just start as a policeman. If you have to say that you want to be a tycoon, you must also participate in various police and gangster plots

The author. . . Isn't he a tycoon? I think the protagonist plans to take the businessman route. Why has it become a police movie now? The protagonist is a lone hero who wants to save a school. . . I feel like I'm off topic. Continuing this kind of battle of wits and courage between cops and robbers is just like other Hong Kong TV series. . .

Who are you writing this for? Is it written for Hong Kong people? I have to go to hell with you. Please explain this Henan dialect to me. Do you still need to use Henan dialect when writing a history of the Song Dynasty? Who can understand?

Come on, author, you're reading well. I'll give you three tickets a day 😁

The Head of Jade Girl

Brother, are you kidding me? You have such a powerful golden finger, but look what you are doing? Making pornographic magazines? Don't you know how to read books? To be honest, I have read more than 100 chapters, and the skills I know are still the same. How long has it been for you, brother? How many months? I feel tired at most every day, so I have nothing to lose! Also, if you encounter a gunfight, your marksmanship is not good. When you are being chased and your driving skills are poor, how can you be so good at cheating? . You spend all your time being a hero and saving beauties!

The back part is okay, the grain and grass are worth a look

The author's idea is quite good. If you know how to arm yourself, it is best to learn some skills that can improve your mental strength and improve your younger brother's loyalty. Only in this way can you develop your own power and have control over your own power, so as not to collapse. I hope there will be more, and finally I will find a novel book that is not too cheap.

Is the description of the system in the opening plot so overly self-indulgent and illogical? ? The "black technology of the top student..." Next door is at least in line with normal logical thinking. The only thing you can reward for the "external" image here is: a brainless and logical self-made cane, right?

What the heck, the 🌶︎🐔 in 🌶︎🐔 has a golden finger for nothing. Any pig with this golden finger is a hundred times stronger than the protagonist.