Yun Zhao's Immortal Cultivation Biography

Little cutie, here I come, recommend it! Brief review introduction: The introduction is a bit too long and a bit procrastinating, but the story of the female cultivator is still quite interesting. You can refine it so that readers can see what you are going to write at a glance. Come on. Brief comments on the first three chapters: The writing is smooth and the rhythm is okay. There are no major problems overall. Just write for the first time so that readers can understand it. Then you can practice and practice. Don't worry too much about investment. Don't put too much pressure on yourself when writing well. I have been here, so I know that being pushed all the time will cause writing fatigue. You must have your own opinions and don't be afraid of criticism. Come on!

In fact, the writing is pretty good, including the choice of words and sentences, and the dialogue between the characters. It's the title of the book that really holds me back.

Great work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Learn, learn! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

I received the news that the signing was successful today, and I was very touched! This is a day worth remembering! I was under a lot of pressure when I started writing the book, and I hope I can keep at it! This is the first step of the dream, and I hope there will be a second step, and a third step... "The Legend of Yun Zhao Xiu Xian" is waiting for me to grow up with you!

The investment requirements are not high, at least the book is ready to be published, and it will be a eunuch if it is not tens of thousands of words.

Soldiers in "Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" love to learn and have collected the book permanently. Come on 🤝

Collect! Come on! "Sanghi without Pupils"

It was the first time the author wrote an article and it was quite good. The writing was smooth and the plot was pretty good. Everyone's discussion at the beginning was just like that, creating suspense and attracting attention. However, it should be noted that since it is an ancient background, the wording and sentences must be carefully grasped and refined. To put it bluntly, it is biased towards ancient times. In addition, the characters are all self-imagined by the readers, but the author also guides the direction. Important characters can have appropriate appearance descriptions when they appear. In addition, pay attention to the role of environmental descriptions in setting off the atmosphere. Come on⊙▽⊙

Author Jun, from now on I will give you my female channel vote, and you will give me your male channel vote, is it okay? I have two numbers, give them both to you

I want to watch female videos about relationships and sadomasochism. The author should write it quickly.

Is it about cultivating immortality or about romance?