The Strongest Individual Among All-Time Masters

No, don't be a scumbag to Su Mucheng. After all, Su Mucheng and the protagonist had an eight-year relationship gap. It was normal that they didn't have such a tacit understanding with Ye Xiu. But now that the protagonist and Su Mucheng are together, they have a deep relationship, and their tacit understanding can be continuously cultivated! Every time I watch the interaction between the protagonist and Mucheng, I feel very sweet! And I think Huang Shaotian will continue to work hard and break through himself for Yue Lan, whom he loves most in his heart! Achieve the best version of yourself! It was also very touching to finally move Yue Lan! The most important thing is that you, the author, write very well in terms of fighting, with a little bit of emotion, and occasionally give out some sweets, and I am very satisfied! (´∀｀)♡! ! ! The author must have confidence! Never be a eunuch! It was hard for me to watch genuine copies before, and I was used to watching pirated copies! You are one of the few genuine ones I am chasing after! Come on ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з, it doesn't matter if you write slower! Take care of your body! ! ! After all, only if you are in good health can you give us more excellent works! ! ! !

This book has been on my bookshelf for a long time. Because the author's updates are unstable, I have only read it now. Let's evaluate it. Fan works are rooted in the original work, so it is inevitable that there is no plot connected with the original work. Most fan works imitate the original work too much in the process of designing the second version, which leads to readers thinking that it is not as good as reading the original work, or it may violate the original work and make it difficult for readers to accept. The author's second plot is reasonable, unique and novel and consistent with the original work. It reminds me of the passion for e-sports when I read "The Master" from a new perspective. From the plot, it can be seen that the author has paid great attention to the description of Ye Xiu (the protagonist of the original work) and Chu Xingmo (the protagonist of this book) in a generally decent manner, and does not let Ye Xiu's character collapse while highlighting the halo of the protagonist. But I think there are still some shortcomings. Zhongzong is an online article written ten years ago. The writing style and plot are different from the current popular online articles. As a result, some places I read are boring and soulless. Also, the beginning of the work is boring and boring, making it difficult for impatient readers to follow it. It would also be better if it could be updated stably. Finally, I am looking forward to the author's follow-up performance and wish this fanfic can have gratifying results.

Please update quickly, there has been no update for three days

There is a problem. Some people may think that the hand speed for playing games is the same as the hand speed for typing. Even if you don't understand the game but your hand speed is fast enough, you can easily become a master. But anyone who has actually played competitive games knows that these are basically two concepts. My sister's typing speed is top-notch. She can type a full screen of words in the time it takes me to type a sentence. But when we were playing StarCraft, she only sent out five soldiers when I put my tank in front of her door. So what I want to say is that whether you are a master of a game depends on your familiarity with that game. No matter how fast you are and you are not familiar with the game, you will not know when to press which button.

Why don't you like harems? That's because those authors don't have enough writing skills and don't portray the characters well enough. If they are really great authors, they will make you feel that it would be a pity to give up on anyone!

Yuelan can accept it, after all, it is an original work. One of the two female protagonists is an original work, and it is good to be original. Or you can learn from the original work of Ye Xiu and Mucheng (I remember that the two of them did not clearly indicate their relationship in the original work). But if you write a bloody plot about giving away a daughter or turning against each other... I will let you see what the Reality Key Saint Huang Shaotian is like...

A blind guess, Chu Xingmo is Chu Yunxiu's brother or younger brother

If it is a single female protagonist, can you not describe Xia Ming so much before the female supporting role? Now Yue Lan has clearly expressed her affection for the male protagonist, so it feels like NTR 😥

Does anyone know how to do anti-virus? What should I do if I can't turn off this virus on my computer?

Why write the emotional line between Yue Lan and Huang Shaotian? I wrote before that Yue Lan will not like anyone else except the male protagonist. Even if Yue Lan is not the heroine, she still has to forcefully find a new wife? And you already have feelings after only communicating for 1 month? Love is not established so quickly as friendship?

I'm not asking too much anymore. I'll be satisfied if I finish writing about this competition, finish writing about Su Muchiu and the protagonists, and let the protagonist marry Su Mucheng.

I would like to make a suggestion, downplay Yue Lan. Since she has clearly rejected it, she has let it go, but writing this Huang Shaotian has an NTR feel, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable.

I heard that there was a gift girl, so I stopped watching it.

Let me talk about my opinions on this book. First of all, there is no problem with the author's writing and plot. The most important thing is about Yuelan. As Benzo's original character and she has emotional foundation for the protagonist, it is not necessary to give her away. Giving away will not only make the creation of this character meaningless, but also persuade many people to quit. If a good book persuades people to quit for this reason, it is really worse than a dog. So how to solve this problem? The first is Xuezang, but I won't mention this character (if I don't write about the World Championship), what if I need to write about the World? My suggestion is to either have a harem (I know many people think this is a modern urban novel, how can a harem work, but in fact, there are also successful cases of writing about harems in modern novels, such as League of Legends: Unparalleled, this book is also a competitive novel, but because the author's character portrayal is excellent, many readers will be uncomfortable without a harem), or not write a shocking plot. The above are some of my opinions on this book, thank you!

Canghai, blue and white, three-pointed two-edged gun... Sorry, I think of my childhood that is still being updated now

I also asked the author before if he would give it to a female author, and he said no, but the writing is hard to tell 😒

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel very good and have a strong sense of involvement. I think the heroine Su Mucheng is very good. I suggest not to change it, and of course not to have a harem. It would be very poisonous to change it suddenly 🙂

Take Yue Lan, you really see me stupid, this emotional line, you can take it, if Huang Shaotian really takes it, I will give up the book directly

I can't continue writing this book, so I might as well finish this competition, and then explain what happened after Su Muchiu wakes up, and then jump to the marriage between the male protagonist and Su Mucheng, and finish it directly. I don't expect the author to write much more, I will be satisfied just to see the male protagonist and the female protagonist get married.

In the book, the best destination for Yue Lan is that she has no destination in the end, just like the white moonlight.

It's a bit uncomfortable to give away the original character with such depth! 😅

Collect all Tang Rou and Yue Lan, right?

More updates, I love watching it 😍😍

Why haven't you written for so long? I must give you some news 😡

If I don't write it down, I'll give you a message anyway.

Update🤫

Ahhhhh, when will it be updated?

I really hate the idea of ​​self-created characters. I read fan fiction just to see the aboriginal people. I really don't understand why they have to create a bunch of self-made characters. Just the introduction of a master, a mother, and a jade pendant at the beginning is really boring. Competitive novels are still mainly about competition. At most, adding some emotional lines with the original female characters will sound very comfortable. Adding a bunch of self-created things will only make people sound very tired, especially the part about Yue Lan. I don't understand why it was written like this on purpose.