Build a Planet from Scratch

The writing style is good, but the writing is not very careful. There are always some typos. My dear, the name of the protagonist is wrong. There are also chapters 11 and 12, which are repeated chapters.

This book is okay from the perspective of cities and games. Don't look at it with a behind-the-scenes mentality.

The writing is good, but a little lacking 🤫

This title reminds me of a book on my bookshelf🤔

Do you want to end it personally? Did 30 Zhang say he wanted to end it in person? Is it true? Once I end up, I guarantee that I won't be far away from Liangliang.

You haven't written any plot expressions of shock, doubt, surprise, fear, unknown, etc., So it feels a little flat.

The planet is better as a virtual game, as long as the consciousness is over. Rape can be done by both men and women. The laws of the planet set it to be more difficult and punishable for men.