In the End of the World, I Became an Immortal

The situation has become smaller. Let's just knock Leng Mei out and feed it to the zombies. Now that she has become black, she even engages in self-mutilation to attract the zombies.

After reading Chapter 8, I expressed that I hate the so-called "Holy Father" brother. I would like to ask if the brother will change in the future, or will he be a dog leader? Will he continue to implicate the heroine? If he is still like this, it will be really annoying, and it will affect my perception very much. I don't want to see the heroine surrounded by someone who can harm her so much.

This brother made me laugh out loud, he was really awesome. I'm really, really angry and shaking all over. Please, author, stop messing with me.

I have only read the first five chapters so far. If I don't talk about the rest, let me talk about my thoughts after reading these five chapters. 1. How much the heroine's brother lacks love. He is still used to this kind of wife, but she and the heroine's brother are willing to fight and suffer. If this is a normal world, the end of the world is coming. 2. The heroine saw her sister-in-law having sex with her fiancé in her previous life, and she still believed their words. Is she stupid? Doesn't the heroine feel resentful in her heart? This is not a sister-in-law literature scene, okay, let's skip this. 3. I feel that the heroine is suffocating after being reborn, which is understandable. However, the description is a bit difficult to describe in one sentence. There are too many descriptions of appearance, and it is a bit repetitive. The writing style needs to be strengthened. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Let's not talk about the rationality of the plot, it's just between people. The author must be around 20 years old.

Come on. If the signing is successful, I will give you 6 recommendation votes every day.

The ideas are good, but the plot development and foreshadowing are a bit lacking. There are many plots that make people want to complain. The framework feels very big. The apocalyptic plane is connected to the immortal cultivation plane. I don't know if the author can control it.

It's on the shelves. Please support

Is the heroine broad-minded enough, or does Si Kong Yue have an invisibility buff? What a pig. The teammates have caused so many plots, they are so annoying.

This subject is difficult to write about. Don't be too repetitive. Many people follow this routine.

The writing was not good at the beginning, but it got better and better later on.

The plot is good, but I feel like the writing is lacking in some places. . . , Poor experience. The author also needs to read more novels. But this is the author's second book. It's very good. Keep up the good work and make progress every day.

How about giving me an extra finesse arrangement🐶

I haven't read this book, but some people say it has no cp. If you are willing, you can give it a try and then post a reliable book review.

Nice! ! ! Cui Geng! ! 😁