The Cross-Border King of Entertainment

Ah! Ocean, you are all water! Goldfinger is fake! The plot is also procrastinating, 200 chapters have not yet been revealed, and even the singing skills are still amateurish... It's still in the water! Not to mention the writing style, even if you have a running account, you should write a good article! If I had known earlier, I would have subscribed chapter by chapter! What a waste of money!

How can I put it, the subject matter is okay, but the plot is a bit dragged out. The author's identity is like hiding something from others, just like a thief, hiding this and that. Your parents also kept it secret, did you steal the atomic bomb? Or robbed a bank?

Tang Yu

Let me share my personal opinion and ask, is the song "Dragon Fist" really that good? I have been writing about how good Dragon Fist is before. If I hadn't read the novel, I wouldn't have known about this song. Personally, I feel that if Jay Chou hadn't written this song, it would probably be even less popular. I don't understand what's so good about this song.

I really hate the idea of ​​giving songs to others, it's simply too much. The most outrageous thing is giving songs to people you don't know, just to please your girlfriend and be generous to others. As expected, people are just cheaters, and they won't cherish anything they get too easily.

Chapter 17. . . There is no need to write Zhu Xian by yourself to sing songs to attract votes. The reason is that you want fairness! Brother, is it fair to others that you bring your own system? Is it fair to say that people need to practice hard and you only need to take pictures of skill books? What the hell kind of explanation is this? I thought it was an ordinary copycat novel until I reached chapter 17, but the result was sudden. . . Give me a carbine

The protagonist is hypocritical, which is probably a common problem in rebirth novels. On the one hand, he owes favors to everyone for fame, and at the same time, he is secretive about his identity as a writer. It is really contradictory. Also, do you really find the song Dragon Fist burning? How many people would agree with this kind of song without the nunchaku background? Insufficient sense of immersion.

Yunfeng

The introduction can be changed, it does not match the content. The plot is too bland, and those who didn't know it thought it was a pension story. Even if you write it plainly, it is not attractive enough. It seems that your early book reviews are not proportional to your later book reviews. I don't know that it didn't increase but decreased. Of course, it may also be a problem that no one has subscribed during the two-day limited period. Let me give you some suggestions. The plot can be written in a funny way, otherwise the current bland plot will have no attractive highlights. Although it started with online articles, those are all online articles, so there is no need to chase after them. The system's capabilities are too low and need to be modified and increased. Normally speaking, more than 200 chapters can completely spread the stage to write. As a result, you just left Novice Village. The plot is too slow and does not unfold the plot at all to attract people. Even after reading more than a hundred chapters, I was ready to stop reading. Add more highlights, otherwise you'll have to take pills

New book seedlings need everyone's care, collection, recommendation, reward... The more the merrier.

For example, novels, songs, movies, TV series, comics and animations that you want to appear in. 🥺 In addition, there are lyrics. I am not in this business, so the writing is very poor.

This is not a song you wrote. I hate people who hold treasures from another world and don't care for them. It's too much for you to give away the work that other musicians have put their efforts into at a cheap price.

To be honest, those who like to play piano in novels, I am also drunk. It is good to know the names of those songs and listen to them once. Why should this kind of content always be included as part of the main content?

It's really good-looking, and even those with low poison resistance can safely eat it.

I saw Chapter 70. Isn't that too greedy? You have to sing the invisible wings by yourself? Wings of Steel? The invisible wings of a man are speechless╯╰

At the end of the chapter, there is an advertising video. If you watch it for 15 seconds, you can get 10 starting points. First step Second step

Isn't your introduction contradictory? After reading the introduction, I don't want to read the text.

I gave up after seeing Chapter 80. After Chapter 60, it's almost all about one glance and ten lines. The writing is actually pretty good (it could have been used as fodder). It was originally planned to be fun later (the Dragon Fist part), but then it was killed? ? ? Getting second place... How does it feel? (It suddenly made me feel that this is definitely not a protagonist) I suddenly became very irritable when I was neither up nor down. Later, I wrote that I wanted to sing invisible wings... I suddenly accepted my incompetence.

Why does it get worse as the writing goes on? ? ? The front ones are all pretty good looking. The author should be careful and don't talk too much!

You've read almost two hundred chapters and haven't really made your debut yet? ? Flashed

The heroine has such no sense of existence that I haven't even seen her during the summer vacation. It's better not to write about it.

This is one of my favorite entertainment stories. The heroine's role is a little small and could be increased appropriately. There is also no clear explanation of the protagonist's assets. The protagonist should be able to accumulate capital quickly.

The further back, the better

Finished with flowers🤭

Passing by, taking a bubble (￣o￣) . Z Z

It seems that it is out of stock. One update is made every day. I don't know if it is short and concise! !