The Dark Wizard in the American Comic World

When I saw that Chapter 4 was about to trade a time turner with SHIELD, I was immediately discouraged from doing so.

There are so many people who come to Marvel to write about magic. Some people feel that it is not good to borrow power from demons, and some use other systems. Why has no one thought of following the example of Vatum (one of the eight demons) and Dormammu, who directly occupies a magical dimension and transforms from a debtor to a moneylender? Although there are countless strong demons, there are also weak characters like Agamon who are on par with the newly debuted Strange. It is not a big deal to grab a magical dimension with a little level 😁

Author, do you know that all magic in Marvel is borrowed and comes with a price, whether it is white magic or black magic. They are all borrowed from the Dimension Demon.

The protagonist said that his power comes from his bloodline, but you are reincarnated. Could it be that you still have the bloodline from your previous life? The Marvel world doesn't have that kind of blood.

After watching the protagonist take off Snape's pants, I had no choice but to abandon the book. No matter what happens behind you, there is this poisonous spot in front of you, and it is extremely poisonous.

It is commendable that the author can write about school violence in this form. This is the first time I have seen a Harry Potter fan writing like this. Is it to express the chaos that has existed since ancient times and make it funny?😒🥱

There is really no sense of involvement. This kind of opening is to save the world. It is really boring to join Serpent and Shield and be treated like a dog. The work of an agent is not very good. You are a wizard and just steal an infinity stone to study it or increase your strength. Although this is cliche to Thanos, it is still worth watching.

What is the role of Su Manman? The protagonist doesn't look like a dark wizard at all? The character of Su Manman is outrageous. I read more than ten chapters in a row, and Su Manman was always the BB protagonist. Fake dark wizard: The whole Su Manman goes home to let her BB Real dark wizard: direct control

I have traveled through time, and I think that even though the Avengers are unreliable and SHIELD has limited containment, I am still reliable. Relying on the power of plot and magic, I feel that I can compete with Zisha 50-50. So, the first step is to plan to be discovered by SHIELD and join the Avengers. As long as I lick them, no, as long as I treat them well, then I am victorious. ... The writing is too messy! Moreover, the dozen or so chapters are awkward and bloody. You could just show off your patron saint spell and join the church and become a saint.

I still feel that the protagonist's first transaction was too much of a loss and seriously unequal, and the protagonist at least imposed a limit on the number of uses. It seems that the protagonist made a transaction, but in fact he became a cheap worker, the kind of person who spits out gold for the minimum wage, which is very awkward.

It's really rare to have such a devilish opening. It starts with the commendable school bullying and the Archmage Kama Taj who kneels down and licks the Aegis. Such a superb protagonist is really amazing.

I've read Chapter 18 and can't stand it any longer. There are a lot of things that I don't feel connected to, and I don't like them. Goodbye!

The plot is messy and used for bad taste. It may not be suitable for such a brainless plot. I'll give it up.

Not to mention how toxic it is, the key is that I don't have enough IQ, and the plot design is similar to that of an elementary school student author!

Since you are a dark wizard, why don't you be ruthless? Aren't the dark wizards who are half-Mother but not Virgin like they are capable of abandoning everything for their own benefit? ? ? ? If you don't know how to write novels like Gu Zhenren's "The Way of the Infinite Demon", okay? ? How many people has the protagonist killed for his own benefit? ? ? In this novel of yours, if you want to kill everyone for your own benefit, you have to leave a mark on it. If you want to find a doctor to do experiments on yourself, you have to go around? You mean? You are a dark wizard and you still have the Oblivion Curse. Wouldn't it be better to just kill people? ? ? I'm not an anti-social character. It's just that the title of your book is The Dark Wizard. Should a dark wizard kill countless people for his own sake? ? If you don't have emotions, you still have the nerve to call yourself a villain if you have emotions? ? Isn't it that we read your book because the title says "Dark Wizard"? What we want to see is a selfish, cold-blooded, and cruel protagonist who is not half a virgin or not a virgin. If you don't know how to write, just read the post. Dark novels. Can't you learn it yourself? ?

I was confused when I saw the time turner was given to SHIELD, so I said goodbye.

In the first chapter, he made fun of school violence, persuaded him to quit, and said goodbye.

I have read this book several times, and each time I took off my pants in the first chapter to persuade me to quit.

I thought it was pretty good at first, but then someone named Su came and the whole painting style suddenly changed, as did the writing style. It's like not walking on a nice flat road, but turning into a ditch without thinking about it. The character design of the Dark Wizard is quite good, why should it be ruined?

The character of Su Manman is a bit poisonous. A protagonist who has lived for decades and kills without blinking an eye will be reluctant to part with a stranger he has known for a few days. He should also have a tougher attitude towards vampires. If he still contacts vampires to make peace when he is already invincible, if there is a conflict with your protagonist's Dark Lord character, it should be the vampire who kills you who takes the initiative to contact you to compensate you, rather than you taking the initiative to contact the vampire.

You really want to write whatever you want, regardless of the readers' feelings. Marvel's logic is already messed up, and you still make the protagonist act illogically. Come on author, I dodge first.