Red Soul of Online Games

When I read all the updated chapters and wanted to give a reward, I found that the book had not yet been signed, which was a bit surprising! So I went back and read the previous chapters again and found some problems. I point them out here and hope the author can refer to them. If what is said is wrong, I hope the author will not worry about it! First, when signing a contract, the editor will only read your three golden chapters rather than the full text. However, the author's first three chapters are indeed not very outstanding. This may be the main reason why the contract was not signed! Second, it is also a problem with the first few chapters. The front is a bit confusing. I saw the author explaining in many places that major changes were made because the chapters were blocked. Since it has been changed, why not completely change the front so that others will not be so confused. I believe the author can do it! Third, the description of the characters is really good and vivid, but it is a bit too much. Few readers will read your character description. Regarding this aspect, I prefer your later writing method. It is mentioned in a few sentences and it is well written and impressive! If the author thinks I'm right, please refer to it. If I'm wrong, don't be angry. This book is really better than many works on the shelves. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will keep pursuing the book until the author completes it! Author, come on

What a great book! The characterization and storyline are both good!

I think what you said downstairs is good. I think your writing style is not bad, but the beginning of your book is a bit confusing. The back part is okay, but it always feels like it is about to collapse. I have been following it. I hope the author can finish it.

The plot is very good, and the halo of the protagonist has been balanced. There is no longer a feeling of collapse. It is very interesting.

The book is very good. I glanced at it accidentally and read more than ten chapters without knowing it!

I'm getting more and more aware of it, and I would like to suggest that when writing sub-plots, don't deviate too far from the main plot.

You have to read a few chapters to get a feel for this book. It's a slow-burning type. The more I read, the more I want to read it. I'm still following it, so I won't comment yet.

The book is very good. I have collected it and will continue to pay attention.

How can I put it, it's okay, there are too few chapters at the moment, come on! I'll come back to see you when you read a few more chapters!

The character description and plot are good. The author should have put a lot of effort into it, but the combat power in the early stage is a bit high. I hope it will not collapse in the middle and later stages. It is a good book and worth recommending.

The equipment of Ghost Seal is too powerful and appears too early in the article. It should be difficult for the author to write in the middle and late stages. The numbers that appear should be very large. It would be perfect if this equipment appears after the second turn. Overall, it's very good. It's my favorite style. I will continue to support it. I hope the author will persevere until the book is completed!

This system world is the real world of a certain planet

Thank you friends for your continued support. Without you, I might not have been able to persevere now. Thank you! I also hope that you can point out all the shortcomings in my book, no matter the description, characters, plots, scenes, sentences, typos, etc., Give me your comments. I will listen to my teachings with an open mind and make further improvements. In the next few days, I will make some changes to the first few chapters, so there may be one less chapter in the update. I would like to apologize in advance, and normal updates will resume after the previous changes are made. Thank you for your support! Thanks

Dear readers, please savor it carefully, this is the result of hard work and time. Okay, what am I, a bit like... Tuo. However, this book is impressive. It's best for you to take a look first.

Thank you all for your continued support. Please point out any shortcomings. I will listen and be taught with an open mind. Thank you again!

La la la, happy new year💞Happy new year~

Now that it's over, it's time to say goodbye for the last time. It's fate that we met each other. Then I wish you success in your future work and a successful career! The future is ultimately very long. I believe you will always succeed if you keep going. Come on! You who live!

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