Fude Zhengshen in Xinshou Village

I have endured this for a long time. . . You are sure you want to write about the earth god. . . . Just an ordinary person. . . There is no B box.

The introduction was so strong, but not only was the protagonist one of the weakest, but in the sixth chapter a fellow character came to meet me, which made me dumbfounded.

A high-quality bedtime reading, relaxing and enjoyable, not abusive, no bitterness or hatred. Thank you for your investment and vote. ❤️

If you want to write about Tu Tu Gong, please use the traditional image of a kind-hearted old man. Growing up, I have been worshiping Tu Tu Gong every year. I can only accept this image. If you want to write about a handsome guy, please don't use the name of Tugong! I have no idea about your prank on Buddha and Bodhisattvas. But the Earth God has been my belief since I was a child, and I don't like to see other people writing random things.

What are you writing about? Waste of my time. Poison point novel, I will definitely vote for you in the poison point competition in the future.

The plot advances layer by layer and the atmosphere is full. It is quite interesting. I like it very much and have been reading it. I look forward to the follow-up.

Open a player ID solicitation post, with a name within seven characters (otherwise someone will say I am too short of a character count)

Entering the main story will be accelerated. The closed beta will start in Chapter 15, okay?

Character descriptions, scenery descriptions, and psychological descriptions are all good. As long as there is only one protagonist, even if there is one more person, from dialogue to action, the writing style is the same as a primary school student's composition, which is tasteless.

Your sword is too bad. Sooner or later, it will be used by others to kill the protagonist.

Eunuch is also a popular serial, is there no more books in Qidian?

Very well written

As a tribute to your pinned post, I will save it and read it. I hope you will do what you say.

What was written earlier is quite good! Keep going!

Why were so many chapters deleted?

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Let me give the author a review. Ignore the poisonous points and just read it. As for the poisonous and refreshing points, let me tell you slowly. First of all, when rescuing the first female player, you can throw the sword to the player. Secondly, the herbal monster is a bit too strong, and there is no need to write it so hard. After all, there should not be such a strong one in your previous article introduction and in the actual game. Even if it is strong, it will be more fun for the female player to pick up your sword to chop melons and vegetables. Third, in order to introduce the Taoist priest and expand the grand world view, the evil cultivator who killed three corpses and became a saint was forcibly killed by the previous session. This is not a poisonous point. The poisonous point is that it did not clearly explain how strong the Taoist priest was! ! ! The action and idea of ​​snatching the corpse of the immortal is very low, and the escape of the weak painted-skinned ghost. Remember, it is a weak ghost, and there should be no role for him later. There are no other major poisonous points, but it is still a bit incoherent. For example, in this novel, you do not have a main quest, such as the main quest of becoming a god with incense. Then you have to make fun of players and help you rule the world to spread the word, and main line two, use small plots such as making fun of players to create exciting points, directly promote different worlds, and then focus on the real world to develop small plots. Finally, main line one and main line two use a common later plot to break through multiple parallel universes and rush into the mythical era to write the world view and the essence of the world you want to develop. I hope your second book will be of this type. It is well written but the plot advances too fast. The protagonist or supporting characters should have some small plots and interactions, and don't pop out too many supporting characters at once. After all, words limit the wonderful story. The supporting characters with distinctive characters are gradually introduced according to the plot advancement or timeline distribution. The group portraits pay attention to the order of appearance and one or two sentences from time to time. Humor is important! ! !