The Lazy Immortal

A trip to Mount Hua led Fang Munan to inherit the legacy of Chen Tuan, the Sleeping Immortal. While others toil at cultivation, all he has to do is sleep. A lazybones’ tale of cultivating to immortality: laze around, sleep, and become an immortal with ease. Some readers said the blurb wasn’t good. The previous one was too short, just a single sentence. I thought so too, and kept meaning to change it, but I was always too lazy. I finally revised it today. What do you think?