
Dimensional Chat Group Starting from Naruto
从鸣人开始的次元聊天群
- Status
- Ongoing
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- 142k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's so fake. Your parents died when you were just born. Where did you get the emotion? Even if you are limited in time, you may not have feelings, let alone you know that they are not real people in the first place, not your biological father. What I mean is that you are a time traveler, and your feelings are different from the original characters. This is very clear, but you did not write it out. Actually, I think what you wrote is very interesting, but your emotional expression is a bit too overwhelming. I don't know if you're trying to make up for the words or something, but you still want to write the protagonist's emotions well, but it's not very good when you write it this way. Originally, the plot felt good and gave people a feeling that they wanted to watch it, but once you expressed your feelings, it gave people a very bad feeling and a very awkward feeling. It is also difficult to express your feelings after your parents died, because you will only feel a little uncomfortable when your parents die, but not particularly uncomfortable, because you have not lived together. There is no emotional basis, and there is nothing that makes you sad. This aspect of your writing is particularly unsuccessful. You didn't write down the reason why you were sad. If you only wrote about the death of your parents and it made you sad, then you would be too easily sad, you know? The Holy Mother's heart is easy to die, especially in the aspect of Ten Thousand Realms. You are particularly sad about someone who doesn't even have a life. So if your girlfriend dies, then shouldn't you become a black man? Don't you want to commit suicide? Don't you want to go with her? I'm not saying that the protagonist is a sacred object, I just want to express that you have no emotional basis, but you are so sad, and you are still sad after more than ten years. If you are living a hard life, no one cares about you, and you are not happy, then you may recall that if you had parents, you would be very happy, and you will be a little sad, but you will not be particularly sad. But the protagonist is very happy, he lives very happily alone, plus he has a girlfriend, he is very happy. Those women have been with him for a few years, at least for more than five years. Isn't it better than a person who died after meeting him once? And he's not his biological child. The protagonist is soul-piercing, so he's not his biological child. Anyway, when I saw the protagonist crying over this incident, I really didn't want to watch it. This is my point of view. It doesn't mean that I am ruthless or emotionless. I also have feelings. It's just that you, a person who has nothing to do with you, are so sad. Even if he gave birth to you, because after the erosion of time, it is impossible to be sad again. Not to mention you are having a great time during this time. This is just my personal opinion, but it is also a general opinion, because it is impossible for you to die for a stranger, and you will be very sad. This is impossible. It's equivalent to the fact that in reality very few people donate money to the poor because they don't have that much money. This is what most people think, but don't you even have a dollar to donate? In fact, most people think that he has nothing to do with me, and he will not repay me. Is it worth it for me to do it for him? I might as well go make some more money. A very realistic and real example, but this is reality. Isn't my money hard-earned? We also have hard-earned money. Just like the author, writing novels also requires his brain, and he also relies on his brain to make money.
Isn't Naruto with medium-short hair the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun? (ಥ㉨ಥ)
It's already 2021, and you've only updated this little. No wonder no one has read it, eunuch, eunuch.
Updates are too slow! 😡
Don't trust me or else
Um, you think Naruto's life is too wonderful. Naruto is the kind of person in the village who is yelled at by everyone. He is like a street rat. He eats expired food. The shops don't sell Naruto's things. Naruto has no money at all. The fourth generation's assets were confiscated by the third generation. How should I say what you wrote 😅
The author's idea is quite novel. It is true that some fan descriptions are too dark, and there are indeed many bugs in Naruto comics. But the third generation is indeed not that white. To put it simply, politicians are ruthless! No worse than the bad guys, how to suppress the pot king? The protagonist's golden finger is so powerful and he has confidence! Otherwise, cold violence in real life is really terrible. About the parent line, it's a bit false to say how deep the relationship is. After all, we are reborn with memories. The deep love for Kushina and her son is a bit exaggerated. What about the mother in the previous life? It is better to cultivate kindness than to give birth to kindness. In addition to the hard work of raising children, there is also the emotion that comes from the relationship. Without daily interaction, can you remember the touching moment of birth and have a deep relationship between mother and child? Of course, as their child, he must repay the favor and resurrect Minato Kushina in the future. Get along as a family again. As for White Fang, that is real-life cold violence, not a cyber keyboard warrior. And he knew the higher ups wanted him to die! Coupled with his dignity as a strong man, he had to die. The civilians in the village were whispering, and it was impossible for him to teach him a lesson, otherwise it would only arouse greater public opinion. I watched Bright Sword before, but it was said that part of the content was deleted later, and Li Yunlong committed suicide in the end. Think of Mr. Lao She and so on. The current Naruto routine is pretty good, and the comics are really interesting. However, the author has two versions, and the first update of the beast is too scary! ! ! I hope to see Kakashi and Obito finish the manga in 2020... It might be better for the heroine to be named Nohara.
Come on, Old Tang, you are the best
Old classmates show up. The sense of anticipation has dropped by at least half.
The harem is boring. Every girl in Hokage has her own insistence. You Long Ao God! Return to the harem
Well, what do you say? I beg the author not to wash it out and it will not be white. I feel that rather than washing it, it is better to say it is a number. Besides, this is written by you and I have also watched Nianghua Mingzuo? I just know that you are the one who set up this book. You just said that Po Tian was not well written and asked me not to read it. I also said that Itachi, who is such a fanboy, wouldn't have been torturing Sasuke to make him stronger if he hadn't been possessed by another god.
Hey (ºº ) Plant a picture and receive tens of millions
Don't be like Konoha all the time. I'm just reading novels. I'm not here to discuss the original manga with you. Why are you always using the original to add your own opinions? Is this book called "What do you think of Naruto Discussion Group"?
It's a slap in the face! The bright side profile says that he is definitely not an eunuch The dark side is already a eunuch
Didn't your profile say that you are definitely not an eunuch? There has been no update for more than two days. Is it a eunuch?
It's so confusing, there are so many characters in the novel that I barely recognize them. There are various public names that are hard to distinguish. It's better to write about more popular characters
After reading it, I found that a lot of the plot was just for the author's own enjoyment, and I didn't even understand what it was about. (") Also, when you join anime characters, you don't know many of them, okay?,, Criminally
I've read Chapter 27 and I want to ask a question. If a person from the prehistoric world gives a thousand-year ginseng to a group friend from the ordinary world in a group, and the received group member exchanges it for points, how will the points be calculated? Judging from its importance in different worlds, a thousand-year-old ginseng is useless in the ancient world, but it can be regarded as a priceless treasure in the ordinary world, right?
What did you write in the private server and it was removed from the shelves?